Ariya Chaalbaaz - Page 14

Sure Kar ky Raha hai yr

arjun ko Jan se Marne koshish ki

Hope Arjun ko koi clue mile

Shree itana BADA game q khel raha hai

Awesome update

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Awsome update

Love it

This is getting so much intresting..

Woh exora wala doctor accident me mar gaya..

Jo bhi clue mil raha he dead end..

Upar se Arjun ke car me bomb bhi..accha hua Arjun bach gaya .

Lekin ab kya .?woh kisiko kuch bata bhi nahi raha..

Aur shree usse 2 kadam aage chal raha he..

Ab kya hoga..?na jane riya kaha he..?

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That's really intruding Sharvi

Just loved it 🙂

Shree is really clever he had no traces left 😉 I am impressed he is giving Arjun a hard time

I really feel Shree can't go to an extent of killing someone rest I don't know what you have planned 😉

That bomb blast part was spine chilling 😔😔

So ab eyes on Shyamlal let's see what he has to say for us

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Continue soon🙂

Ye shree to sach main shatir nikla....

Nice update...

Kahi shree sach me villain to nhi???

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Superb update!

God Shree seems dangerous 😳

But was it him who put the bomb on Arjuns car? Or someone else?

Interesting

Ye to update by update aur interesting hota ja rha h.

Full on thriller.

Bilkul movie ki tarah.

Thank God Arjun bach gaya.

Ye to koi bada danger h, shree nhi ho Skta.

Shree to kitna sweet aur innocent type h..

Anyways aage aage dekho hota hai kya.

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Continue soon.

loved it

interesting

update soon

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Good one

Hope arjun ka dimag acche se chale kyunki woh toh usse use hi nahi kar raha hai...

Anyways hope woh jaldi iss shree ko apna aukaat samjhaye

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Part 1:

Amazing beginning to the story 👏

The concept seems pretty unique but I'll let the plot decide that

Wait so Arjun is already in love with Riya? That's weird. No matter how many times I read that Riya has died, my stomach still drops every time.

Arjun and Sameer are not exactly friends but it's good to see them on a slightly more civil terms than the show. I hope you explore this angle as well because it is a nice break from all the intense scenes in your stories.

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