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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow great imagination !!!! 😃 Awesome worrkkk 👏
Very well written..It was really sad.. 😭 Very touching and really cutee 😳 I wish i could c this on tv..it would b greatt 😃 😃 Your imagination roxxx !!!!!
Lets c what happens next..will pravina really b there 😉
Waiting for ur next part! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
^^^Dont worry next part will be up soon 😃 thanx for liknig it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

...:::New Exclusive Promo

of Tera Mera Rishta:::...

(Upcoming Part)

Pravin holds her from wrist, while pravina holds Pravin's collar in order to stop herself from falliing, both are looking in each other's eyes, totally seems to be lost in thier own world forgetting the world around them.

Pravin crease her hairs, while pravina closes her eyes.

Pravin looks at her eyes and remember all those moments since pravina died.

Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Hooo..Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Written by: me😳

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

...:::New Exclusive Promo

of Tera Mera Rishta:::...

(Upcoming Part)

Pravin holds her from wrist, while pravina holds Pravin's collar in order to stop herself from falliing, both are looking in each other's eyes, totally seems to be lost in thier own world forgetting the world around them.

Pravin crease her hairs, while pravina closes her eyes.

Pravin looks at her eyes and remember all those moments since pravina died.

Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Hooo..Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Written by: me😳

oh my my my my!!!!

wow!!! simply wow!!

Ika this is the best promo i've read.. trust me...

whatever i cud imagine from what u had written is simply beautiful.... 😳

*sigh*

cant wait to read it...... :)

thanks so much for writing all this n giving us all these beautiful moments..

Ika.. God Bless You

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Thankyou..i know i imagined it 1st then wrote it, like visualing on screen😳.. I know I'm thinking this will be their reaction in BBB too...😭...Well to suprise u all Pravina is back in this FF...😃😳

yahoooooooo..... ya plz bring her back.... she will be missed............thanks :))))))))))))
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well..now get ready coz she'll beback 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yayyyyy !!!!!!!!! Pravina will b back hereee !! 😃 very very goooodd 😃 😃
thank u so much 4 brining her back here..
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Posted: 17 years ago

...:::TERA MERA RISHTA:::...

Part 4

Pravin shocked: PRAVINA???

Pravin could not beleive what his eyes were showing him. Pravina opens her arms to hug him, Pravin gets up from bed and take step towards her when pravin starts to move away and goes out from room. Pravin starts to follow her. Pravin goes out and sees pravnia standing on balcony Pravin goes near her when she turns around and now both are facing each other.

Pravin: Pravina...tum..yahan..par..tum...

Pravina smiles and run towards the stairs and singalspravin to follow her too. She goes near the stairs and is about to climb the stairs down. Pravin runs towards her pravina laughs and starts to climb stairs while looknig at pravin when she trips. luckily pravin comes on time, Pravin holds her from wrist, while pravina holds Pravin's collar in order to stop herself from falliing, both are looking in each other's eyes, totally seems to be lost in thier own world forgetting the world around them.

Background song

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Baichan dil mein tarap thi tumhari

Baichan dil mein tarap thi tumhari

Mere sapno mein bhi…mere sapno mein bhi

Mere sapno mein bhi jhalak thi tumhari

Baichan dil mein tarap thi tumhari

Jo tu dil ko sakon nahi dina

Jo tu dil ko sakon nahi dina

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu dil ko sakon nahi dina

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

hoo jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Aaa..aaaa…aaaaaaaaa…aaa

Aaa..aaaa…aaaaaaaaa…aaa

Aaa..aaaa…aaaaaaaaa…aaa

Pravin crease her hairs, while pravina closes her eyes.

Pravin looks at her eyes and remember all those moments since pravina died.

Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Hooo..Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Umer bhar tujhe hi main Umer bhar tujhe hi main

Umer bhar tujhe hi main dhoonta raha

Tere inteizaar mein main bhatakta raha

Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Hoo…Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

hoo jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Both are lost in each other eyes, when pravina realeases herself from pravin and holds his hand and takes him to where the jhula is. Pravin totally lost in her just goes behind her. Pravin whole time is looking at pravina. Pravina takes him to jhula and sits on jhula and make pravin sit too, pravin could not believe that Pravina was there with him.

Pravin: Pravnia tum kahan chali gayi thi, meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi, tumhe pata hai na main tumhare baghari jinda nahi reh sakta, and bachon ko bhi tumhare bina rehne ki adat nahi hai. Main uhne kaise sambhalon?

Pravina: bachon ko ab tumhe sambhalna hoga pravin. aur dekho main toh yahan hon tumse kisne kaha main tumse dour hon.

Pravin: par?

Pravina: par kya? Pravin humhe koi bhi alag nahi kar sakta, na yeh duniya, na bhagwan, na hi do alag duniya, aur na hi maut.

Pravin is shocked.

Pravina carrying on: Pravin main humesha tumhare pass rahongi yaad bankar, kabhi soch bankar, kabhi pyaar ka mitha ehsaas ban kar. Humesha.

Pravin is just looknig at her and trying to hold his tears back.

Pravin: P tum kyon gayi ho? aisa toh nahi socha tha humne? maine toh socha tha es wedding annbiversry ko yaadgar banyonga, hum humar sapna pura kareinge, woh adhura sapna.

Flashback - 3 weeks before wedding anniversary

Pravina's friends nisha and her husband had to go for some ipm work so they leave their 3 months old baby with pravina for a day. Pravin and pravina become attach to the baby. In night after baby's left, pravina sitting in room upset. That baby made her heart melt now she also wanted a child too.

Pravin comes and see her sad he knows why and knows what in her heart. Pravni also wanted 1 more child but pravnia avoided topic always. He goes and sit in front of her on bed. With his fingers he gently pull pravnia';s chin up and make her look at him.

Pravnia: upset ho?

Pravin steal glances from him.

Pravin: pata hai Kkusum be, arre menaxshi ki mummuy ne humari bhawashar wani ki hai ke humare 4 bache honge.

pravin is confused.

Pravina: par humare toh 7 bachein hain na?

Pravin is shocked.

Pravina: mehul, mitali, chaitali, manav, suomil, saloni and gattu bhai.

Pravin laughs and slightly hit slap her head.

Pravin: budhu, mean ke humare khudke bache 4 honge.

Pravina gets blush but dont want to show to pravin. pravni sees her reactiuon and loves it.

Pravin coughs and steal glances from pravin.

Pravina: pravin..ermm.ehumm..woh sarries ki delivery

Pravin: pata hai main soch raha hon ke kyon na Kkusun bem ki baat ko sach kar dein? at this poin pravin holds her face and starts creasing her face, pravnia feels her heart melting and could feel temprature raising in room. pravina thinks "is it me or room tempis raising?"

while pravin as loving each at evey bit of her reacton, enjoing it. Pravin holds her hand, pravina knew she had to move or else she knew how this will end up.

Pravin shouts: ayii baa.

Pravin: par mujhe toh kuch naih sunai diya.. looknig at door

Pravina hesitate for moment then gets blush and runs towards the door. Pravina was about to go.

Pravin: waise main soch raha hon ke es wedding anniversary par yeh sach kardon. waise bhi ab tum bhi toh yehi chahti ho na, i know chut has melted ur heart.

Pravina was shocked how he knows and dared not to look at him.

Pravin: waise bhi es baar toh humari shaadi phirse ho rahi toh...kya khayal hai?

Pravin winks at her, now pravina could not bear room temp or hotness raising in her. So she gets all shy and runs away.While pravin laughs

Pravin: es bar edding anniversay par main tumhe sabse pyaar toufa donga. humare pyaar ki nishani.

~~~Flashbak Ends~~~

The End

Written by: ika😊

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 suchhh a cutee partt !!!!!! it was greattt..awesome worrkkk...just lovvved it..thankss for postin it..it rockkkedd!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lovely!!! n had i been pravina.. i wudnt have run away from there
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brilliant Ika!! as alway

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