Ariya ss ~ sab mera tu ~ - Page 12

Awsome update..
Love it..
Arjun ask forgiveness to Riya..
But its not easy for Riya to forgive him.
Purab really loves ri.?
Or he n Sakshi have some plan to.bring ariya closer..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

amazing update

Awesome
Love it
Nice storyline
Update soon

nice update dear.. At least Riya listened to Arjun, that's a good sign.

Mind blowing update..

part 1



hey sweets awesome start

well written but it got some flaws
a cs would be helpful to understand the concept and a fb or something like that would have done good to it

anyway that's just what I thought of this chappy but overall it was really good for first attempt

I am sure you will rock in upcoming chappies 😊

thanks for pm


p.s. I am really sorry if I hurt your feelings, being a big sis I wanted to bring the best out of you, sorry again


love dii 😊

part 2



riya and sakshi are really cute

love their bond

ufff this little bundle of joy, just like her sakshi di, brings smile on her riya di face

fb was heart wrenching

how could he talks to her like that?
disgusting

who's at the door?
don't tell me it's arjun (stern face)

he doesn't deserve riya at all

part 3



oh it's riya's lawyer

I knew rawthe's will be seen in this part

love the way riya handles herself

ufff they're going to live with her

love riykshi and purab friendship

now you gave the cs

hmm looks like arjun's parents are guilty for what they did as per cs

what roshini tried to say?

amazing part sweetie
love it

part 4




nice sweetie

so roshini's father was behind all this

sorry but still I am not convince from roshini's justifications

she could have at least tried to tell someone or arjun at least

how come arjun's family believed those pics?

they could have at least tried to found out truth especially arjun and sam

being officers they should have tried to see behind those pics reality

I mean agar koi unki sister ki esi pics send karta toh kia woh yaqeen kar lete?

nahi na, toh phir riya ke sath esa q?
just because she didn't tell anyone about her parents that doesn't mean she came from a bad background and pointing fingers at her parents we're the lowest to think

and for Mr arjun, if his heart believed riya's innocence then why didn't he tried to find out the truth?

sorry but in this it's not the family but only and truly arjun was at fault

sorry if I hurt your feeling but that's what I thought

thanks for pm

teaser for part 5




knew this would come
purab is trying to keep his friend safe or his plan is to bring ariya closer but only when arjun will become worth of riya