ARIYA SS -SAATHI KHUSHI OR GAM KE part 14 on pg 102 16/12 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: balan04

Sorry di was busy with my exam and I couldn't visit my inbox there is a problem
Anyways abt the story... Mona a look a like but exact opp of Riya
Liked the story line ...
Continue soon 😛



its okie dear
I can understand. do your exam well . all the best

n thanks .glad u lyk storyline

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: madmadona

awesome cs
cont soon



thanks
will update today
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
seems interesting! do update soon
thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

seems interesting! do update soon

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thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1





Riya first lady officer of etf gulped a bectaria named xora 2. She had taken to hospital but now she took her last breath. Arjun close her eyes n immediately leave room. Rathore too. Choree shout her name n cry over her death.

After 3 months.

Drug dealing case.
Aisha enter their lives n etf as new officer. Aisha kapoor is rough n tough officer with criminals n sweet n helpful for friends.

Next forensic expert Lisa dcruz make her entry. She was shree classmate but not friend they are like opponent who race with each other for first position. She is also best at her work .thats handling dead bodies.

Next sakshi Anand a bubbly naughty girl with beautiful smile enter in etf. She is always fond of arjun n want to irritate him n make him smile. She befriend with everyone easily.


After 1 n halfyear of exora case

at morning time in etf conf room

Ra - team commissioner sir has appoint new research expert for etf.she will be joining one month later.


He look at chores sigh n left. Choree get sad hearing this.

Ai - what happens to you both of you shree chotu

Sh - nothing Aisha we are thinking about our friend ri riya mukharjee , she was ex research specialist
Now some one is going to take her place.


Ai - is she the girl who receive bravery madel on republic day

Ch - haa humari ri. She give her life to save mankind.

Sak - ohh. She seems so much close to both of you.

Sh - not both of us but all of us. she is eternal part of etf n our life now also. N today is her birthday.

Ai - ohh. She was really brave. You must proud on her sacrifice . remember her with smile on your face.

Chores smile n remember riya's sweetness cuteness her antics .their friendly fight n teasing.

Arjun enter etf conf room n hear talk of team about riya he directly goes to his cabin.today he dont shout on any one.

He enter his cabin n open his drawer n take a coin from it. He kiss that coin n tightly hold in his palm n close his eyes.

Mins passed

His tarence is broken by loud noice of his phone. He pick his phone

Ar - hello acp arjun rawte

Os - pata hai acp arjun rawte isi liye to call lagaya hai

Ar - arman

Arm - yup the great dr arman .dreamboy of girls

Ar - sharm kar shadi ho gayi hai teri ab .or meri behan k alawa kisi or k bare mai socha bhi to sys.

Arm - mai kaha apni shilpa k alawa kisi or ko sochta hu wo to girls hai jo mere killer looks par marti hai.

Ar - tera kuch nahi ho sakta

He said in disbelief

Arm - or tera bhi bhul gaya aaj meri behan ka birthday hai. Or tu

Ar - arjun kuch nahi bhulta samjha tu. Wish kar diya hai maine.or use uska gift bhi mil gaya.

Arm - ohh ok. Chal aaj ghar aa jana kuch discuss karna hai.or teri behan ne aaj ek or new dish try ki hai to mai akela hi q saja bhugtu tujhe bhi to milni chahiye.

Ar - ok baba aa jaunga but new dish

He made horrified face n arman grin.Both cut call. He recieved msg for new case. He look at coin n put it in pocket n left for case.

far away

A girl whose face is not visible cover with scarf only eyes are visible which has filled with tears watching something on her iPad.


She clear her tears determining n left from there.

Scene sanjeevni

At evening

Arm - are ye shil kaha gayi kab se dhund raha hu .aaj kya hua aisa subah jab se hospital ayi hai glare de rahi hai .

He is thinking n collide with her.she frown at him n about to go.he pull her in fire escape.

Arm - oye hoye koi to aaj bahut accha lag raha hai. Or ye gori gori nosy red ho gayi gusse se.

He kiss her nose.

Shil - arman leave me.or mujhse bat mat karo

Arm - kya hua shil tum janti ho na mai tumse bat kiya bina nahi reh sakta

Shil - nahi nahi tum jao un ladkiyon k pas jo tumhare sapne dekhti hai .or tumhe acchi acchi dish bana kar khilayengi .meri dishes to saja hoti hai na.

Arm slowly mutter - mar gaya ise kaise pata laga

Shil - sun liya maine or tum na uff mujhe bat hi nahi karni .

She hit her heel on his boot n his grip loose so she left from there.

Arm - aaauuch lagti hai na jaan.

He rub his foot.

Arm - uff kaun kehta hai khoon k rishton mai ek dusre ka asar hota hai. Koi dekhe ise or us arjun ko dono sage bhai behan lagte hai. Uski criminal par najar humesha hoti hai or iski mujh par. Kya mari hai bilkul apne bhai ki tarah aaah abhi tak dard ho raha hai. Par ab kya karu wo ruth gayi mujhse bat bhi nahi kar rahi . uski awaj sune bina mera kya hoga.

He sit n put his both palm under his chin n pout cutely.
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#56


Scene shift

Etf is searching for clues from fact board aisha arjun n sam give detail of case. After discussion they find something.

Sam - ok team thats it for today.

Aisha lisa left with sam.Choree sit in their car n found a cake in their car.

Sh - chotu ye cake

Ch - aaila ye to ri ka fav cake hai or aaj uska birthday hai.

Sh - par ye yaha kisne rakha hoga. Kahi rathod sir ne to nahi

Ch - pata nahi .chal cut karte hai.

Both cut cake n feed each other tearily n look at sky n wish ri. N left premise.

Arjun come out from hiding n smile n about to left.but

Sak - arjun ruko

Ar -tum gayi nahi

Sak - nahi wo tumne kam diya tha na wo kar rahi thi . mujhe ghar chod do

N she sit on codriver seat.

Arjun remember riya she was always sit beside him.n start discussing about case.

Ar - sorry riya tumhe dantta tha , par tum truely ek sinceare cop thi. Tumme seekhne ka jasba tha . har bat har pehlu ko janna chahti thi

He smile

I know your curiosity . karate marte waqt ek jungli billi or kisi ka dard dekh kar tumhare andar se ek aam ladki bahar aa jati thi.

Sak - arjun arjun kya hua chale

He sigh n start car.he is driving silently asusual n she is talking nonstop asusual.

Sak - omg. Arjun tumhe

Ar - kya hua.

Sak - arjun tumhe neck par kisi insect ne kat liya na kaha tha na us atalaghar mai mat ghuso

Ar - excuse me ye mera kam hai waha nahi ghusta to ye sabut kaise milta .

Sak - koi nahi mai cream laga deti hu.

She take a cream from her bag.

Arj lost in fb
Ariya returning after finishing case of murder. ( kalki devi case)

Ri - sir aap aapke hath mai ye chot

Ar - haa wo rathod ko bachane gaya tha to hatafai mai lag gai hogi.its ok mujhe adat hai.

Ri - sir jakham khule nahi chodne chaiye.or aap kitna hi tough ban le akhir mai aap bhi insan hai. Plz ye laga lijiye.

Ri give him anticeptic cream.he argue but atlast he try to apply but he is not abeling to apply cream from left hand

Ri - s sir if ..u dont mind mai laga du.

Arjun forward his hand n cream. N she apply cream in his hand n give him her
dimple smile.
Fb end

Sak - offo arjun kabse awaj de rahi hu. Lao mai laga deti hu.

She come close n he stop her.

Ar - tumhara ghar aa gaya tum jao mai laga lunga.

Sak - par arjun

Ar - go sakshi

He said sternly n she left with dull face.

Scene shift

One girl wearing skyblue capri , orange long top n baby cut shoulder length hair with hairband n big shades on eyes is walking on an empty road.
One car come n offer her lift she sit in car.
N ask him seductively to stop car in an outskirt area of city . driver become happy.he stop car in an empty outskirt area.

Girl sit on back seat of car.n that person come near her.she give him her killer dimple smile n he move toward close n close on backseat.but next second he feel pain in his stomach .he look down n see she stabed him with knife n smile

Gi - sikandar se gaddari ka inam or mona ka pyar qubul karo allen .

Allen look at her shocked n died.she come out of car n call.

Mona - hello kam ho gaya apun ko lene aaja .abe kisi ko koi shak nahi hoga mona to bhari bheed mai katal kar ke bhi farar ho jaye.

She cut n smirk. N on car n push it from road n car blast n fall into deep .

Another car come n she sit on that car n left the area.

Tbc...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Wow
Very interesting update
Mona is damn awesome girl
Sikander se gaddari bahot bhari padi
Ab dekhte hai aage Kya hoga
Do continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
emotional chapter
choree & arjun missing riya 😭
it was riya's birthday & she is not with them 🥺
loll arman & arjun convo abt shilpa cook was so funny 🤣
wow mona entry was dhamakedar 👏
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
interesting
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
awsome update dear
but why I think ki riya hi Mona hai

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