Ariya OS series-Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..os1 pg1,os2 pg8 os3 pg17(Complete

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

YAY!!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!! WOOHOO!!!!!

awesome update yaar

loved it

Arjun ko kho kar Riya ki saansein ruk gayi and Riya ko kho kar Abhi ki

unke jaane ke baad Arjun ko bachpan mein suni hui kahani ka rahasya pata chala

nice one

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

first of all thanks alot for coming back aur ha ab se jo positive hai unhi ke bare me sonchiye aur jo negative hai unhe ignore kijiye jo aapke writing ki importance nahi samajte unki bato ko importance dekar aap apna time aur mood dono kharab mat kijiye ok now coming to update

its really awesome

loved it

iska end mujhe bahoth rulaya but pasand bhi aya

ye end bilcul uske name ko suit karta hai

thanks for pm

bye take care

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Welcome welcome welcome 🤗

Welcome back dear

I m so happy for you 🥳🥳

Emotional but very nice os

Love it

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Hey welcome back dear
it's party time [:D/]
emotional one
loved it
thnx for pm
decision change Karne ke liye thank u very much

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ramshaasrar

@ramshaasrar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

First welcome back dear...
N about this is...this is my personal opinion...this is the perfect ending of this story...tu meri adhuri pyaas...it is not all about arjun's love ...is main Riya ka bhi adhora pyar hai...this one is the best ending ...loved it...n thnx for pm

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angelshah

@angelshah

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Wow
I can't think of better ending
And ur last line touch my heart
Thank you for completing this story
Its not always about happy ending

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gauri

@ariya143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

superb end dear..
but really so emotional yaar..
rula he diya tum ne..
but love to read...
arj n ri n abhi.. awesomee love .. speechless..
I m fans of u r thought's..lovely dear..
gud going...

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Aliya Tarannum

@Aliya_786

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

thanks for coming back dear

wow awesome yaar

lloved it

but bahot rulaya 😭

thanks for pm

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Swati

@Ariya_2425

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Welcome back, di

Awesome os

Arjun ko heart attack aata he, or uski wajah se riya bhi chali jaati he, or fir abhi bhi nahi reh pata

That's wonderful and emotional too

Sam arjun jr ko bachpan waali story yaad dilata he or uska real meaning samjata he

Arjun shock ho jata he k, uske parents ne apni hi story use bataayi thi

Beautifully written

Thanks for PM

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Amazing OS

I personally would have prefered 3rd one its really great

But i actually always wanted one in which Arjun dies in the fight with sikander nd Abhi nd Riya has to deal with it but eventu ally live a happy life kinda

But this are amazing too

Edited by Cieli.Santi - 8 years ago