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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Dhasu update... Ammmazing... Hmmm rathod ko kuch kuch shak ho RHA h Ariya ko ya awayi Hawa me teer Chala RHA h ya hr just Arjun ko riya k naam see ched RHA h... Jo bhi ho ekdam masst...
Hmmm Arjun to Bada khush lg RHA h riya k saath honeymoon pe Jane k liye but Arjun bhulna mat undercover pe ja rhe ho maana k apni hi biwi k saath ja rhe ho but kisi ko pata nhi h na tumhari shadi k baare me to zara sambhal k rehna... Husband banane ki acting nhi krni padegi naturally hi ho jayega but over natural mat ban jaana warna kisi aur ka to pata nhi but Sam ya sakshi dono me se koi na koi zaroor pakad Lega... Hehehehe...
Eagerly waiting for next update... Continue nd thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
awesome dear
loved it
riya is so sensitive
now ariya are going as couples
they should not have to act now
waiting for next one
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care

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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Awesome update
Superb


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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Awesome updated .
Lovely moment..ariya
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
hey don't mind but I don't know why but mujhe laag rahi hai ki story me kuch misspelled hai .. I mean haar baar kuch point me aake yeisa lagti hai ki story ek dialogue scene se dusre me chale ja rahi hai... yeisa q mujhe pata nahi ... I think Mein bht jayda stress me hu so iss liye iska kahani kuch samajh nahi aa rahi hai.. btw nyc update .. thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Part 4
Rathod:Rawte tum Riya ko pick kar lena thik hai.

Arjun:Hmm thik hai. Hum kuch der mein pahunchte hain.

At sharp 6 Arjun car stops at ETF premises.All have already reached. Riya and Ayesha were looking beautiful. Ayesha has wore pink saree. While Arjun and Rathod were talking.

Shree(to Riya):Wah Riya tu kitni sundar lag rahi hai.

Chotu:Ha ek dam dhasu.

Shree(whisper in her ear):Ek dam Arjun sir ki wife lag rahi hai.

Riya bhush on his comment.
No one notice this.

Rathod:Chalo hume chalna chahiye.

All sit in SUV. Arjun is driving the car. Rathod's phone rings. Its commissioner's phone.

Rathod:Jai Hind Sir...yes sir...ok sir...thank you sir.

Arjun:Kya keh rahe the sir.

Rathod:Sir ne kaha Shimla pahunchte hi hume unka ek bharosemand admi milega jo hume hotel tak pahunch dega.

Arjun:hmm.

After sometime they reach airport.

In flight

Ariya, Samsha,Choree and Sakli sit together.During take off Riya tightly clutched Arjun's hand due to fear.

Riya:Sir mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.

Arjun:Don't worry mai hu na.

After sometime

He see Riya sleeping on his shoulder.He do not disturb her and starts reading newapaper.

Airhostess(to Arjun):Sir your breakfast.

Arjun takes it.She sees both and smile and goes.

Arjun(waking up Riya):Riya uth jao breakfast karlo. Tumne subah kuch nahi khaya.

Riya(murmuring):Please thodi der sone dijiye na.

Arjun:Achha breakfast karke so jana.

Riya(finally wakes up and see herself sleeping on his shoulder):Wo sorry...

Arjun:Its ok. Chalo kuch khalo.

Riya:Hmm.

After sometime they reach Shimla. They meet the men sent by commissioner. They follow him by different taxi.
Ariya in first. Sasha in second. Shree,Liza and Sakshi in third and Chotu in fourth.After reaching hotel they go in their repective rooms. Hotel manager invites all guests in party as it is 10th anniversary of hotel.

In Ariya's room

Riya has wore Pink saree and looking beautiful. Arjun has wore three peice black suit and looking handsome.

Arjun:Riya apna phone on rakhna aur sab par nazar rakha

Riya:Ji.

Arjun:Chalo.

In party

Host:Good evening everyone. I request all couples to join the stage.

Rathod(through bluetooth):Rawte Riya move aur sab par nazar rakhna.

All:Yes sir.

Ariya are dancing and are lost in each other eyes. Arjun's one hand is on Riya's bare waist and other is clutched with her hand and Riya's other hand is on Arjun's shoulder. Riya shivers. Song plays

Kachhi doriyon,doriyon,doriyon se
Maini tu bandh le
Pakki yaariyon,yaariyon,yaariyon me
Honde na fasle

(They remember their first meet.)

Eh narazagi kaagzi saari teri
Mere sohneya sunn le meri
Dil diya gallan...

(Their marriage.)

Karaange naal naal beh ke
Akh naal akh nu mila ke
Dil diyan gallan haaye...

(They have an eyelock.)

Rathod:Officers wahan bar counter ke paas ek admi hai uska peecha karo.

Ariya come out of their trance. All move.
They catch him.

Arjun:Kya hua kyun bhaage wahan se.

Man:Wo wo saab...

Arjun slaps him.

Arjun:Bol warna

Admi:Saab wo ek admi ne mujhe rishwat di thi aur mujhe laga apne dekh liya isiliye.

Arjun:Kis cheez ki rishwat.

Admi:Usne mujhe ek admi ki drink mein kuch milane ke liye kaha tha.

Rathod:Kya milane ke liye kaha tha. Kisne kaha tha.

Admi:Malum nahi saab. Wo ab ja chuka aur andhere ke karan uska chehra nahi dekh paya. Mujhe jane dijiye.

Rathod:Damm it!! Chotu le jao isse. Aaj kuch haath nahi lag paya. Baki kal kare ge.

In Ariya's room

They reach their room, change and sleeps

At midnight

Riya turns and does not find Arjun on bed. Then she sees balcony door open. She goes and see him looking at sky.

Riya:Aap soye nahi abhi tak

Arjun:Bas neend nahi aa rahi thi. Kuch yaad aa gaya.

Riya:Aap mujhse share kar sakte hain.

Arjun:Riya janti ho tumhare meri zindagi mein aane se pehle mera pyar shadi rishtey in sab pe se vishwas uth gaya tha. Attet ne jo ghav diya wo shayad abhi tak nhi bhara. Training period mein mujhe ek ladki se pyar hua uska naam Roshni tha par mujhe kya pata tha wo mujhe dhokha de degi.

Flashback

(Conside that Arjun is tellimg her)

Arjun as usual goes to meet Roshni at beach and see her hugging some boy.

Arjun(shouts):Roshni...ye sab kya hai.

Roshni(laughing):Arre tumhe pata chal gaya. Tumne kya socha main tumse pyar karti hu. Tumne apne so called sapne ke liya apne papa ke paise chod diye. Mai kyu struggle karu tumhare saath. Ye sikandar hai mera sachha jeevan saathi.

Arjun(crying and angry):Tumne mujhe dhokha diya. Jitna pyar tumse kiya usse zyada nafrat karta hu tumse.

Riya hugs the crying Arjun tightly like taking away all his pain. After sometime they realise their position and separates.

Arjun:Thanks Riya.

Riya:Isme thanks ki kya baat hai husband wife ka rishta dosti ka to hota hai.

Arjun:Riya hum dost ban sakta hain.

Riya:Haan kyun nahi.

They shake hands and says:Friends.
Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Nice update👏👏
What will be Shree's reaction when he will come to know that Riya is Arjun's wife😃😃
Ariya's scene inside the flight was cute.
Its nice to see Arjun cares for Riya.
The Dance scene and flashback was short but nice😳😳😳
So Roshni ditched Arjun for Money😡
Ariya's conversation was beautiful.

Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting...
Thanks for the Pm...



Edited by kurkuresandwich - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
nice update but it was short one
still I enjoy it dear..
I love the way Arjun share his
pain with Riya. god it was nice dear.
keep it up and .uodate next soon

thanks for pm.

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