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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful work...plz continue soon...thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you for the pm. I really enjoyed your fanfic so far. keep up with the great work.

I really liked how you have Shravan all confused about his feelings for Sachi and how Nidhi bhabhi and Dadiji are not helping Shravan this time. and I loved the romantic scenes between Sachi and Shravan! they were amazing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks next part will continue soon in 1 hr... It would have been posted .... my system shuts down.... and I will have to write it again now....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovelyyyyyyyyy ff.
Every part is awesomeeeeeee.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


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Posted: 15 years ago
Next Episode..

Shravan is shocked to see Tara in front of his car....
Shravan( to Tara) :-- what are you doing here in front of my car...
Tara asking angrily:- same question i wanna ask you... What were you doing with saanchi... why u didn't pick my phone last night...
Shravan:-- I just came to drop her... Dadi told me to do so..
Tara:- from where..
Shravan:- she was at hospital last night... Nidhi bhabhi delievered a baby ... she was taking care of nidhi...
Tara:-- Good nice plot by saanchi.... You must also will be there with saanchi...
Shravan:-- I am seeing you why u r always against saanchi... I was also there....
Tara:-- Bcoz i know saanchi very well. she never doesn't wanna leave you... You must be enjoying with saanchi last night thats why u didn't pick my phone...
Shravan get angry and almost raise his hands... but control his emotion...
Shravan😡:-- Its enough ... I am leaving I have some work ... I don't wanna talk right now anymore... Try to trust me... If you can't trust me then there is no point of talking...

Shravan angrily sits in car and went away leaving Tara in midst of street...
Tara got shocked at behaviour of shravan and she understood shravan is getting away from her... She thinks how to get him back...

shravan goes home and sleep... But sleep is still away from his mind... He is remembering sweet moments of last night and decides to talk to dadi..

At hospital, Nidhi bhabhi told dadi what happened last night between saanchi and shravan...
Dadi looked happy and
Dadi:-- I will talk to shravan.,...
Nidhi:-- Dadi not now... Let him learn his lesson and realize the importance of love and saanchi...
Dadi:-- But..
Nidhi :-- plz
Dadi:-- okay jaisa tum kaho..
They both hug each other...
Nidhi and dadi makes a plan to bring more closer these people... and dadi keeps playing with baby..

shravan get ready from sleep and there is nobody at home...,He ask where is everyone... The servant told pratap and bhaiyas are in office and dadi and neeta are in hospital with nidhi...

He got ready ... once again tara phone comes....
He picks up phone and hears tara crying...
Shravan:-- what happened tara.. r u allright..
Tara:-- I am really sorry... for what happened.. Please forgive me... I really love you and don't wanna loose you...
Shravan:-- Its ok... stop crying...
Tara :-- Really...
Shravan:-- Haa..
tara:-- I will never hurt u again ... Plz can you meet me now...
shravan:- why now...
Tara:-- I am not feeling well... I need you..
Shravan : I will try to come soon..
(this is another plot by Tara to bring shravan back .... )
Tara after disconnecting phone makes wicked smile on her phone...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh god!! Ye Tara sudregi nahi!! Ufff!!! But great update!! Plz continue asap!!! And thx for the pm!! =)
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great job! Love your FF so far :)
Thanks for the pm!
Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
you have great talent. i wish you are the creative writer of the show.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Im loving every single part! Its really good, well written!
Keep it up =)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bajlooka

you have great talent. i wish you are the creative writer of the show.


thx for such a comment,.... lol

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