Socha NaTha FF:Check Page 146 & 145

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shravan has became more responsible... He has started respecting everyone...
Here comes D-day...
Saanchi wakes up Shravan
Shravan:-- Kya Hua.. Uth raha hoo 15 min mein...🥱
Saanchi-- Aaj mein Jaa rahi hoo hamesha ke liye...
Shravan wakes up from sleep in suprise...
Shravan:-- Kyun...
Saanchi:-- Aap bhul gaye kya .. aaj 17 taareek hai Waade ke hisaab se mujshe jaana hoga... Congrats...
Shravan;-- Congrats kahe ke liye....
Saanchi:-- Aaj se aap azaad hai Abb aap aur Tara ke beech mein main nahi aaongii...
Shravan ( feeling sad):-- Sach mein jaa rahi hoo kya...
Saanchi:-- Haan Waada jo kiya tha aapse shravan ji Nibhana ko parega hii...
Shravan is in dilemna whether to stop her or let her go...😕
Suddenly shravan phone rings and it is tara phone...
Shravan:-- Haan Tara Kya hua...
Tara:-- Aaj 17 taareek hai... Contract khatam hoo raha hai... Saanchi gayee ya nahi..... Agar nahi gayee ko usse yaad dilaao aur paise dekar jaane ko kaho..
Shravan:-- Hmmm
Tara:-- Abb Hum Kab mil rahe hai apne pyaar ki jeet celebrate karne ke liye..
Shravan:-- Jald... Main phone karta hoo thodi der mein,...
Saanchi is listening all this and is sad but try to look happy...
Saanchi:-- Kya kahe rahi thi Taraji
Shravan:-- Kuch nahi..
Saanchi:-- Aaap dono khush rahiyega hamesha.. Bhagwan kare aap dono sada saath rahe..
Shravan thinks saanchi is so good that she cares for shravan and tara and wishes best for them whereas Tara always think of herself... and she thinks bad for saanchi..
Shravan was lost in thought... suddenly saanchi says:-- Kya hua...
Shravan:-- Kuch nahi...
Saanchi:-- Yeh rahe aap ke paise mere ko nahi chaiye abb... Bas aap office mein mann lagakar kaam karte rahiyegaa sab khush rahenge...
Shravan :-- Kyun nahi chaiye...
Saanchi:-- Bas aise hii.. Waise bhi mein job karti rahoongi office mein as employee...
Shravan:-- Neeche gharwaalo aur mama mami se kya kahoogi..
Saanchi:-- aap chinta na kare... Mein sambhaal loongii...
Shravan still thinking why she is taking all blame on her own,...
Saanchi::-- aap ready hoo jaaye neeche chal ke batana hai...
Shravan:-- hmmm😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
nahi shravan rok lo sanchi ko

he he he
adding a touch of melodrama

how do u think of such topics ...............
i cannot think beyond monday,kya hoga monday ko thats all what revolves in my mind
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene2:--
At Hall:-- Everyone is getting ready to leave for office and are at breakfast table ...
Saanchi and shravan enters...
shravan looking sad and gloomy...
Saanchi:-- Papajii mujshe kuch kehna hai..
Pratap:-- Kya kehna hai beta Bolo beta koi problem hai kya
Nidhi and Dadi sensed it and looks sad... hoping that it might not be what she is expecting...
Saanchi:-- Hum log alag hoo rahe hai aaj se...
Pratap:-- Kya kaha Phir se kehna zara
Saanchi:-- Haa jee hum log alag hoo rahe hai/....
Pratap:-- Aakhir kyun... Shravan ne kuch kaha kya...
Saanchi:-- Shravan jee ne kuch nahi kaha .., Inko kuch mat kehna Yeh Humne mil ke faisla liya hai...
Nidhi and dadi is sad...
Dadi :--- saanchi zzara idhar aana mujshe tumse baat karni hai...
Saanchi nidhi and dadi ek kamre mein jaate hai...
Dadi:_- You will leave me... Dont you love shravan...
Saanchi (sadly);;-- I love shravan jee ... Thats why I am leaving her I made a promise to him that i will leave after 6 months...
I can't see him sad... Maybe he will be happy with tara...
Nidhi:-- He is very stupid who doesn't realise who is true love...
Saanchi:-- Please dont say anything to himm.. Shayad yahi ram ji ki maya hai... Inke dil mein koi jagah nahi bana paaye...Agar ramji ki krupa hui aur inko mehsoos hua meri kami k... ko mujshe lene zaroor aayenge...
Nidhi:-- Tum sab apne upar kaise le rahi hoo.. Aaage kya karogi... Tum office ko aati rahogi naa...
Saanchi :-- Hmm aati rahoongii...
Saanchi(to dadi);;-- mujshe maaf kar dena ... 6 mahine mein jitna mein kar sakti ki utna maine kiya aapka promise poora karne mein Agar koi kami rahe gaye hoo ko zaroor maaf kar dena and she cries....
Dadi and nidhi consoles and hugs her,...

And she left after touching feets of everyone...
Jaate Jaate Shravan se:-- Thanks aap ke support ke liye... aaap hamesha hanste aur khush rahiyega.. Agar koi galti hui hoo ko maaf kar dijeyega...
Shravan got mute and he doesnt have any word to say...



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I will continue next part soon... Plz give ur suggestion too for next part what you wanna see,.,,

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sanchi aur shravan sath mein chaiye................hamesha ke liye
tara ko goli maro(not literally)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene3:--
Saanchi has left shravan house.l.. Everyone is sad and angry at shravan...
Pratap and dadi talk to each other.. Dadi tells pratap about everything and pratap fell sorry for saanchi and He will ask saanchi to work in office....
All has left for office...
Shravan notice there are 10 missed calls from tara..
He is feeling sad and calls tara...
Shravan:-- What happens...
Tara:-- Why you were not picking phone.... Has Saanchi left or not....
Shravan:-- I was busy...
Tara:-- What about Saanchi...
Shravan:-- She left...
Tara:-- Good very nice to hear...
Shravan:-hmm( sad)
Tara :-- when can we meet..
Shravan:-- Right now I am going to office... Today I have lots of work...
Tara:-- Today is our day.... Lets meet and celeberate..
Shravan:-- hmm. Why dont you come at lunch time
Tara:- Sure, I will come .. I love you
Shravan :- me too..

He cut the phone and looks sad over what happened... He is thinking all about it driving and reaches office...

Pratap: calls shravan to his cabin...
Shravan:-- aap ne bulaya..
Pratap:-- You are late.. Try to come on time...
Shravan:-- Hmm
Pratap:-- Saanchi will be keep working here... You have left her but I havent I consider her as my daughter... So make sure dont bring personal differences in professional life.. Nor hurt her as you already have done what u can do to her...
So Stay away from her...
Shravan:-- Yes.. and leaves...

Saanchi and shravan are both working at office... Saanchi is busy in working ...Shravan is looking sometimes at saanchi... Saanchi notices that and tries to ignore it and dont show any expression...
At that Time Tara enters....


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Posted: 15 years ago
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when will u post the next part?

this is awesome continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene4:--
Tara enters shop and is fumed seeing saanchi over there... She is more angry about shravan looking at saanchi.,...
She went to shravan:-- What is all this going....
Shravan:- what I didn't got it...
Tara:-- You said Saanchi has left... But she is still here...
Shravan:-- She has already left ... But papa has told that she will keep working here...
Tara:--- I know these types of gals.... She never wanna leave you so easily.... You are so rich.... Be careful of her... She has already taken 25 lac still looking out how can she get more...

Saanchi listens this and felt very sad.... She stood up from his place.... and is about to leave... but shravan says to stop
Shravan:( to tara)--- She is of not that type I know .. She has returned 25 lac....
Seeing Shravan supporting her, Saanchi feels good....😉

Tara:-- wtf... What happened to you ... You are praising her... You dont trust your love... (tara) I know these type of gals...
Saanchi:-- I am not that type... If you wanna shravan ji i am leaving office... I told papaji that but he insisted so i can't turn down... Because of me , plz dont fight In fact I am leaving... Be happy...

Shravan:( to saanchi)-- You don't have to leave... We are ok...

Listening this ... Tara face become red.,.. and went out of office... 😡Shravan looked anger and punches his hand at wall.... He runs after Tara out of office...

Saanchi looking at Shravan and feeling sad...

Hope to continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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a short but good part i hope shravan has fractured his hand or something

keep going
u rock
great story
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds good, could they be written in english please i find it hard to undertand reading it in hindi!! thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene5:--
Shravan out of office runs after Tara to stop her...
Shravan:-- Tara, plz stop listen me once...
Tara:-- I dont wanna listen anything go to saanchi she is right and I am wrong,,,,
How can you insult me like this....
Shravan thinks :-- I have insulted saanchi so many times but she never said a word infact she took all in her stride... and tara whom i didn't insulted and then also she is saying such this...
Shravam:-- Please forget it...
Tara:-- Go to her...
Shravan:-- Plz try to understand...
Tara:-- I knows... and she leaves away leaving shravan alone...
Shravan feeling bad.... and returned tlo office ... and starts working,,,
He is quite confused and don't know what to do...
At end of office, Saanchi is standing and waiting for auto... Shravan comes and ask her whether he can drop her to home... Saanchi says she will manage... She has to go alone daily... He will not come daily to drop her daily ... suddenly taxi comes and saanchi leaves him ....

Shravan is shocked to hear such things and forget that he has to go to Tara( as shravan and tara exchanged sms during that period)..
Suddenly phone rings and its from Tara...
Tara:-- Where are you....
Shravan:-- I am still in office...
Tara:-- ohh enjoying with saanchi...
Shravan:-- she has already left... I had some work to complete today.,... Earlier saanchi used to help me in finishing my work too... But today I have to do on my own,,, and I am not feeling well over what happened today afternoon...
Tara:-- Ohh Ok .... Are you comming or not...
Shravan:-- Wait I will be there soon...



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