Arakshi SS : Woh Ajnabi Lage Apna Sa ! (Updated Part 8B and 9 on Page - Page 16

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Posted: 3 years ago

yess got an update🤩

update is super 😊

its getting very interesting

eager for sakshi's entry 😁

please continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for update

but its ittusa

wonderful update

arjun's collegue meeting reminded him his and roshini's first meeting

why is arjun's baba is tensed and who is his friend in trouble?

is it related to sakshi the same old couple who saved arjun?

waiting for sakshi's entry

please update soon and this time little longer.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow! That's intense! So both Arjun and Sakshi don't like the marriage. Arjun showed his disinterest as soon as they entered into the house! But what can Sakshi do? She's completely trapped 😥.

Interesting prologue.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update 😌

It was a short one but really well written ❤️

Pratham came to office and through him obviously Arjun would remember Roshni more 😭 Roshni the girl who enchanted him in the first meet 🙌🏼

What problem is his father's friend facing? And how will Arjun and family help him?

And when will Arakshi meet? Too many questions.. do update soon ☺️

Love 💖

Karu

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Posted: 3 years ago

Please update dipti

Waiting for long

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you everyone for the encouraging comments. Next update before April 15th.

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Originally posted by: angelicdeepti

Thank you everyone for the encouraging comments. Next update before April 15th.

thank you so much waiting for it😃

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Posted: 3 years ago


PART: 8 B



In The Room


Aai: Mujhe aisa kyun lagraha hein ki, aap jis baare mein pareshaan hein, woh humare ghar mein toofan le aayega.


Baaba: Tumhe aisa kyun lagraha hein


Aai: Pata nahiin. Jab bhi aapko pareshan dekhti hoon aajkal, toh dil machalti hein. Ghabrahat si hone lagi hein. Aiisa lag raha hein ki bahut bada badlaav hone waale hein.


Baaba: Mein ab kuch nahiin keh sakta. Mein khud bhi sure nahiin hoon.


Aai: Theek hein. Meri toh Bappa se itni hi praarthana hein ki sab kuch theek-thaak rahe. Bas.


Baaba: Aaj Arjun kuch khoye khoye sa nahin the.


Aai: Haan woh aaj Office gaya tha toh shaayad Pratham se mulaakaat , saari puraani yaadein taaza kardiya hoga.


Baaba: Arjun ke bhavishya lekar mujhe bahut takleef hota hein. Kya uske zindagi mein dobara aisa koi aayegi, jo uske zindagi khushiyon se bhardegi. Humaare bete ke har kadam pe uska sath degi. Uske kande se kande milakar chalegi.


Aai: Kuch dino mein uski nayi posting hone waali hein. Nayi team ke saath. Shaayad kisi se mulaakaat hojaye, joh uske dil mein jagaah bana paayegi.


Baaba: Aisa toh hona mushkil lagraha hein. Tum toh jaante ho na, Arjun jab kalam karte hein toh kaisa hein.


Aai: Yeh bhi hein. Par hum kar bhi kya sakte hein.


Baaba: Shayyad humein hi kisi ladki se uski mulaakat karwaani hogi.


Aai: Arjun naaraaz hojayega. Iske alaawa koi faayda nahiin hoga. Aap toh aisa kuch nahiin soch rahe hein na.


Baaba: Areh nahin nahin. Aisa kuch nahiin. Chalo baat baaton mein raat bahut hogayi. Sote hein.


Aai: Haan chaliye sote hein.


Baaba (man mein) : Arjun se bahut jaldi baat karna padega. Pata nahiin woh kaise react karega. Ummeed hein ki woh mera apne dost se kiya vaada pura karega. Mere baat ka maan rakhega. Koi bakheda na khada karde bas.


(Unhe kya pata tha ki aane waale saal mein inki baatein kitne sach honewaala hein.)



It's a Filler. From next part onwards, the story will be more faster. The next update will be within a week.


Was there any changes made on the site. I had trouble giving the update from my mobile as I usually do. So I had to redo on my tab. And somehow ended up making changes to update I had planned.

Edited by angelicdeepti - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Me first, yaay. Aise hi update dete rahiyega.

Uski posting pehle hogi ya Sakshi se uske pita bhet karwayenge?


About the site, the only change i noticed was the banner announcement of games. Not sure though

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Posted: 3 years ago

PART : 9


Next Day


Baaba: Arjun kahaan hein?


Aai: Kisi kaam se, aaj jaldi naachta karke nikal gaye. Kyun kuch kaam tha?


Baaba: Haan, kuch kaam tha. Kuch baat karni thi. Toh mein bhi nikalta hoon.


Aai: Ji Theek hein.


Baba leaves.



2 hrs Later.


Baaba calls Arjun


Arjun: Ji Baaba, aapne call kyun ki? Kuch zaroori kaam tha?


Baaba: Ho beta, baat karni hein. Zaroori hein. Kya tum humare ghar paas jo Garden hein, wahaan aasakte ho?


Arjun: Theek hein. Mein abhi Commissioner Sir se milne jaaraha hoon. Toh uske baad meIn aapko wahi milta hoon. Bas ek ghante mein.


Baaba: Accha. Waise tum wapas duty kab join kar rahe ho?


Arjun: Parso. Usi silsile mein Sir se mil raha hoon aaj.


Baaba: Parso? Itni jaldi? Kya tum apne leave ek hafte extend kar sakte ho toh achcha rahega.


Arjun: Kyun Baaba?


Baaba: Jab tum Garden aaoge toh tabhi bataunga.


Arjun: Achcha theek hein. Mein karvadunga.



1 hr Later at the Garden


Baaba: Aao Arjun. Mere paas betho


Arjun: Kya hua Baaba. Aapne mujhe yahaan kyun bulaya. Aisi kaunsi baat hein jo aap ghar par nahiin bata sakte the.


Baaba: Bas zindagi ne aaj mujhe yahaan khada kardiya.


Arjun: Jo bhi baat hein, aap khul ke batayiye na.


Baaba: Zindagi kisi keliye nahiin rukhti. Mann mein dard lekar nahiin jiya jaata. Tumhe dekhta hoon toh kabhi kabhi bebas feel karta hoon.

Arjun: Baaba mein..

Baaba: Aaj mujhe bolne do. Jab tum paida hue the, tab humari aarthik sthithi kuch theek nahiin the. Tumhare aane ke baad mujhe kuch banne ka chaah bhad gaya tha. Phir tumhari behen ka janam hua. Tumhari aur uski har khwaish poora karne ke liye bahut mehnat ki. Tumhari Aai ne har kadam pe mera saath diya. Tumhe ek best school mein paddhaya. Tum pehle number pe pass hote dekhar bahut garv mehsoos karte the. College mein bhi top ki. Aur phir tumne bussiness join kiya. Garv se toh mera seena chauda hogaya. Socha tha kuch 5 , 7 saalon mein business tumhe sop dunga.

Phir tumhari shaadi hui Roshni se. Tumhe khush dekhkar mujhe aur tumhari Aai ko kitne khushi hote the, woh toh mein tumhe zaaya bhi nahiin karsakte. Roshini bhi humare ghar mein gul milgaye. Aadya ko ek dost mila Roshni mein. Tum teeno ne ghar ko khushiyon se bhardiya.


Phir hua Roshni ke saath woh haadsa. 2 saal hogaye. Abhi tak koi nahiin ubhra us dard se. Aur tum police mein ngadto hua. Aadya toh higher studies keliye chali gayi. Samaira ke shaadi mein toh Aadya se zyaada baat bhi nahiin hui. 2 saal aur phir uski padhayi bhi khatham. Phir toh uski shaadi aur woh apne ghar chali jaayegi.

Par tumhara kya? Mein aur tumhari aai kab tak rahenge tumhare saath? Zindagi ka koi bharosa nahiin. Kab kisko jaana pade, iske aandaza koi nahiin laga sakta. Jisko kaana hota hein woh chale jaate hein. Apno ko yahaan akele chod kar.


Arjun: Baaba, Aap aise baatein kyun kar rahein. Kuch hua hein kya? Aapki aur Aai ki tabiyat toh theek heina? Koi bhi baat ho toh mujhe batayiye. Mujhse jo hoga mein karunga. Sab kuch theek karunga. Bas baat kya hein. Aap jo kahoge mein waisa karunga. Bas aap aise baatein na kare.


Baaba: Mein aur tumhari Aai bilkul theek hein. Woh mera ek dost jiske paas zyaada waqt nahiin hein. Toh yeh sab sochne se nahiin rok paye khud ko. Aaj tak tumne jo bhi mange mein tumhe diya. Aaj mein tumse kuch maangna chahta hoon. Ummeed hein ki tum pura karoge.


Arjun: Mujhe kya karna hoga.


Baaba: Pehle tum Waada karo, ki tum meri baat maanoge. Mein jaanta hoon meri baat tumhe achcha nahiin lagega. Par mein dilse chahta hoon ki tum meri yeh baat mano. Waada karo Arjun


Arjun: Mein waada karta hoon ki aap jo kahoge mein waise hi karunga


Baaba: Ab tum apne waade se mukhad nahiin sakte.


Arjun: Haan jaanta hoon.


Baaba: Mein chahta hoon ki tum apna ateet peeche chodkar, zindagi mein aage badho. Dusri shaadi karo. Pyaar ko tumhare dil mein dastak dene ka doosra mauka do. Tum apne zindagi mein khushiyon ko aane do. Ek nayi shuruaat karo, yahiin hein meri khwaaish. Vinti karta hoon mein tumse.


Arjun is quite shocked hearing the request and looks at Baaba.




I hope I kept the update as per the expectations.

Edited by angelicdeepti - 3 years ago

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