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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: renukajangid
New ariya story
Thank you so much for writing it
I am a huge ariya fan
your story sounds interesting
Plz continue soon

Thank you so much. I'll definitely continue as soon as possible.

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: armishra
Welcome dear
Fabulous prologue
Continue pls
Thanks for new story

Thanks a lot. The pleasure is all mine.

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shah10
Interesting prologue
Do continue please

Thank you. Yes that's for sure.

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
Plz continue dear.plz pm me when u will update.

Thank you so much. Yes I'll send you pm.

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Aayat.ariya14
don't know u r bhai aur behen!! but jo v ho plz Arjun se arjun+riya=ariya bana do na??? plz????? we love ariya.. only arjun ka kahani accha nahi lagega na without heroin... i mean suna suna lagega.. so plz...

I'm Behen. Areh!! who said its only Arjun. I said Riya has a major role. And who else can be the leading lady other than Riya. But you have to see whether they become Ariy a or not. Some suspense should be there in the story isn't it??

Edited by Arjunasr - 6 years ago

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#26

Important information :

The story will follow the show at least for some parts in the beginning. The characters will also be same as the show. However Riya will not die after Xora2. And Shree and Sameer will be very much present as well. ETF team will not suffer the untimely death. Raghu Sir will be a senior officer and not a retired personnel. The story will have two different timelines past and present will be told simultaneously.

Hope you all will like it. As of now this is the necessary information. I'll inform if there are any other things the reader needs to know.

For all those who had a doubt that whether this is only an Arjun story or not. Riya has a major role here and she is the leading lady but you have to wait and see how the story unfolds and see whether they become Ariya or not.

Edited by Arjunasr - 6 years ago

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balan04

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Go head... update soon 😊

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#28

Chapter 1:

The red light of the OT was switched on and they took inside Arjun drenched in his own blood. Riya recalled what the doctor said." There is major blood loss and may be some internal injury, he's very critical. Let's hope for the best."

She sat on a near by bench silently sobbing trying very hard to control her bleeding heart. She sat there and prayed to God that Arjun, her Arjun should be fine.

Others present there were equally distraught. Shree and Chotu were sitting together praying silently. Sakshi,Ayesha and Lisa tried very hard to control their tears but couldn't stop them for long. Sameer was altogether a different story. He never felt this much pain before not even when Roshni died. He didn't know what exactly he felt guilty, angry, heart broken and much more. He just wished his friend...nah second-in-command to get well soon.

The operation went on for hours. Nobody knew how much time passed. When all of a sudden Riya felt someone kneeling down in front of her with a glass of water.

Now the control which she held for days or Rather months broke. Rathore Sir was kneeling in front of her trying to console her offer her water. She threw the glass of water shocking every one . Then she roared like an angry lioness. "Kya dikhana chahte hai aap? Yahi ki aapko kitni fiker hai! Please yeh dhong mere saamne tho mat hi kijiye. Jab unhe apki jarurat t hi tab kaha the aap? Toh ab yeh jhooti concern kyu?"

Rathore was speechless he couldn't even look up to her. Aisha defending him shouted."Riya ". Riya turned to them and replied in a calm, yet angry voice." Kya hua bura laga sach sunke. I don't understand tum sab yaha kar kya rahe ho? Aur yeh dukh bhari shakal kyu bana rakhi hai? Tum sabko tho khush hona chahiya or rather party karni chahiya itna bada mission jo pura hogaya." Shree exclaimed. "Riya please aisa mat bolo Hume bhi Arjun Sir ki fikar hai!" Riya retorted firmly." Kitni fikar hai main dekh chukhi hu. Apni fikar apne paas rakho or chale jao yaha se. Arjun par bhalehi Sikander ne goli chalayi ho par trigger pe hath tum sab ka tha". Saying this she collapsed on the floor and broke down completely.

Others tried to approach her but she stopped them showing their hand. So all stayed back. Her mind drifted back to the days where it all began.

Edited by Arjunasr - 6 years ago

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Arjunasr

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Posted: 6 years ago

#29

Kaisa laga jarur batana? If you all don't like it I won't bother you all by my stories. Good or bad just let me know then only I'll continue otherwise I'll stop disturbing you all. Thanks a lot.