Ariya OS series-Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..os1 pg1,os2 pg8 os3 pg17(Complete - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi everyone..

yes I m back..back for my friends who really wish to read my story..

thanks to all who support me..I was in dillema n really bad mood..

but narcony,sathrishi,Megha,sheryashi,bhoomi ,Sana n shital were there who help me to come out of from this..they were behind me not to discontinue my work..
thank u guys..

n the readers who commented after my note also,their comment make me feel light..


so I m back with my updates who really wanted to read them..

thank u all..TC..

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Posted: 8 years ago
OS 3:-

riya(yell):-jeet..

arjun(sr):-abhi..?

here taking advantage of this situation sikandar run away with his 2 men..but chotu caught hold of wounded altaf..

all rest of them(including the undercover officer with little arjun) rush to abhi..

riya(while crying):-jeet..??

sam:-abhi..

riya:-ye kya kiya jeet..?

abhi:-relax guys..kuch nahi hua he muze..goli bas shoulder ko chuke gayi he..

riya:-kuch ho jata toh jeet.?

abhi:-plz..ritz..kuch nahi hua he..dont worry..come on guys..sikanadar kahi jyada dur na bhag jaye..

They all rush behind direction of sikandar.

Again firing starts from both end..but atlast Arjun encounter sikandar..n took his revenge..

Years goes on like it..

All are happy with their family..Arjun is too in peace after killing sikandar..Etf ,abhiriya,Arjun(jr) all now part of his family..

They are are retired from their job..n settled in Mumbai..

Etf now had new gereneration officers in their team including ACP Arjun Abhijeet banerji..

Arjun(jr) is married to Sneha (Samsha daughter)..



One fine day..

Abhi entered in his room after morning walk..

Abhi:-ritz utho..Kitna time ho Gaya he yaar..

Riya open her eyes little lazily..n she sit on bed ..

Abhi:-kya hua..?

Riya:-pata nahi jeet..bada ajeeb lag Raha he..aisa lag Raha he uthu hi nahi..Dil bhi bahot baichain he na Jane Kyo..

Abhi(worrily):-achanak Kyo..?tum rest Karo..mein doctor ko phone karta hu..

Riya:-nahi..Nahi..doctor ki zarurat nahi..mein Zara fresh ho jati hu..shyad Accha lage..

Saying this she turn to bathroom..but suddenly stop on her track..

Riya:-hey bhagwan..

Abhi rush to her..

Abhi:-are Kya hua..?thik ho na..?

Riya:-jeet ye Dekho..

Saying this she show him the chain(yes the same chain Arjun gifted her,which was of roshni earlier)..

Abhi:-ye toh tut gayi..

Riya;-ha..Dekho na kaise tut gayi..jeet Muze bahot ajeeb lag Raha he..

Abhi:-relax Ritz..Kitni purani chain thi ye..Aur fir tum hamesha pehne rakhti thi..Kabhi nahi nikalti thi..issliye tut gayi..it's ok..

Riya:-nahi jeet..Mera Dil bahot ghabra Raha he..Arjun sir thik toh honge na..Muze far lag Raha he jeet..

Abhi;-ritz relax..u r very attached to this chain issliye tumhe aisa feel ho Raha he..

Riya:-arjun sir thik honge na..?Muze dar lag Raha he..1 week ho Gaya unse baat kiye..

Abhi:-relax..relax Ritz..Accha ek kaam karte he..Arjun ko phone karte he..usse baat Karo..fir tumhe relief milega..wait I call him..

Saying this abhi make call to Arjun..but he didn't pick up..abhi call to his landline phone..n after talking ,abhi is looking worried..

Riya:-kya hua..?tum kuch bol Kyo nahi Rahe..?

Abhi:-arjun ke servent ne bataya usse heart attack hua he..he is hospitalised..

Riya(panicked):-muze milna he unse .jeet plz..

Abhi:-ritz kuch nahi hoga usse..Chalo..ham issi waqt chalate he..

Abhi Riya inform all other too..

All now reach to hospital..

Abhi:-arjun..ye Kya yaar..apna khayal nahi rakha Kya..?ab jaldi thik ho ja..

Arjun:-nahi abhi..ab waqt nahi he..

Riya come near Arjun..

Riya(with teary eyes):-arjun sir..

Arjun:-riya..bas..bas Tumhara hi wait Kar Raha tha..

Riya look to him..their eyes met..soft smile crept on his lips..

N then his eyes become lifeless..

Abhi:-arjun..

Sam:-arjun..Arjun..

All couldn't stop their tears..

Riya walk on backside in shock till her back hit to wall..she sit on floor taking support of wall..

Abhi wipe his tears..n he turn to look Riya..he saw Riya sitting on floor taking support of wall..he rush to her..

Abhi:-ritz..Ritz..tum..

But he realized that Riya is not flattering her eyelids..her eyes only have emptyness..

Abhi(shocked n worried):-riya..Ritz..Ritz..

All gaze now turn to hear abhi's loud voice..n swing riya's state they all rush to her..

Abhi hold riya's hand..it's cold..he look her shocked..he try to shake her..n that's when her body fell on floor indicating that she too also gone away..

Abhi n arjun(jr) tears has no end..

Later on Arjun(jr) did all rituals of Arjun(sr) n Riya ..

After 15 days..

They all are again in same hospital..waiting outside a room..

Doctor come out ..

Arjun(jr):-doctor..Kya hua..?papa thik he na..?treatment ka asar ho Raha he na..?

Doctor:-i m sorry..Mr.abhijeet is not responding to our treatment ..it's like he is not even wanted to..

Arjun(jr):-mom ki death ke baad Unhone khana Pina chod diya..ham Sab koshish karte Rahe but Unhone Nahi mana..

Doctor sigh..

Doctor:-aap unse mil lijiye..

They went inside room..

Arjun(jr):-papa plz..aap Muze aise chod Nahi ja sakhte..

Abhi(I'm slow tone):-sorry beta..but ab Nahi ruk sakhta..Ritz ke Jane ke baad itne din zinda Raha yahi bahot he beta..apna khayal rakhna..

Abhi close his eyes to never open them again..



After some more days..

Sam's home..

Arjun(jr) n Sneha had come to meet Samsha..

Sneha n aayesha are in kitchen..

Arjun(jr) still in grief though acting as calm..

He has lost 3 most important person in his life during such a short time span..

First he lost Arjun(sr) who was his mentor come friend..he mom..n then his papa too..

Arjun(jr):-yakin nahi hota..aisa lag Raha he abhi Kal hi ki baat he ke ham Sab ek sath chit chat Kar Rahe the bahot Khushi se..achanak se ye sab Kya ho Gaya Sameer uncle..

Sameer:-zindagi aise hi he beta..aane wala pal Kya leke aayega keh Nahi sakhte..

Arjun(jr):-abhi bhi yakin nahi hota meine apne zindagi ke 3 important logo ko aise kho Diya..most important log..

Sameer sigh..

Sameer:-tumhe Yaad he Arjun..Woh story Jo tumhe bachpan me sunayi thi..jisame prince ko princess nahi milati..

Arjun stress his brain..

Arjun(jr):-ha ..kuch Yaad toh he..prince ki princess ki koi devil usse dur Kar deta he..fir uss prince ko koi Aur princess milati he..Lekin..fir..(he is trying to remember)

Sam:-lekin prince ko darhhe ke Kahi devil iss princess ki bhi na usse dur Kar de..issliye prince uss princess ki khud se dur Jane ki bolta he..n dusare prince se shadi Karne ko bolta he..

Arjun(jr):-yes right..Aur woh princess bhi us second prince Jo Usaka best friend bhi he usake Sath shadi karti he..n they have little prince too..n then..

Sam:-then story ends here..

Arjun(jr) stared Sam..he don't know iss story ka Kya relation Inn sabse..

Sam:-woh prince..Arjun tha..usaki princess roshni..Jisse sikandar ne maar diya tha..usaki Zindagi Ka sirf ek hi maksad tha sikandar ko saza dena..fir..usaki Zindagi me ek Aur princess aayi..

Arjun(jr) stared him..

Sam:-riya..Tumhari mom..

Arjun(jr):-what..?

Sam:-they both fall in love ..but Arjun always has fear to loose Riya like roshni..he wants to keep her safe. He ask her to move on..go ahead in life with u know whom..

Arjun(jr)(shocked):-second prince means my papa..?

Sam:-abhi n Riya shift to Kolkata after marriage..n u come to this world..

Arjun:-aur Unhone Mera naam Arjun rakha..unki Yaad me(he means Arjun(sr))

Sam:-yes..u r the little prince..after some years..they back to Mumbai..n finally sikandar also get punished.

Arjun(jr):-all the time they were telling me their own life story..n I used to ask them how wired the story is..n how wired it's end..

He get teary..

Sam put his hand on Arjun(jr)'s shoulder..

Sam:-kuch kahaniya aise hi hoti he..adhuri ..ek adhuri pyas ki tarah..

END..


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey me first😉😳
Didu first of all i likked it very much...
Ye sirf behalane keliye nahi par dil se bol rahi hun...
Kyunki iss mein ariya ki pure love reflect hota hai..
Which is eternal...
Woh baat alag hai mein ro rahi hun...
Par beautiful writing..
Story ko aapne apani tarike se bahoth achhe se judge kiya hai...
And big wala hug...ki aap wapis aa gai...
Thank u so much for that...
Love u diii😳
Edited by nicronyariya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks dear decision change karne ke liye

welcome back

rulaya yaar

teeno ek pyaar sachhi hai..

apne pyaar ko khoker is duniya se chalegaye hei...emotional one...thanks for pm


Edited by SATRISHI - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yey welcome back luv u dear once again emotional os sach mein Arjun ki zindagi ek adhuri pyaas hi rah gai itna pyar kiya Riya se per apna nahi pay Riya ne bhi pyar kiya Arjun see per uske life mein abhi tha jiske saath woh khush thi u with Jeet ke saath aage bad gai e k khushal life ji Arjun nahi to Riya nahi riya nahi toJeet nahi superb thanks for pm dear
Edited by ruhi1985sheetal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all Thank God ... You are finally back
Now coming to update
As usual beautiful and emotional
In this I really loved one thing that all lead their lives positively
Arjun Junior was totally shattered after his parents and Arjun s demise
Sameer told him the truth
Beautiful ending some desires are left incompleted
Thanks for the PM
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy welcome back
Emotional Os
Arjun n Riya aur abhi ke Jane ke baad
Sam ne Jr Arjun ko bachpan me kahi hai story abhi n ariya Ki unki apni story kehte the ya bataya
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy welcome back
Emotional Os
Arjun n Riya aur abhi ke Jane ke baad
Sam ne Jr Arjun ko bachpan me kahi hai story abhi n ariya Ki unki apni story kehte the ya bataya
Love it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Welcome back dear
Beautiful nd emotional os dear
Thxc 4r pm

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