*Tera Mera Rishta* LAST PART p43 - Page 10

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

teriii deeewwaaaniiiiii!!!! 😆😆😆
😳
muahh muuahhh 😳 muaaaaahhh muuuuaaahhhh to Pravin.

Yea... muaaaaahhh muuuuaaah muaaaaahhh muuuuaaah to pravin😳

...:::Tera Mera Rishta:::...

Part 3

A week later everyone comes back from puna, gattu goes to agan and tells baa that every1 is back from puna. Arvind comes and tells baa that everything went fine. Baa then sees pravin and he's just standing there as stone. Baa is wrorired hemal tells that pravin was like this in puna too.. baa comes and hugs pravin and pravin just hugs baa emotionless.

Baa: pravin khudko sambhal ab bachon ko bhi tujhe sambhalna hai

Pravin then goes to children's room where mehul follows him when hemal tries to go behind them baa stops them.

Baa: pravin ko hi ab bachon ko sambhalna hoga, jane do unsey.

Pravin goes to children's room where mehul also comes behind him, pravin sees chailtai holding pravina's pic and mitali sitting next to her. Pravin goes to them and sit next ot them and hugs chaitali and chaitali starts crying mitali put her head in pravin's lap (like pravin did in 20 oct epic) and starts crying mehul sits on the other side of pravin and hugs him and starts crying. Pravin also could not control his tears and starts crying bitterly. Their cries could heard by all the family meeanxshi could not control herself and tires ot go when baa stops her.

Baa: akela chodh do unhe maan halka kar lene do unhe.

They all are crying and pravin hugs all of them and then wipes their tears.

Pravina: bachon aise mat rooh pravina ko acha nahi lagega.

They all calm down afterwards pravin tries to get up when chaitali holds his hand and nods not to leave pravin nods and sits back down.

Whole day pravin and children spent in the room and pravin still not talking to any1 except his children that too a little.

In night pravin his room laying in bed thinking that its his coz of which pravina left him, coz of that bracelet. He was lost in his thoughts when chaitali comes there followed by mitali and mehul. Pravni sees them and gets up, pravin nods his head and calls them towards him. Chaitali comes and says that she can't sleep so is mehul and miltali.

Pravin tells them to sleep with him as he can't sleep too. Chaitali lay next to pravin mehul on other side of pravin and mitali with chaitali. Pravin tightly hugs his children. No one can still sleep.

C: papa mummy hume kyon chodh kar chali gayin?

Pranin doesn't say anything when mehul says.

Me: main janta hon mummy es liye chali gayin kyonki hum unhe bohut pareshan karte thay na. Humne mummy ko bohut pareshan kiya hia, bohut tang kiya hai esi liye who hume chodh kar chali gayin. Tear rolls down from every1's eyes.

Mi: mummy we are very sorry, please app wapis ajao na. Please mummy.

C: please mummy. Papa app mummy ko bolayo na, who apki baat manti hain, who apse dour nahi reh sakti please papa mummy ko bolayo na.

Tears streams down from pravin's eyes, Pravin after with so much courage.

P: beta, apki mummy mujhse bhi routh kar chali gayin hain, aur wahan chali gayin hai ke ab lout kar nahi ayeingi.

C: papa mummy bhagwan ke pass kyon gayin? Baghwan ji kisi ki mummy toh nahi cheen sakte na? Dadi ma ne kaha tha aik din.

P: beta apki mummy bohut achi thi na, es liye bhagwan ji ne unhe apne pass bola liya.

Me: par humara kiya papa?

Pravin could not answer this question and cries silently.

Pravin looks at the sky from his window (there's a window just behind their bed, u'll undersrand later why).

Pravin: bachon dekho us asmaan mein kitne sitare hain na

All looks at the sky.

Pravin: un mein se jo sabse chamkta sitara hai na who pravina hai. Jo log dour chale jatey hain na woh log sitare ban jatey hain.

After keep looking at that most shiny star children goes to sleep. Pravin still awake he sees mitali holding pravina's pic, he takes it slowoly so mitali doesn't wake up. Pravnin looks at the pic and kisses it.

Pravni thinking "pravina kahan chali gayi ho humne chodh kar? Kyon chali gayi ho? Tumhe pata hai na mujhe aur bachon ko tumhare baghair rehne ki adat nahi hai. Please lout ayo pravnia, plzz…main khudko sambhal naih pa raha bhachon ko kaise sambhalon?"

Tears flowing down from his eyes like river flowing. When he sees a light comes from the door. Light is so powerful that pravin's eyes could not bear so he put his hand on his eyes. He then slowly take his hand little from his eyes and sees a blury figure of someone. He then slowly take hand fully off from his eyes andopen his eyes wide and now he could see clearly and seeing what he was seeing is shocked, to see who was standing on the door.

Pravin gets up and says: PRAVINA???????

The End

Witten by: Ika😊

coming up: is really Pravina is back? or is it Pravin's imagination?

kya Pyaar mein itni taqaut hoti hai ke maarey howe insaan ko maut ke mouh se khainch laye?

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

...:::Tera Mera Rishta:::...

Part 1

harshad, arvind, hemal (with mehul) and sobodh give kandha and pravin front holding matki with water (sorry don't know what is called) everyone saying "ram nam satye"..

they all reach where they gonna do pravina's kriya karam. They start pravina's last rituals which mehul and pravin do. Pravin still don't know what is happening, he's not still responding. Chitah is buring and all crying mehul cries and hugs pravin but pravin is still in shock. All other people goes their now only family members left, when pranchpe comes to pravin looks at him and pravin looks at him

Pranchpe holds pravin from shoulder: pravin bhai, Pravina bhabhi ne marte samay yeh bracelet apke liye diya tha.

Pravin looks at trying not to look at pranchpe or bracelet.

Prachpe:L yeh sach hai.

Pravin steps back. Pranchpe comes front of pravin and jolts him and then shouts

Pranchpe: Pravin Bhai..Pravina Bhabhi NE MARTE SAMAY MUJHSE BAAT KI THI AUR YEH BRACLET APKE LIYE DIYA THA AUR KAHA THA KE HASPY ANNIVERSERY PRAVIN.

Pranchpe and others crying when pravin looks at him and then looks at bracelet. He takes bracelet and then looks at chitah which has now fully burnt. Pravin falls on his knees and shouts: PRAVINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAA😭

And starts crying really hard. Pravin holds her chunri and braclet and cries so hard, bitterly. Others try to hold him but harshad says no.

H: unay roh lene dijiye.

Pravin dhadh mar kar cheekh cheekh kar roh raha hai. Mehul goes to him and hugs him and both cries.😭

The End

Written by: Day_dreamer aka Ika😊
Please guyz do comment,😳😳😳 hope U'll like it.

P.S. This whole part made me cry. jab main likh rahi thi toh meri bhi ankhein bhar ayien.😭

the whole part was really really senti 😭 whenever i see or read such scenes .. it remind me of papa.. 😭

That was beautiful. Ika thank you so much. I dunno how i can explain to you in words how beautiful this scene is. The last part when pravin is looking up at the sky and thinking about pravina... Is sooooo beautiful... Thank you so much ika.. And pleaseeee continue asap....
Thanks for bringing her back atleast in the fanfic..
Thats all where we'll find pravina now... 😭

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

That was beautiful. Ika thank you so much. I dunno how i can explain to you in words how beautiful this scene is. The last part when pravin is looking up at the sky and thinking about pravina... Is sooooo beautiful... Thank you so much ika.. And pleaseeee continue asap....
Thanks for bringing her back atleast in the fanfic..
Thats all where we'll find pravina now... 😭

awww.thankyou os much for liking..😃 i also love Pravina-Pravin jodi and nowdays Pravin too..😳...i'll def try to post by tommorrow next part and I promise u that U'll love that part...so no more rona dhona...😃😉

Originally posted by: Fazila~

ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd............ that was beautiful........... both the last parts were so beautiful,........ poor kids n pravin........n i think in the end hes dreaming...poor them 😭 😕 ... its awesome, keep it up......... 😊

Thankyou..i know i imagined it 1st then wrote it, like visualing on screen😳.. I know I'm thinking this will be their reaction in BBB too...😭...Well to suprise u all Pravina is back in this FF...😃😳

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

To my imagination... if Praveena is really really dead then its just hormonal imbalance in praveen's mind... 😭 😭 Which is a disease that makes the victim often see the dead.
I hope praveena coems back but what if she doesnt?
Awesome part Iqa di!!! 👏 👏 👏 Absolutely Creative... Hats off to you! 👏 👏
I love your way of writing... almost touched my heart. 😳
I hope the next part is a bit happy one. 😊 (All upto you! 😊 ) Part 3 was sooo awesome creative head! 😆 YOu have a creative head stuck in your brain. 👏

well now that u mentioned yea thats rite.... but in my FF, i think personally if 2 people love each other more than death or God, so no one can tear them apart, keep them away from each other, not even God not even two different worlds 😳😃😭...thanx..see I've imganied 1st, like seeing future epics of BBB and then seeing from my point of view and then write them😳...Aww..i know me too shocked that how can i write that good😆😳 It also touched my heart too😳

I promise next part will be the happy one😃 and romantic too😳😉

well i think u r write, i'm beginnig to realsie I've a creative head stuck in there😆..I think I should send my FF to JD😆😉 what say?😉