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Amra Arabi

@litlle angel

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanxxxx 4 the nice updates

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MysticNights

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks for the update. very nice one.
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@yellowpurse

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanx for the descriptive update, can i just sugest that you should used periods because i got a bit confused because of the long sentences. Each had so many actions going on and so many characters. but it was very descriptive. thanx much for ur update, it was very useful.

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Amra Arabi

@litlle angel

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: yellowpurse
thanx for the descriptive update, can i just sugest that you should used periods because i got a bit confused because of the long sentences. Each had so many actions going on and so many characters. but it was very descriptive. thanx much for ur update, it was very useful.

hey thanks for tht suggestion 😛 😊.can u just make me more clearer i guess tht u want me to use full stops(.)right?well if tht is so then surely i will do tht in my next updates actually its a bit difficult for me also to write the updates bcoz every scene moves on so fast tht sumtimes i cant keep the pace .thanks for the suggestion.

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