Shana (shaleen & Sana)ss: it’s now or never final part page 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 5


Next morning sha had to go to Delhi for some meetings . So he was at his place .


Shaa mom : are shaleen tu wahan kya khata hai ??


Shaleen : ma sab kuch jo zarori hai but Thoda diet pe rehna padta warna kaam kaise milega .


Shaa mom : kabiliyat pe .


Shaleen : ma kabiliyat ke saath achcha dikhna zarori hai.


Shaa mom : esa kisne kaha ?


He was eating and in a flow he said


Shaleen :Sana aur kisne . Abhi thode din Pehle gyan Diya tha . Shaa social media skill’s improve kar . Shaa get photo shoot n what not.


Shaa mom : wooh ek lauti hai ko tumhe shaa bulati hai ?


Shaleen : ha Infact use shuru kiya tha. Arjun ki shoot ko thode din hue hum friends bane tab se . Wooh rarely mujhe shaleen bulati hai .


Shaa mom : uske photo shot bohot achche lagte hai . Abhi tv pe bhi dekha tha use kkk mein kya stunt kiye. Mujhe toh laga wooh Jeet jayegi.


Shaleen : aap uskoFollow karte ho?


Shaa mom : ha kyun ?? Tujhe koi taklif ?


Shaleen : meinu ki .


Shaa mom: par wooh ladka tha na vishal .


Hearing his name again Shaa Angry mode got on .


Shaleen : ma chodo mujhe baat nahi karni . Mein ja raha hoon.


Shaa mom : are ise kya hua ? Achcha khasa tha … sun khana toh pura karke jata.

Kamal hai yeh ladka bhi .


At night still he was not in a great mood but wasn’t showing up to his family .

shaleen couldn’t get off the words everyone was saying . He decides it’s now or never and he is going to tell her .


The whole day Delhi had some power cut issues and shaa had got very little battery.


Shaleen : yeh phone mein battery nahi hai.

aaj chahe Jo hogai . Aaj toh bolke rahunga .


Thoda breathing kar leta hoon .


Aur push-ups bhi kiye .


Pata nahi ajke baad baat hogi ya nahi . But aaj toh yeh Bol hi dunga chahe joh ho.


He remembers his mom .


Apki honewali bahu se confess karne ja raha . Ashirwad do ke wooh ha Bol de



He calls her . It’s 2 am . She was sleeping.


After multiple rings , she picked up seeing his name . (I m trying to take parts of his real proposal )


Sana : shaa kya hua ?? Adhi raat ko call kyu. Kiya ?? Sab thik hai ?


Shaleen : sana kya kar Rahi tu ?


Sana : shaa raat ko 2 baje yeh pochne ke

liye phone kiya ? So Rahi Thi aur kya ?


Shaleen :Tere room mein mirror hai ?


Sana: Ofcourse mirror hai .


Shaleen : ok mirror ke paas ja .


Sana : shaa are you mad.?? you know I am scared of dark . Mein nahi Jane wali . Tu kya kar raha hai itne raat ko ?


Shaleen : please ja please . Ek dim light on karke ja . Badi on kar but please ja


Finally after bohot sare persuasion she goes and stands there .


Sana : shaa is it a prank ?? Dekh i m telling you it’s very scary for me .


Shaleen : tumhe kya dikh raha hai sana ?


Sana : tumne pi hue hai ?? Phir se bekar sawal ? Ofcourse I can see myself .


Shaleen : no you are seeing the girl I love in that mirror.


There it was a long pin dropping silence …….


Call got disconnected as battery was out .He sneaked in to his parents room and got his father phone and called up.


Shaleen : jawab nahi Diya


Sana : kya jawab du ??


Shaleen : is sawal ka jawab yeh toh nahi ho sakta . ha ya na ho sakta hai


Sana didn’t say anything for a while .


Shaleen : meine jo bolna tha Bol Diya . Itne Saal chup raha but ab nahi . Tera jawab Jo bhi I will wait for it . N remember jawab Jo bhi ho I am always there for you . Bye Sana .


Without hearing he cut the call.


Sana here was restless as she never thought he will ever say anything like this . She was calming her raised heartbeats .


Sana answer after I come back . Will there be more denials ??

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Posted: 2 years ago
#32

Nice update

Love it

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Posted: 2 years ago
#33

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

What a cute update 😍😍

I really loved how after getting irritated with Vishal finally Sha decided to say his heart to Sana as he can't wait anymore

On the other hand Sana was completely shocked 😮 at his adrupt proposal in the middle of the night 😂 but then realised it was real

Sana decided to take time & now she too had to deliberate her heart & feelings & I will be waiting for that

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#34

I think she was surprised what happened suddenly

Hot and cold behaviour

I guess his mom comment was wake up call

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Posted: 2 years ago
#35

Part 6


Sana couldn’t help but realise that she was waiting for him to confess.

But she couldn’t stop from smiling .

She calmed her heartbeats .


4 days passed after this . None of them discussed about it ever . Shaleen back in Mumbai .



One fine day , there was a first shoot happening for zdmn .


Shaleen was ready .


Saif( his hair dresser ) : sir ready ho aap


Shaleen : thanks saifu Baal achche bane hai .


He went out and was walking at his shoot area . Kaweri joined him .


Kaweri : hi good morning .


Shaleen: hi good morning . So all set for the first scene .


Kaweri : let’s nail it together.


His phone rang . And the caller is showed SANA.


Shaleen : Kaweri tum Chalo I vl take this and come .


He picked up the call .


Shaleen : sana


Sana : hi shaa kaise ho ?


Shaleen : all good . Tum Batao ?


Sana : kahan ho ?


Shaleen : Mera show ka aaj first shoot hai .


Sana : all the best Shaa aur wooh mein I LOVE YOU Shaa


She closed her eyes tightly and said it finally .


Shaleen : ek minute kya show ki first scene ki itni khushi mujhe bhi nahi thi tumhe thodi zyada hogai .


Sana : tumhe pata tha mein ha bolungi .


Shaleen : ha tumne phone nahi kata toh mujhe laga Thoda positive hai .chance liya you know .


Sana : mein na bolti toh .


Shaleen : toh tumhe Thoda aur impress karta . But I knew you would say yes . I m so happy Sana and you made this day the most memorable one for me .


Sana : for us . Mere liye bhi yeh itna hi important hai shaa.


Shaleen: 4 din lage I love you bolne mein . Bharosa nahi tha ?


Sana : Bharosa tha but confirmed wala confession chahiye tha jealous wala nahi .


Shaleen : jealous me ?


Sana : yes you . Vishal ke saath ke rumours did affect you . Haina ? Isliye mujhe pick karne bhi nahi aye . Sid ko bheja .


Shaleen : tum bhi jealous thi nikki se .


Sana : tumhe pata tha ?


Shaleen : Akhen mere pass bhi hai .


Sana : toh kyu time laga dekhne mein ?


Shaleen : hai bohot kuch Milke batata hoon . Aur ha launch pe you are coming .


Sana : ofcourse I vl . all the best .


Shaleen : I love you .


Sana : I love you too shaa .


And finally shot of one of our fav shows started .


After a shot ended shaleen went to Sana .


She just ran to him and hugged him tightly.


Sana : Dafar Rahoge puri life .


Shaleen : accha toh tum propose karti . Kyu wait kiya .


Sana : mujhe Dar lag raha tha tumhe khone ka.


Shaleen : mujhe bhi wahi lag raha hai .

Waise friends ko batana padega . Peche pad gai the ke mein confess karu .


Sana : shaa raat ko 2 baje kaun confess karta hai.


Shaleen : mein mein karta hoon. It should be a good enough proposal for you not to deny it .


Sana : mujhe Kitna darr laga tha pata hai .

Shaa but seriously itna wait kyun kiya ?


Shaleen was not ready to spill the beans yet but then Sana raised her eyebrows.


Shaleen : tum itni successful ho famous ho sirf yahan nahi south films mein bhi . Mera toh Abhi Tak stability nahi hai .

Aur phir we have an age gap of 5 years .

Aur Hamari religions bhi toh alag hai . Itna sab kuch ghum raha tha dimag mein .


Sana : bas yahi sab socha tumne . Mujhe poch lete .


Shaleen : kya pochta ? Pyaar karta hoon tumse but mere yeh sab doubts hai . Kaise react karti tum . Kitna bhi avoid karo facts are facts


Sana : shaa I know yeh facts hai but is facts ko apne relationship par impact dena ya nahi yeh toh Hamara decision hai na


Humari field mein stability itna Asan nahi hai . Aur Kaun completely settled hai koi nahi . We will balance it shaa . Aaj koi top pe toh kal gayab . It’s part of this industry.


Aur kya 5 Saal ka gap. Is this what my shaa talks like ??Shaa aajke time me yeh chesen matter nahi karti . You know age is just a number hamare sukish ko le lo . They are so happy with each other . It’s about our love shaa nothing matters more . .


Religions pe toh meine jana bhi nahi hai .


Shaleen : chodna sorry .


Sana : aur mere flowers , chocolates kuch nahi Laye tum ? Kaise boy friend ho ?


Shaleen : are shoot se Sidha aa ya . Aur Abhi naya naya boy friend bana hu toh adat nahi hai .


Sana : toh dekho boyfriend banne ke baad rules follow karne padenge. Aur kisi aur ko training dene ke barein mein socha bhi toh esa dumble marungi ke hath pair training lene layak nahi chodungi


Shaleen : ok baba par mein sach mein nikki ke pass nahi Gaya tha . Koi mere pass aye toh baat toh karunga na .


Sana : Delhi ke smart ladke hoon na itna nahi pata chala ke line mar Rahi thi tum par .


Shaleen : are tum vishal se sath baat kar Rahi Thi dance bhi kiya meine toh .


Sana : ok fine ajse dur rehna Bol deti hoon


Shaleen : ajse mein sirf tumhara personal trainer ban ke rahunga bas . Achcha jokes apart .sana I was thinking whether we should share it with everyone or keep it under wraps .


Sana : Abhi chodo na badme dekhenge .


Saying this she wrapped her hands over him.

He pulled her for a forehead kiss.


Shaleen : thanks for accepting my love.


Sana laughed .


Sana : doesn’t sound like you Shaa . Normal time pe tum Meri tang khich rahe hote .


Shaleen: mera 4 din ke baad launch hai tumhe Ana hai . Mujhe bhi tumhari presence ki Zarorat hai . Bohot bada break hai I hope sab successfully execute ho.


Sana : ofcourse I vl be there shaa . Aur sab kuch bohot achcha hoga .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#36

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😃

Well I loved how finally Sana too said yes to Sha & I think hitch is really obvious in such cases ☺️ but correct it's 💕 love that matters the most

Finally new launch of series & I loved how both were excited and happy & also cleared their hitch as they knew it's really important

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I m. Glad you liked the proposal and acceptance. This is shaleen real proposal

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shahpinkerbell

I m. Glad you liked the proposal and acceptance. This is shaleen real proposal

It was really beautiful and cute 🥰 I didn't knew that 😍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Amazing

Love it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I hope they tell their friends soon ..they are so supportive anyway

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