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Posted: 5 years ago
#91

Who is behind riya??? Why???

Omg hope that dr is alive poor her

Ariya part at the end so cute loved it

Hope nothing ll happen to riya

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 7:-


Awsome update


Love it..


Wah kya baat he acp..?aunty ne couple bola fir bhi gussa nahi..ulta thank you kaha..


Sakshi bring wind chimes for him..riya jelious bhi he aur hasi bhi aa rahi he..


Ye last me kya tha..virus ball firse kaise aa gaya..?kisane rakha woh bhi riya ke office ke locker me..?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 8:-


Awsome update


Love it


Oh God who want to kidnap her..?n why?


Aur ye kis doctor ko marne ki plan kar rahe he..?


Riya ka doctor..?is this all related to exora

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 9:-


Oh god the doctor's house blasts



But they are not sure she was inside..


Hope she servived..


All are shocked seeing arjun n riya 😳


Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#95

Awesome

Love it

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#96

Awesome update

loved it

So my guess was right

it is the doctor treating Riya those people are after

honestly though, they have some nerve, getting into the ETF office and traumatizing her like that

unfortunately the ETF isn't able to find the doctor before the blast hits

let's hope she was not in there and managed to get out before it went off

Riya is happy seeing Shree but before he can mend anything, the ACP's barge in

loved the last scene!!!

I really like Yash's view on Arjun and Riya

cont sooooon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#97

Just read this FF. Really interesting concept and liked the your take on the virus. Love Arjun and Riya bond. Just curious is Sameer part of the FF or not


Amazing story

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Posted: 5 years ago
#98

waiting for today's update :P

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: bloomie

waiting for today's update :P


5 more minutes !

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Posted: 5 years ago

Chapter 10



Four hours ago, the house had burst in flames.


Four hours later, Riya's heart went up in flames.


Someone could be dead because of her. All for keeping her alive.


Tears streamed down her cheeks for the hundredth time that day. She just couldn't wrap her head whatever Arjun had said. Someone was after her. Probably for the the virus still hibernating inside her. The very thought of it made her cringe. They had gone to the degree of killing her doctor. The only person who had actually found a way to suppress the bacteria. Riya only hoped the doctor was alive and well. Not for her sake, oh no. For everyone. For, if something worse was to happen there ought to be someone who'd guide them.


As she wiped the tears away and pulled her hair in a bun, Shree enters the room," We started a search to locate the doctor."


Riya stares at him, overwhelmed in his presence already. She knew everything that had happened might have switched on the best friend side of the techie but she didn't want him to lose someone he loved either. Nonetheless she was extremely glad he was trying. He'd come checking on her every hour, much to her surprise and mutter something and leave.




As Shree was about to leave, he saw the plate in front of Riya the way it was the last time he had been in the room. Shaking his head, he leaves the room. She'd probably been wallowing in guilt all this time. Only one person can make Riya do anything he wanted,he thought.


Arjun Sir.


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In a dimly lit dingy room, sat a man with yellow teeth, counting a wad of cash. His thick fingers, wrapped in gold rings moved quickly as the others in the room looked on. He threw the bundle of notes on the table and indicated the guy in front of him to take it.


" Doosra mauka de raha hoon. Is baar kaam nahi hua, toh tera dil nikal kar teri Maa ko bhejunga Samjha? Woh doctor ko dhund nikalo. Jo ban padhe woh sab karo. Magar itna Dhyaan rakhna ki woh zinda bachni nahi chahiye. Agar usne Roy ko dekh liya hai toh gaya plan pani Mein."


The guy walks away with the money, only one thing in his mind. The doc shouldn't be left alive. There was no room for failure. He had failed once. He couldn't afford to again.


Kartal had given him a second chance. One mistake and he'd never live to see the light of the day.


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Two years ago, Kartal was just Kabir Raichand, a 26 year old scouting for a job. The lack of funds and no food in his refrigerator had kept him in a bad mood constantly.He had run off from his family,disappointed because they refused to pay for his endless booze .


Two weeks in Mumbai and he had began hating this god forsaken place.Things had come to a point where he was ready to do anything and everything to get a few bucks . He looked like a rogue and spoke like one too .


Too hungry to give a damn, one day he robs a woman outside a jewellery store. Before the poor woman could even react, he had fled the scene. He dodged everything that came in his way, the only thing on his mind was a hot dinner. As the woman raised alarm, Kabir realised he was being chased by the police nearby. Determined to make it out of this situation alive, he moved in and out of lanes thereby confusing the police. It was five long hours before they had given up the chase and the first thing Kabir did was enter a small clothes shop, bought clothes that nowhere matched his previous ones and changed into them. Next he took an auto to the extreme opposite of the city and brought a hot meal.


As he fled with the cash ,all he could think was how the chase gave him an unexplained exhilaration and thrill. This was even better than a chug. He could certainly get used to it .



Five months later and a million odd jobs later ,Kabir Raichand would cease to exist. And thus Kartal would take flight . Kabir had left everything behind and had created a new identity, a new myth. Kartal meant "Eagle" in Turkish. And like an Eagle, he always flew above the clouds.


Always above everyone yet had his eyes on the prize..


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"So what do you propose we do? SIT HERE AND WAIT FOR THE DOCTOR TO CONTACT US?" Arjun yelled, exasperated at how his best friend could even suggest that. "She could be hurt ffs and might need help. Let me remind you Mister Malhotra She's the only person who knows her way around this damned bacteria. We need her and we have to find her."


"I am not saying we don't find her. All I'm trying to say is that we can't go public with her disappearance. If we just print her face on every news paper, we might alert whoever is doing this and they'd know we have caught on.. And that might alert them. We need to tread carefully buddy " Yash explained. It was obvious Arjun would lose his mind when it concerned Riya, but to think he'd lose all logic reasoning was beyond everything." We need a solid plan of action. "


" But first we need to find the mole in the office. There's surely someone that's working for us and them." Aisha spoke up. Surely someone has been with them all along and yet not with them


"I know just the way" Yash smirked.

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