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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether


Thanks dear

And i will pm you

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Arjun mission par chalagaya aur criminals ke gang me Shamil bhi hogaya
Ab mission khatarnak horaha hai hope arjun safe rahe
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Cont soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
nice yaar...ab ye abbas katarnak hote ja raha hajn...hope arjun use acce se tackle kare...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Both the updates were beautiful dear

I loved how riya handled the situation very bravely.

loved their hug

Arjun successfully destroyed more than half of the gang

Now I feel after all this success, something will definitely happen which will endanger his life!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: affuaffu

Amazing update

Arjun mission par chalagaya aur criminals ke gang me Shamil bhi hogaya
Ab mission khatarnak horaha hai hope arjun safe rahe
Thanks for pm
Cont soon


Thanks dear

Yes he got into the gang and destroyed his business

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hurrom

nice yaar...ab ye abbas katarnak hote ja raha hajn...hope arjun use acce se tackle kare...


Thanks dear

Keep reading
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose

Both the updates were beautiful dear

I loved how riya handled the situation very bravely.

loved their hug

Arjun successfully destroyed more than half of the gang

Now I feel after all this success, something will definitely happen which will endanger his life!

update soon


Thanks dear
Yes Riya gave him strength

Yes there is always denger before huge success

Keep reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 18
After some more days Arjun is successful in creating doubts in Abbas' mind against his trustworthy goons and in anger he kill all of them.

Abbas(angry):Bas ab bahut ho gaya. Jo bhi gaddar hai use toh mai saza dekar rahunga. Agli deal ke liye mai khud jaunga aur apne tarike se pata karunga uss gaddar ka. Bahut nuksan kiya hai na. Aur ye police wale khud ko samajhte kya hain. Do chor kya pakad liye khud ko bhagwan samajhne lage.

Akram(mv):Ab aur hoshiyari se kaam lena hoga. Ye bhukhe sher ki tarah khatarnak hota jaa raha hai. Rathod ko inform karke phans sakta hu,koi aur rasta apnana hoga par mai ye mission adhura nahi rehna de sakta.

At night

All men were in their room including Akram unaware of the plan made by Abbas to catch the traitor.

In Akram's room

He came and directly lied on bed. He closed his eyes and saw all his team members and family members smiling at him. Suddenly he felt thirsty and got up to take water from stool kept at bedside. He was pouring the water in his glass when is eagle eyes caught something making him shocked but he immediately composed himself.

Akram(mv):Achha toh ye hai iska plan gaddar ko pakadne ka. Sabke kamron me hidden camera aur mike laga rakha hai. Abhi batata hu ise.

Akram(audible enough that Abbas coukd hear):Pata nahi kaun gaddar ghus gaya apun logo ki gang me. Bas ek baar pata chal jaaye na to boss se pehle apun hi uska kaam tamam kar dega. (Sighing fakely and thinking something) arre wah kya idea nikala hai apun ne uss gaddar ko pakadne ka. Abhi boss ke paas gaya toh chodenge nahi kal hi bataunga.

Saying so he sleeps peacefully.
Abbas:Akram to ho nahi sakta. Koi baat nahi kal iske plan se shayad mai use pakad saku.

Next morning

In Abbas room

Akram comes in his room chirpily.(showing like that)

Akram:Boss apun ke dimag me ek dhasu plan hai uss gaddar ko pakadne ke liye.

Abbas:Kya?

Akram:Saab ye dekho ye ek khali pendrive hai. Ham apne admiyon me ye baat faila dete hain ki isme apke khilaf sabut hain aur agar koi ise churane ki koshish karega matlab woh police se mila hua hai.

Abbas(smirk evilly):Wah!! Kya plan hai. Itne samay baad koi achha banda mila hai gang me. Chalo sabko ikattha karo.

Akram nods laughing inwardly. He calls all his men in lobby.

Abbas:Dekho sab dhyan se iss pen drive ko achhese se hifazat karke rakhni hai ise uss gaddar se.

One goon:Par isme hai kya saab?

Abbas:Woh dana jo machli fasane ke kaam ayega. Ye samajhlo is gang ki reedh ki haddi(backbone). Ye mai Akram ko de raha hu.

All nods.

At afternoon

All were doing their regular work when
Goon1:Arre Salim woh kagaz kahan hai jo maine tujhe diya tha kal.

Goon2:Raju bhai woh maine Akram ko sambhalne ke liye diya tha.

Raju:Thik hai mai abhi usse lekar aata hu.

Salim:Par wo toh boss ke saath hai.

Raju(thinks and said):Toh mai khud hi le aata hu uske kamre se.

He goes to his room. He was searching the drawers when both enters.

Abbas(angry):Toh tu hai woh gaddar...us pendrive ko churane aaya tha na.

Raju(fearly):Nahi saab..mai toh wo kagaz lene aaya tha jo Salim ne Akram ko diya tha..vishwas karo saab.

Abbas looks at Akram. He nods in yes.

Akram:Ruko mai deta hu.

He gives that paper to Raju. He leaves from there hurriedly.

Abbas(angry):Ye plan bhi nakamyab.

Akram:Koi baat nahi boss. Kal pata chal jayega.(mv) Wah Raju mera kaam asaan kar diya tune.

In lobby

Abbas:Kal hume deal ke liye jana hai sab tayar rehna.

Akram(mv):Ye toh naam aur time hi nahi bata raha hai.
(Smirk inwardly) ab khud hi Rathod ko batayega sab kuch.

He switch on the mike and camera.

In ETF

Rathod:Sab jaldi aao uska mike aur camera on ho gaya.
They see all and Rathod points towards Abbas telling them their main target.

In Delhi

Akram:Boss pata hai isse pehle apun jiske liye kaam karta tha na uski deal hamesha kisi gande godam ya gufa me hoti thi. Police se darte the bahut. Phir socha aise darpkon ke saath kaam karke kya fayda isiliye apun apki gang me aa gaya.

Abbas(smiles):Haan sahi kaha bilkul. Hain hi saare bheegi billi. Pata hai kal bhi ek 5-star hotel..kya naam tha..haan..white petals hotel me deal hone wali hai.

Akram(happily):Kya!! Pata hai apun pehli baar kisi 5-star hotel me ja raha hai.

Abbas:Chinta na kar. Ek baar deal badiya se ho jaaye tereko aur sabko wahan ka khana khilaunga.

All becomes happy.

Akram:Phir toh apun pura din pet khaali rakhega.

Akram:Arre uski zarurat nahi hai. Deal 12 baje hai aur taakat ki bhi toh zarurat hai isiliye bhukhe rehne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Akram:Thik hai jaisa aap kaho boss.

Abbas:Chalo sab kaam pe lag jao. Kal koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye.

Akram makes an excuse and go to washroom. Abbas let him go as he told a plan to him to catch traitor and is very happy with him.

Arjun(whisper):Rathod camera me jo Abbas ke peeche tha(Raju) kal use chod kar sab pe goli chalani hai...mujh par bhi and he switch off camera and mike and comes out and no one doubts him.

In ETF

Rathod:Brilliant Rawte!! Shree iss recording se uss admi ki photo Delhi ETF ko bhej do aur jo Rawte ne kaha sab samjha dena.

He nods and goes.

Riya(feels pround on Arjun): Wow sir!! Arjun sir ne to baaton baaton me sab ugalwa liya usse aur use pata bhi nahi chala. Bas ye mission achhe se ho jaye.

Chotu:Haan sir. Pata hai meri aai ne sir ke liye mannat mangi hai. Waise maine unhe bataya nahi khatre ke baare mein tab bhi..

Rathod:Haan guys wo bas sahi salamat aa jaye. Par wo Rawte hai jaan de dega par mission adhura nahi chodega.

Riya feels an unknown fear but shrugg it off trusting her god.

Riya(mv):Hey bappa bas Arjun sahi salamat ye mission pura kar laut aayen.

In Delhi

All were doing the last minute checking as now they were alert and can't take any risk.

Next day

At 11:45 Delhi ETF arrived in hotel as disguise. They came to know about private party to be held at 12 in lounge. They waited inside as bartender and waiters.
At 12 all goons and dealer arrived. They exchanged money and drugs and were about to go when suddenly one goon of Abbas got killed. Firing started from both the sides. Police almost killed half the men of Abbas and injured many and took the drugs into their custody. After some chasing one officer and Raju came in front of each other. Raju tried to run and officer faked like he let Raju go as he is on police's side. Another officer unwillingly shot Arjun on his arm so that no one doubts on him.

At Abbas' place

Abbas(angry):Urggh aaj phir raid pad gayi police ki.

Akram:Boss aapne wo dekha jo apun ne dekha.

Abbas(confused):Kya?

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Wah kya plan bana hai arjun ne abbas ki phasane ka
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
love it

Arjun ne Abbas ko Accha bevkoof banaya..

Upar se usse sare deal ki details bhi nikal Li..

n he get suceeded in making doubt all on Raju..

let's see what will happen..

plz continue soon

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