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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update
Hope Arjun is fine...
Pls pm me the update
Continue soon 😊
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Nice update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start
Eagerly waiting to know why riya said like that
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Res/unres

Yayy me first
Awesome update 👏
I'm already in love with this story ❤️
You have written this beautifully. The agony Riya felt was so clearly portrayed. This story has a very unique concept. ⭐️
There's a huge mystery already.
I have so many questions but I'm keeping them to myself for now. I'll just wait for the story to answer them.
One chapter in and I'm already hating the ETF team 😆
You said it might either be Ariya or just Arjun and Riya right? Ab kya bachchon ki jaan loge...😭
Thanks a lot for the pm
Please update soon...I'm not very patient 😉

Thank you giving such a long comment. You don't know how much it motivates me. You can ask your questions and I'll see what answer I can give.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: balan04

Nice update
Hope Arjun is fine...
Pls pm me the update
Continue soon 😊

Thank you. I tried to send pm but don't know what's wrong with it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessdivya

Nice update

Please update soon

Thank you. I'll continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya2812

awsm. continue soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

awesome

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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Nice start

Eagerly waiting to know why riya said like that
Cont soon

Thank you so much. Why Riya said so will gradually unfold with the story. So stay tuned.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2 :

Past
The surrounding was similar to the present scenario. Arjun stood outside the ward leaning on the wall. Sameer sat on the bench crying. While Chotu and Shree held Riya's hand and mourned over the loss of a dear friend.
An hour later when the doctor came to take the body for post mortem he was stopped by Arjun. An angry Rathore shouted. " Yeh kya kar rahe ho Rawte? Arjun in return asked the doctor. "Doctor aap please ek baar fir koshish kijiye. Ek baar aur test karke dekhiye mujhe lagta hai Riya zinda hai." The doctor was shocked he tried to contradict but one look at the four people present around told him not to do so.
He pushed the electric plates against Riya's body four to five times. Shree,Sameer,Chotu had lost hope already but Arjun insisted on trying again after the eighth try the miracle did happen and Riya responded back. The doctor exclaimed shock evident in his voice. " Aisa mere itne saalon ke carrier mein paheli baar hua hai. But how did you know ki woh zinda hai?" With this question every head turned towards Arjun. He replied in a lost voice. "Pata nahi bas pata tha ki woh zinda hai."
Like this one month passed and Riya was improving steadily. Every one came to meet her during the day but her eyes always searched for the one person for whom she returned even from death. Unknown to her and all others he came every night and stayed in the hospital and went before anyone else arrived. This was his daily routine from last one month. But one night he received a letter the hand writing was familiar.
It said." Bahar se dekhne se kaise pata chalega ki main kaisi hu? Agar roz aatehi hai toh ek baar mil lijiye. Aap ko sukun milega aur mujhe acha lagega." He was surprised to see the letter.
He slowly went inside only to see Riya flashing her beautiful smile. Before he could say anything Riya began."Aapko sabki fiker hai bas aap dikhate nahi hai. Warna aap khud apni life risk mein daal kar meri shooting mein madad kyu karte? Sab yaha tak ki Rathore Sir bhi mujhe yeh bolte rahe hojayega par apne is namumkin ko mumkin kar diya Thank you Sir. Aapko achese pata tha ki mein kis baat se affect hoti hu aapne wohi baate use karke - like research desk and mere kabilyat mujhse woh kaam karwaya jo shayad hi main kabhi karti. Thank you Sir. Exora2 khane se pehle bas aapka chehra saamne aya aur mujhe pata tha mujhe kya karna hai aur mujhe kuch nahi hoga". Arjun could not hold anymore and reflexively went to Riya and hugged her tightly after a while he left her and said." Mat karo mujhpe itna bharosa mat karo yeh pyaar in sabke layak nahi hu main." Riya." Woh mera matter hai. Par filhal dosti se shuru kare. Friends?". Arjun didn't know what to do a similar scenario flashed in front of him where in place of Riya he saw Sam his Sam he just mechanically shaked the hands and went away lost in his own thoughts.
From that day the relation between Arjun and Riya changed. It was not a proper friends relation but much better than just colleagues. May be it was the starting of a new friendship or may be something more!
After another month Riya was fit to rejoin ETF .




Edited by Arjunasr - 7 years ago

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