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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Swadarsh
Nice start...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: neelpari
amazing updated
loved it
all characters very cute but poor neel n bhumi
waiting how their life change after growing up
update sooner
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yeah poor neel n bhumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Awsome update..

Love it

Plz update soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
sorry for late exams
loved it
everybodys child hood was good
sabki upbringing alag-alag mahol mein hui
humare hero ke naseeb mein heroine pehle se hi likhi hui hai
nice
cont soon

thanks dear

its ok i can understand don'tbe sorry

yeah sabki life n situation alag alag hai

he he alredy sabki jodi ban chuki hai

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Everybody has their own bg story so sad

Interesting start

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: madmadona
Everybody has their own bg story so sad
Interesting start
Cont soon

all has their own story

glad u find it interesting

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wordsofwisdom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Awesome update diii
Wow aap humesha ki tarah pen portrait awesome krte ho
So the new character their glimpse of childhood
Will give us info about their passion, obsession& more about their characters
Dii update soon
Thanks for pm
And sorry for late reply

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: angelariya
Awesome update diii
Wow aap humesha ki tarah pen portrait awesome krte ho
So the new character their glimpse of childhood
Will give us info about their passion, obsession& more about their characters
Dii update soon
Thanks for pm
And sorry for late reply

thanku dear

i am glad you like it

will give information with updates soon

its ok do study well

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

part 2

20 year later

location Ahemdabad

one girl is driving her bike fastly.she has wore black skin tight leather pent n jacket .and helmet on her head. she is driving fastly n roughly . she stop her bike infront of a big bungalow .

she take off her helmet n enter her house. one women in her late 40's stop her

lady - bhumi. ye koi time hai ghar aane ka . ek to apne dad ki iccha k khilaf tumne mba course chod diya.shadi k kai rishte thukra chuki ho. or tumhari aadatien uff na ghar aane jaane ka koi time. kaha se aati ho kaha ja rahi ho kuch pata nahi. pareshan ho gayi hu mai tumse. kaisi ladki ho tum.

bhu - ab kya kare mrs shah ,aise ma -baap jinhe ladne k alwaa kabhi kuch aya hi nahi usnki beti kaisi hogi.or uspar aap jaisi ma ki parwarish..

she smile sarcastically

bhu - n haa aaj k bad aapko mere liye ya meri wajah se pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi . jaa rahi hu mai humesha humesha k liye. ye puri property or dad aapke or apke baccho ke.

she rush to her room n pack some imp things n come back. mrs shah is still there. she touch finger with her head n wish good bye.

mrs shah - mai tumhare dad se kya kahungi

bhu - ohh comeon mrs shah aaj tak kitni to stories bana kar aapne unhe sunai hai .ek or bana dena. kya fark padta hai..anyway i know aap dekh lengi.

she leave n mrs shah smrik evilly ,

she sit on her bike n leave for railway station .

railway station Ahemdabad

one boy is waiting for her

bhu - chotu ticket ka intzam ho gaya

cho - haa madam.ap jaa rahi hai humesha k liye

bhu - ha ja rahi hu finally . but don't worry teri padai ka kharch bhejti ragungi.

ch - mam I'll miss you..kya ek akhiri bar aapko didi bula sakta hu

bhu - dekh chotu is pure shaher mai tu mera khas hai..to q rishta jodakar apni tuning kharab karta hai tu janta hai na mai rishton mai believe nahi karti.

ch - aap to wo ho mam jisne mujh jaise chai ki dukan par kam karne wale ladke ki life bana di,apka nam kaise lu. ap ki jagah bahut respected hai

bh - urgg tu bhi chod wo sab mere dad ne paisa hi to kamaya hai . thoda acche kam par kharch kar diya unke bhi paap dhul jayenge..chal nikalti hu padai karna acche se,,bye or ye le meri bike key

ch - bye mam

she give him her bike key n bid bye.she sit in train . hers is windows seat.so she side the curtains n look outside from ac coach window glass..there are many people on railway station . may people come there to seeoff their loved ones. they are bidding bye hugging each other. n some taking blessings of elders..she look at the envelope in her hand .SAAT is written on it..

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

scene shift

jaipur Rajasthan

a big haweli is decorated like bride. are happily dancing n enjoying n hustle bustle all around .

one man in his mid 50's is talking with a guy in his late 20's

man - sharad pure ek saal mai aya hai or ab. kya tune faisla le liya hai chora.

sha - haa bapu sa humne faisla kar liya hai .hum jana chahte hai

man - par beta yaha thare ko koi kami koni hai .to sare aram chod kar kai ja raha hai.,( you have all luxury here so why are u going )

sha - bat aaram ki koni bapusa mahre ko des ki sewa karni hai, jo mara khun desh k kam ni aya to kahe ka khun . or aram ki ye saj saman ki koi parwah koni manne

(its not abt luxury dad .i want to serve my country..if my blood is for my country n i don't care abt these luxurious life n all materials )

man sigh- jaisi thari marji ladeshwar .aaj tak manne thari koi bat tali koni .ya bhi man levenge. jane ke pehle meera se mil lena .bechari chori kab se thari rasta dekh rahi hai.

(as u wish my dear. till now we don't interfere in ur decision n now also we will accept it. but before going meet meera .poor girl she was waiting for you from long time)

sha - bapu sa manne kuch kehna hai thare ko, mai ye byah koni kar saku( dad i want to say something. i can't do this marriage)

man shocked - kai bol ryah hai chora tu. bawra ho gaya hai..kai nahi kari thare ko shadi

(what are you talking boy . are you gone mad . y don't wnt to marrry her)

sh - maine shadi k bare mai socha koni hai . or waise bhi meera mahri siraf dost hai. usse jyada kuch koni.

they discuss on that topic for long time.n sharad come out of room.

all are very much sad by his decision. he is packing his bag. when he hear payal sound..he know who is coming

sha ( without turning )- meera tu

mee - ja rahe ho

sha - hmm..mujhe laga mera decision sunne k bad tum milne nahi aaogi.

mee - aare waah us rishte k liye jo kabhi bana hi nahi hum apne bachpan ki dosti ka rishta tod dete,

sha - tumne ek bar bhi sawal nahi kiya ki maine mana q kiya.

mee - aapki marji . hum aapko rok to sakte hai shayad bandh bhi le. par pyar aajadi dene ka nam hai bandhan ka nahi.

sha - chal chalta hu .dhyan rakhna apna.bas bhaisa ki shadi k liye ruka tha .aaj uske bhi function khatam. pehle headquarter report karna hai fir jaunga.

mee - ye lo

she forward him his flute

sha - iska wahan koi kam nahi

mee - jante hai hum aap bahut badal gaye hai,ab aap pehle ki tarah nahi rahe par kabhi us purane sharad ki yad aaye ya is meera ki yad aaye to koi dhun baja lijiyega,

shr - tu bilkul nahi badli meera

meera smile - shard to aap hai. ek khubsurat mausam badal jana aapki fitrat hai . hum to meera hai hume to bas pyar or intjaar karna hi aata hai.

sha - bye,

mee- bye. apna dhyana rakhiyega

sha - tu bhi.

he take an envelope n put it in bag n leave . she look at his back till he is visible to her. tears are flowing from her big beautiful eyes.

scene shift

location- chennai

police residential quarter

one girl is doing puja . she complete her puja.her phone ring and she attend it.

gi - shivya aiyyar

os - mam have you decided

shi - yeah i am in,

os - great collect your letter from headquarter.

she get ready fast n go to headquarter . she complete some formalities n take an envelope n come out side.she look at envelope n sigh,.she is in dilemma she shuld do it or not..she decide something n take a taxi n give driver a adress..taxi zoomed off n after 45 mins it reached infront of a big house.

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