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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Awesome
Sakshi jealous
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Very nice update
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Awesome updated..
Ariya first meet ri's marriage..???
Woo interesting..
N ri jealous sk .. hahahaha..
Love it..
Waiting for next..
Thanksss for pm dear..
Updated..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Wow yaar superb...
Bahot achha
Arjun ka fb dekh kar toh mujhe yahi lag raha hai ki kuch aisa hua hoga wahan jiske wajah se ariya ko majbooran shadi karna pada...
Anyways what matters is ariya r together...
Just hope woh dono jaldi hi apani feelings ko jaan le...
oh wow sakshi ka jalofy session...hmm amazing...
Loved it...
Cont soonsoon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
part 1
nice update
ariya are married but vo is baar ko sabse kyun chupake rakhe hai
but they care for each other
pyar bhi karte hai but ab tak realization nahi huva hai bas
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
part 2
loved it
riya ki shadi arjun ka friend ke sath hone vali thi tho ariya ki shadi kaise huyi
interesting update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Part 3
Suddenly a case arrives. A husband has killed his pregnant wife due his financial conditions he didn't want the baby.

After the case all except Samjun are sitting in conference room. All were thinking about recent case.

Riya:Koi admi aisa kaise kar sakta hai. Apne khud ke bachhe ko mar diya.

Chotu:Ye duniya aisi hi hai Rii koi kisi ke baare mein nahi sochta.

Riya:But fir bhi uski financial conditions jaisi bhi ho paisa apne khoon se zaroori hota hai kya.

Samjun hears them and enters conference room.

Arjun:Ye zindagi hai Riya aur iss zindagi tumhe kayi log milenge kuch achhe kuch bure.

Rathod:Huh..anyways bahut late ho gaya baki ka kaam kal kar lena.Abhi ghar jao. Rawte tum kuch der yahin rukna.

All goes.

At Parking

Riya:Shree Chotu agar tumhe koi problem nhi hai to mujhe drop kar doge.

Shree:Arre Ri ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Chal baith ja.

Chotu:Tu kuch disturb lag rhi hai case ki wajhe se.

Riya:Nahi yaar bas mujhe bura lag raha hai Sujata (victim) ke liye.

While talking they were about to reach her home.

Riya:Bas Shree mujhe yahin chod do.

Shree:Arre par tera ghar to agli gali mein hai na.

Riya:Haan par tumhare liye wahan gadi le jani mushkil ho jaegi. Ok bye good nyt.

Shree nd Chotu:Bye.Good nyt.

Same time in ETF office

Rathod:Kya hua Riya ko aise dekh kar bura lag raha hai.

Arjun:Aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahe ho Sam. Tum jante ho na wo kitni sensitive hai.

Rathod:Acha par maine to kuch nhi kaha.

Arjun(irritatedly):Sam

Rathod(laughing):Acha sorry. Chal chalte hain.
They were about to reach his home.

Arjun:Bas yahin rok de.

Rathod:chal bye good nyt.

Arjun:Good nyt

At ariya home

Riya is making dinner.

Arjun:Riya tum thik ho?

Riya:Arjun ek baat kahu. Mai sach mein khud ko bahut manti hu jo aap meri life mein aaye.

Arjun:Aisa kyun bol rahi ho Riya maine tumpe koi favour nahi kiya bas wo kiya jo uss waqt mujhe thik laga aur aage se aisa mat kehna. Thik hai.

She nods.

Arjun:Aaj office mein maa ka phone aya tha. Mai batana bhul gaya baat kr lena unse.

Riya:hmm

After dinner she talk to her mother and both sleeps.

Like this days are passing and now its two months Riya joined ETF.

One day

Rathod:Officers abhi commissioner sir ka phone aya tha. Wo kuch der mein yahan aa rhe hain.

After sometime he arrives.

All:Jai Hind sir

Commissioner:Jai Hind. Rathod Shimla ke ek hotel mein kuch honeymoon couples ki maut ho rahi hai. Main chahta hu tum aur tumhari team undercover jao aur un criminals ko pakdo. Ye lo file is mein saari details hai.

Rathod(taking the file):Ok sir. Jai Hind.

After that commisioner goes.

Rathod starts briefing the case.

Rathod:Shimla ke hotel Paradise(fake name) mein kuch honeymoon couples ki maut ho rahi hai. 3 couples ki laash mili hai aur sabka alag alag tarike se.khoon kiya gaya hai.

Arjun:Inka aapas mein kuch connection.

Rathod:Nahi sab alag jagah se hain. Mumbai Delhi aur Kerela.

Sakshi:Ho sakta hai koi psyco.

Riya:Nahi agar pysco hota to inka ek tarah se katla hota.

Arjun:Ho sakta hai inhone kuch aisa dekh liya ho jo inhe nahi dekhna chahiye tha.

Rathod:Possibility hai. Par exact wajah wahi jakar pata chalegi. Hum sab wahan undercover jayenge.

Sakshi(mv):Yess mai Arjun ki wife banke jaungi.

Rathod:Mai aur Ayesha aur Rawte aur Riya couples banke jayenge.Shree Sakshi aur Liza tum log college students and Chotu hotel main waiter.Got it.

All except Arjun:Yes sir.

Ariya(mv):Acha hai acting nahi karni padegi. Bilkul natural lagega.

Rathod:Toh hum kal subah niklenge. Shree flight ki ticket aur nakli identity ka intezam kar dena. Kal subah 6 baje tak sab pahunch jana yahan. Don't be late.

All except Arjun:Yes sir.

Next morning

Riya was getting ready in front of the mirror.Then Arjun enters

Arjun:Riya zara iss shirt ka button laga do.

Then he sees her get lost in her. She is wearing beautiful blue saree with mimimal make up and looking simple yet elegant.

Riya:Dijiye mai laga deti hu tab tak aap fresh ho jaiye. Waise mai kaisi lag rahi hu.

Arjun:Achhi lag rahi ho but kuch missing hai.

Riya:Kya

Arjun:Ek minute

Then he take sindoor from dressing table and applies in her partition. Riya closes her eyes. Then he turns her towards mirror. He makes her wear mangalsutra.

Arjun:Ab thik hai. Tum bhul gayi hum honeymoon couple bankar ja rahe hai.

Then Arjun phone rings.Its of Rathod

Rathod:Rawte tum Riya ko pick kar lena thik hai.

Arjun:Hmm thik hai. Hum kuch der mein pahunchte hai.



Edited by Ariyatogether - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Loved it dear
Awesome update
I really loved how things are getting sorted between Ariya
I case was really interesting
Let's see how they deal with it
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
read it today dear
story concept is very interesting.

the main question is why they are hiding
there relationship front of others.
will love to know the answer.

it's very nice story the way
Arjun care for her
very nice the way there
is portray here is nice
love the way Riya make Sakshi
jealous. cool update next soon
dear I really like this story it's
look simple and Sweet with
little suspense.

keep it up with your talent dear
and thanks for pm
update next soon as well dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Story is awesome
Thanks for pm

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