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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: firefly99

You have very good writing abilities and u have done excellent job.Keep doing it.



Thanx....😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Next episode will be at around 8:00 pm IST oday
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great story so far, very sensitive writing & excellent. It would be nice to see Saanchi get a career and be successful whilst Tara stagnates as a doctor as she is consumed by jealousy & mistrust.
Just a suggestion
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey thanks for the PM!!!
keep going i'm sooo dying 2 read ur story!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ameetasingh4

Great story so far, very sensitive writing & excellent. It would be nice to see Saanchi get a career and be successful whilst Tara stagnates as a doctor as she is consumed by jealousy & mistrust.
Just a suggestion


Good point....Thanx for your support
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Posted: 15 years ago
Episode 52:-

Shravan is with Vireen and bunty at some cafe...
Shravan:- Vireen did you talked to lawyers...
Vireen:- I talked to him but he is saying it will be difficult to extend .... But
Shravan:- What But...
Vireen:- I told him about you... He suggested there is one solution.....
Shravan:- Tell me fast....
Vireen:- He told there was one case in which judge ask them to stay for another next three month together before he announce justice... to see whether marriage can be saved. or it of no use....
Shravan:- Is it possible....
Vireen:- He told me so... It can be done....
shravan:- for this what I need to do.... Please vireen help me ... It will be gr8 if saanchi comes back for next 3 months... I will make sure this time she doesn't leaves.... Please vireen...
Vireen:- Don't embarrass me.... Saanchi is bhabhi for me and bunty since you married her.... I will be more happy to see both of you reunited...
Shravan:- Thanx...
Vireen:- You will have to meet judge and convince her... That lawyer will also come with you.... Don't worry , I will set up time for meeting the judge...
Shravan:- Thanx again vireen... Please make it fast....Next monday will be hearing date only 4 days are left....
Bunty:- Don't worry we will do it.... Anyway tell me what happened at Tara house yesterday...
Shravan explained everything to vireen and bunty....
Vireen and bunty both laugh.....
Shravan:- you are laughing at me...
Vireen:- no....
Shravan :- I need to call shreya now...
Shravan calls shreya
shreya :- haa jiju kya hua yaad aa gaye meri....
Shravan:- Hmm how are you...
Shreya:- I am fine...
Shravan :- aur woh...
Shreya :- woh Kaun...
shravan:- saanchi aur kaun...
shreya :- ohh saanchi she is not happy what happened yesterday... she doubt me and ask whether I told you saanchi is comming to mall or not...
shravan:- I am sorry for that.......
Shreya:- Its okay... You need to say to saanchi...
Shravan:- I told her but she is not listening what should i do...
Shreya :- Kya Jiju Aap ek ladki ko bhi nahi mana sakte...
Shravan:- I can...
shreya:- thats good...
shravan:-- where is she now....
Shreya:- same place where both of you met ...
Shravan:- In temple...
shreya:- yeah... Don't tell her that I told you...
shravan:- sure Thanx...
Shreya:- Its ok go now before she left...
shravan leaves in hurry ..... to temple...............

shravan went to temple and he get delighted to see saanchi worshiping... He just keep looking at her standing aside by her.... He remembers when he met saanchi first time in temple and before marrige.,... Saanchi notices shravan ....
saanchi starts going...
shravan stops her by holding her hand...
saanchi:- shravanji aap yahan...
shravan:- I came here for you...
saanchi:- why...
shravan:- I came to ask your forgiveness... I am really sorry...
saanchi:- I told i forgave you...
Shravan:- You haven't ... please forgive me really.... If you don't believe that I am really sorry then I will not remove my hand from this aarti unless you say ........
shravan put his hand above burning aarti in temple....
saanchi is quiet doesn't know what to say... shravan hands starts burning and starts feeling jalan... but he did not remove his hand...
saanchi get anxious and worried removed shravan hands and tears his duppatta and wraps around shravan hands.....
saanchi:- why u are all doing this... when u r getting engaged ,.... I am trying to forget everything bu t you are not making me to do so..
shravan:- Please forgive me for what ever I did to you....
Saanchi heart get melt and says:- Its okay... I have forgiven ... Please go to doctor now... and take some medicine... she is worried...
shravan feels happy to know as she still cares about shravan...
shravan:- really you have forgiveen me...
saanchi :- Haa shravan ji...
shravan face turned happy he forget pain and hugs saanchi.....


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Posted: 15 years ago
AWWWW Yaaay the story is moving forward Im so happppyyy LOVE IT Thanks for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
This is really nice...can't wait to read more.... continue writing
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for pm, what a great episode!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for the PM.....scene is great.....!😊

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