Ariya ff Butterfly in the time update on pg 41 - Page 22

Part-2

Little bit confusing.. 😑😑 But chalega.. Aab arjun ko kya hua?? Wo aab riya ko chodh k sakshi k piche padha.. N uska feelings clear v nhi hai.. Wo kya chahta hai usse khud v nhi pata ya kahu u didn't clear it in update.. Btw, nyc update.. Thnx for pm..

Part-3

Superb update.. But ya some scenes r confusing.. ☺️ But it's ok... No pblm... 💕 Thanks for pm.

Part-4

Hahaha.. 😂 😂 Ye sam tha?? 🤔 Baat kuch hazam nhi hua.. 😅😅 He was looking like road side gunda.. 🤣🤣🤣 Ya kahu road side Romeo.. 😜

Awesome update.. Thanks for pm

Part-5

Nooooooo... 😰😱😱😱😱😱😱😰😰😰 U can't do this to our Ariya.. Unke kiss scene nhi Aya and u samriya ki kiss scene dikhane ja rhi ho.. 😰😰😰😰 Not good.. 😢😢😢😢😖😖😖😖 Ye nhi ho sakhta.. 😭😭😭😭😭 Kuch jayda hi drama ho gaya.. 😂😂 Btw, awesome update.. Ye to towel dress dance tha.. 😂 😂 😂 Thanks for pm..

Part-6

Yaar year gaps ka scenes kuch jayda hi confusing hai.. 🙄🙄 But update was good.. Avi iss triangle love k bareme kuch cmnts nhi krna chahti.. Thnx for pm.

Part-7

Nyc update.. Baas yehi season tha break up ka?? Taab to i would like to say riya selfish hai n aapna feelings k bareme khud hi nhi janta ki what she wants?? Thnx for pm

Part-8

Superb update.. It's a good story but its getting lack attention coz of lack of people. I noticed that after 3/4 parts its getting little likes n cmnts.. Coz IF me verified readers k kami padh gaya.. Na readers bacha hai na writers.. 😢 Don't know iss forum ka kya hoga.. Thanks for pm.. Never give up.. Keep writing..

Part-9

I thought sam k bareme sunke arjun ka kuch badha reaction hoga like hurt scenes n all.. But yeha to kuch v nhi tha.. I know wo sacrifice karta hai but sacrifice karne k liye v to hurt hone ka jarurat hai... Btw, nyc update.. Thnx for pm.

Part-10

Nyc update.. Ye kya golmal jalebi bana rhi hI roshni.. Pehle riya ki maan me ulta pulta ghusaya aab ariya ko Bombay bhej raha hai... Bichara arjun k dil me anjane me aur jayda hopes badh raha hai... Jaab usse saab pata chalega taab kya karega wo?? Fir se sacrifice?? Thanks for pm

Part-11

Nyc update.. Thnx for pm.. Cont soon.. N try to be more clear on hindi n dialogues.. 🙂