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she pay driver n look at house teary . she move her feet toward house n stop suddenly. but sometime later she decided to do it n enter house.

she enter n a girl of 16 year look at her n runningly come to her n hug her..

gi - shivi akka..i can't believe its u.eppadi irukinga(how r u)

shi - nan nalla irukken(I'm fine.)

they hear a loud voice

what that girl is doing here..n samhitha y r u talking with stranger

shi (with tears in her eyes)- thatha . I'm not starnger .I'm your shivi

mr aiyar - our shivi died one n half year ago.now you get lost.we don't know you.

shi - thatha just listen to me. amma

she look at her mother with teary eye n her mother try to come to her teary eye. but her grand father stop her.


shivi run from there cryingly.

she sit on road crying. n clutch the envelope in her hand. someone put hand on her shoulder n ask her what happened. then she understand she is crying on road n all are looking at her..she nod in no n leave from there.



scene shift

location - kolkatta

one boy is standing in his balcony. friend come n meet him.

boy - hai nalin kemon acho

neel - ami bhalo achi onir.

oni - so you finally got it.

neel - yeah.,ab mai apni bharat ma ki sewa karunga . or dekhna is desh ke dushmano ke chakke chuda dunga.

oni - kal shubra ki shadi hai.

neel smile sadly.

nee - i know .usne bataya tha jab hum last time mile the.

oni - tu dukhi mat ho yar. dekhna tujhe bahut acchi ladki milegi or tujhe fir se pyar hoga.

neel - hum jaise anath logon ki kismat mai pariwar nahi hote. qki agar hote to itne orphanage nahi hote,khair chod. mujhe thodi der mai nikalna hai mai maa ko lekar aata hu.tu taxi bula

he left for his room n pick a idol of ma durga from his desk.

nal - chalo ma humara yaha waqt khatam hua. nahi jindg nayi manjilien humara intjar kar rahi hai..sab khatam hone k bad kuch kaise shuru hota hai ye bhi dekh lete hai..he pack idol in a box n put in bag n come out.

he board taxi hug onir n texi zoomed off..

scene shift
location varanasi up

its time of ganga aarti..all are doing arti.n after arti all take blessing of ma ganga. one guy is standing at ganga's bank n looking at diyas..he touch his locket . suddenly people hear a loud voice of painful cry. a woman come to him

wo - beta bachao mere bacchi ko.do gunde use utha kar le gaye.

all just look at her n she is crying

guy - kaha le gaye use,kaun the wo.

wo - kai dino se ek admi humari urmi k piche pada tha. wo bichari mana kar rahi thi.,wo log jabardasti utha kar le gaye. bahut bade gunde hai.,

guy - nam bataiye unka

woman tell him name. he take a bike from hotel n rush toward destination



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Posted: 8 years ago
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he stop outside a bungalow . he leave bike n run inside. some goons are drinking wines they look at him n ask who is he

guy - urmi kahan hai.

goon - kaun urmi..

guy - ek bar puchta hu . or ek bar mai jawab chahiye hota hai mujhe qki dusri bar jawab dene layak chodta nahi hu

goon 2 - ha ha ha ye to hero lagta hai . kya entry mari hai ab panch min mai humare jaise mushtando ko dhar dabochea,.

all laugh but really in next five min all are laying on floor all injured ..

guy - bakwas karne ki ya sunne ki aadat nahi hai mujhe..urmi kaha hai..

one goon fealy - uu,.uupar

he rush upside by stairs n see a man is forcing a girl..his blood boils.

he punch man n take a curtain n put it on girl her dress is tored. she get up n cover herself . guy beat the man badly n girl is sobbing out of fear.

man - kaun ho tum

guy - ek hindustani jo tum jaise rakshason ke liye kaal hai. tum jaise logon ki wajah se humari behan betiyan surakshit nahi. aaj ke bad urmi ya kisi or ladki ki taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekha to kasam ganga maiya ki jinda kat dalunga.

he punch him again. n man sit in corner shivering.. he call police . police arrived .

guy - dheeraj giraftar kar lo inhe

dhe - ayugdh bhaiya ye yaha k mla ka khas admi hai.

ayu - to kya inki puja karu . tum ise arrest kar rahe ho ya iska yahi game baja du.

man - ae insp girftar kar hume. hum papi hai hume saja milni chahiye.

he ask insp n look at ayugdh fearly.insp arrest him.

dhe - par bhaiya fir

ayu - mai aa raha hu.

dhe - par wo ladki.

ayu - urmi bayan degi..or khabardar jo kisine use jyada pareshan kiya ya uski beijjati ki.warna ijjat kaise utari jaati hai ye mai tum logon ko bahut acche se samjhaunga..

all cops look at him fearly n nod. he ask girl to come with him .they file complaint . ayugdh go to man(culprit ) n hold him by his shoulder

ayu - bahar aakar agar kuch ulta seedha kiya na to yad rakhna tujhe patal se bhi dhund kar nikalunga.

man nod fearly..he left.

constable - ye aadmi hai ya koi super hero.kisi se darta nahi. humari himmat nahi hoti us haweli tak jane ki ye waha gaya use mara or ab uspar fir bhi darj karwa di.

dhe - jinke dil mai sacchai basti hai or rago mai deshbhaki lahu bankar daudti hai wo kisi se nahi darte .balki un jaise logon se is jaise aadmi darte hai..

con - sir kaun hai ye.

dhe - ayugdhshastri. ex army officer . abhi kya karte hai .koi nahi janta. har sal apne pariwar ka shradh karne aate hai or chale jate hai..unke hote hue koi criminal bach nahi sakta. sher ki tarah takatwar or usulo ke ek dum pakke aise hai humare ayugdh bhaiya.

all look at the ayugd's back.who is going to drop urmi her home.

outside

urm - thanku bhaiya aaj aapne hume bacha liya.

ayu - isme thanku kaisa ye mera farj tha. tum chinta mat karo wo tumhe pareshan nahi karega ab,

urm - aap to humare liye devta bankar aye hai..

she try to touch his feet.he stop her in mid

ayu - aaj ki duniya mai insan hona hi bahut mushkil hai or aap mujhe devta bana rahi hai.mujhe insan hi rehne dijiye. chaliye

he drop her home n his phone ring

ayu - haa

os ...

ayu - kya ?? mai abhi nikalta hu,.don't worry mai sambhal lunga.

os...

ayu - ha...

he pack his bag fast .look at his home one last time n take a open jeep n zoomed on his mission .

tbc...

precap - ayugdh handle a case . glimpse of life of abeer n anwita..many more..
manasvi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
hello all
here is new part of SAAT. hope you all liked it. finger crossed.😉
if you have any problem regarding story plz feel free to ask. main plot of story is starting soon.

thanku
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Nice update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
nice update
loveit
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Nice update.
continue soon..
thanks for pm...
di please update your other stories too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super Dooper Amazing update dear
Brilliantly written
Nice life sketch of everyone..
Thanks for PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
wonderful update my buddy
thanks for pm and sorry for late..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poor ayesha her parents are not good
Her step mom is also evil
Arjun lost his family
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
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