ariya sasha ff GHARANA part 20 on pg 94 29/9/2017

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Prologue

What will happen when a Prince is in love with a common girl and a princess is in love with a common man. What will happen when love knock some one hearts door n mind says no time for love.what will happen when you love someone you hate most. But when at last love find their way their family (GHARANA) stood opposite way. Let see

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Character sketch

Acp Arjun suryakant Rawte - he is second in command of etf.a very arogent n rude person but good from heart.he isolated himself from every one.he was bff of sameer but now not in talking term.he close his heart after his wife brutal murder.he think himself living dead.

Acp sameer rathore - he is prince of jaigarh n next hier.he is chief of etf .one time bff of arjun.but he break friendship with him bcoz he think he is responsible for his another bff roshni. Love his family n etf.

Chandrakant patil - he is commando of etf.big body n soft heart.live with his widow mother n bff shree.n help n support him a lot.a big foodie.n nickname chotu.bff of sakshi.

Shreekant sen -he is tech expert of etf.nick name shree.he live with his bff chotu n her mother.also called her ayi.he is big prankster n gadget freek. He is son of bangal royal family but run from house to fulfil his dream of become tech expert n cop.bff of sakshi

Ayesha kapoor- she is senior inspector drug n ammunition expert.she is joining etf soon.but she has a reason to join etf.hate sam alot n angry at arjun.

Sakshi Anand - she is crime journalist n now part of etf.also trained in marital art.she is bff of shreetu.in search of someone. Had a sad past known to shreetu. She also call chotu ayi as ayi

Lisa rathore - she is forensic docter of etf. Sister of sam.love him darely.her original name is leela which she think outdated so call herself lis .pampared n a big fashionista.

Damsingh Rathore - he is maharaj of jaigarh.n father of smeer n Lisa.love them .but love sameer more n can do anything for him

Yashodhra Rathore - she is mother of sameer and Lisa. Simple n sober lady. Love her family .can do anything for his son

Sumitra patil - she is mother of chotu.but love shree n sakshi as her child.she run her dhaba.a simple n lovely lady. She is also parshad of her ward.

Suryakant Rawte-father of arjun.love n understand him so much. He is upset becoz arjun is living life of dead .he is owner of fruit juice n jam factory n firm.he runs an orphanage Aasra

Amaranth Sen- he is maharaj of bangal royal family father of shree n sayali. Always busy in his business

Sujata sen - she is mother of shree n sayali

Always busy in her high class parties n society

Sayali seen- she is shree's sister.A sweet n simple girl.her one leg is little damaged from birth so she walked little limb.she is very good painter.she is lonely n yarn for love

Amar Singh- he is maharaj of rajgarh. But separate himself from every one after his wife death .n give all responsibility to his elder son ajay. Fullfil all wish of his daughter love her the most.

Ajay Singh- next hier n current controller of rajgarh. Love his family specially his sister. For him respect of his gharana is everything. Husband of radhika.brother of ranveer n riyanshi n father of koyel

Ranveer Singh- he is brother of ajay n riyanshi. He is returning from Switzerland after completing his MBA with his sis.love her alot n tease her a lot.

Riyanshi singh- everyone call her riya. She is princess. Pampared alot by her family n little naughty.but good from heart. She lives in fairy tales n waiting for her prince to came n take her on white horse.

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Part 1

Etf office

Shree chotu sakshi are sitting in conference hall n doing their chit chat.SAM enter

Sam - team commisioner sir called me that from today one officer is joining.she will be there in some mins.n by the way where is rawte.

Ar - I am here.he is coming from enterence gate.

Sam - ok .I wnt u to know

Ar - I heared.

Sam - OK.

All take their seat.samjun are busy in their files n choreeshi gossiping slowly.

CH - new team member.wow.

Sh - hope she is good not like that miss overconfidence Lisa.

Sak - ohh shree she is not that bad.

Sh - ya you are saying this because she didn't do that to you which se done to me.

Flashback

Choreshi sitting in conference hall. Suddenly a girl come n bumped on shree.

Sh - who the hell r u n what r u doing in etf office.

Gi - look Mr whatever I am in very foul mood don't mess with me.

Sh - so you are threatening an etf officer.glare her

Gi - yes I am.n glare him back.

Sh - I am also warning you he didn't complete his sentence n she screamed

Gi - omg omg lizard pls someone throw it out.

Sh - so where is your bravery n threats now which you are showing to me some time before. N start laughing. Meanwhile lizard run from there

Gi - look Mr I already told you don't messup with me. Now you bear consequence. She sprey some chemical to him.n it start itching to shree.he run to washroom n warn her I'll see u.she turn toward chief cabin.

After few min

Shree come after taking bath n changing cloths. Which every member put there for emergency. He is very angrily enterd in conference hall. Here he saw her again with rathore sir.

Sh - you.I'll not leave you miss oversmart

Gi - so what will you do mr chidchid

Sh - I'll

Sam - shutup both of you. Team she is forensic expert of etf lisa n Lisa they are chotu n sakshi. Trio greet each other.

Sam - n he is shree our tech expert.n shree Lisa.n he left both glare

Sh - its not glad to meet miss oversmart

Li - same here .h how can u be glad Mr chidchid after ...n start laughing n goes to her lab

Shree pissed his teeth.

Present

Sh - ohh I hate her

Sak - come on shree .you also take revenge from her.

Sh - ya .n a naughty smrik on his lips

Flashback

Some days later

Its time for go home after completing a tough case. Lisa is wrapping up her work in lab. Suddenly light start fluctuating. On off on off. some horrible sound playing in background. Suddenly a deadbody start walking toward her.

Li - wha what is happening dead body is walking its not possible. But it is. Her leg is trumbling n she start shivering in fear .n step back.

Dead body is coming forward n she step back. At she hit wall.deadbody is very close to her.

Lisa - plz plz leave me I won't do ur autopsy.plz spare me.

Suddenly he sprey something to her .ohh its same chemical she sprey to shree. Suddenly he start laughing.

Lisa - shree its you.

Sh - ha ha ha .now you get taste of your own medicine. Ha ha ha n he leave.

Its itching to Lisa n she run to washroom.

Fb end

Sh remember n laughing badely holding his stomach.

Ch - stopit shree its not funny u scare her so much.

Sh - n what she did to me is good haan

Ch - its not like that.

Sh - you are my friend or her.

Ch - ofcourse yours.

Sak - ohh my basties. You know what I bring ur fav allo k parathe

Shtu - wow its favourite of three of us. We love you sakhi.

Sak - n your sakhi love you both.

Shreetu - sakhi you always done varymuch for us.

Sak - bcoz we are besties na. N you both are my family after baba n also support me in all my up n down.

She become sad nboth pamper her.

Suddenly a girl come wearing blue jeans n red shirt.she is looking beautiful but hot in her simple n full attire also. her leg sliped due to water on floor. Sam immediately hold her by waist .n stare at her she frown her n speak loudly - excuseme ..sam come out of his world.he let her stand on her foot.

GI - plz leave me.

Sam - excuse me I save u n u r yelling on me. Who r you

Gi- I am ayesha kapor new officer joining on duty sir n salute him.

Sam - ohh you are that new officer. POV - kitni ajeeb hai pehle mujh par chillai or ab respect se intro n salute de rahi h.

Aye - excuseme sir .are you chief of etf she asked with attitude.

Sam - what do you mean .yes I am.

Ay - no actually its not showing by ur behaviour. You have to introduce me to team .n here u are in ur own world.anyway I'll do it my own .she passby him.

sam - ye mujhe kya hua hai

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Ayesha sam k samne se nikal jati hai or khud ko team se introduce karti hai.

Sam MV ye mujhe kya hua.mai aisa absent mind kaise ho gaya.grip in sam u r chief of etf not any teenage college going boy.

Sam - yes miss ayesha kapoor I m chief of etf or sir ne apke bare mai bataya tha.shree ayesha ko humare current case k bare mai batao or ye rawte kaha hai.

Sh - yes sir. Wo arjun sir kahi gaye hai.Hume nhi pata.

Ra - pata nahi ye kab sudhrega.bina bataye kahi bhi chala jata hai.

Here at marine drive

Arjun ek informer se info lene aya hai. Wo lekar ja hi raha hota hai ki use kisi ladki ke cheekhne ki awaj aati hai.wo us taraf jata hai.waha ek ladki pani mai dub rahi hai. Arjun use bachata hai or a kinare par lata hai. Wo ladki behosh ho jati hai to wo use bagal wale hospital le jata hai. Par wo uska face nhi dekh pata qki uske bal bich mai aate hai.wo hatane hi wala hota hai ki iska phone bajta hai.

Or wo hospital se chala jata hai.wo pehle lodge jata hai change karne to use pata chalta hai uski chain nhi hai. Wo wahi baith jata hai.Jaise kisi ne uski saanse chin li.

Ar - rosh aj maine tumhai nishani bhi kho di.mai nahi sambhal paya use.pata nhi kaha kho gai shayad sea mai gir gai hogi. He sit on knee n start crying.n goes into fb

Ar - roshni roshni kaha ho .plz aa bhi jao same

Ro - ohfo arjun tum bhi thodi si bhi sabar nahi.pooja kar rahi thi mai.

Ar - hmm .wo maine baba se apni shadi ki baat kar li hai .or wo to itne khush hai ke unhone mahurat bhi nikalwa liya hai.

N he pull her to him n hug her tightly. Kuch der bad dono alag hote hai.roshni ki chain arjun ki shirt mai fans jati hai .WO use dene hi wala hota hai k bich mai

Ro - nhi arjun ye chain tum hi pehno ab.pata hai ye humare guruji ne di thi mujhe.unhone kaha tha isme ashirwad hai unka or yeh use de dena Jo tumhe sabse pyara ho. Or dekho ye apne ap hi tum tak pahuch gai.chalo pehno ab ise

Ar - ohh.to mai pehenleta hu Ise. Khush.n hug her.

Ro - arjun ise humesha apne pas rakhna. Agar kabhi hum alag hue to mai isi ke jariye tumhare pas rahungi.or yhi chain tumhe tumhari nayi jindgi tak pahuchayegi. Kabhi bhi kisi k pas ye apne ap chali jaye to man lena mai yahi chahti hu.

Ar - khabardar Jo aisi bat bhi ki tumne to.

Ro - ohh gussa aa gaya arjun ko. Mai to uhi kabhi life ka kuch bharosa nhi hai na arjun .or mai janti hu how much u love me.but

Ar - roshni.plz don't say this again .na tum kahi jaogi na hi ye chain samjhi tum.

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Ar - roshni mai apna wada nhi nibha paya .n cry

Itne mai arjun ko fir etf se call aata hai.or wo change karne jata hai to dekhta hai uski shirt mai ek bracelate laga hai.

Ar - shayad usi ladki ka hoga.

Or WO nikalta hai.

At etf

Sam - ye kya tareeka hai rawte bina bataye chale gaye tum or bar bar phone karne par ab aye ho

Ar - isi case k liye info lene gaya tha .or tumhe bola tha maine kal k aj mai jaunga. Or rahi bat late hone ki to ek ladki dub rahi thi to bacha raha tha use.fir change karne lodge gaya tha .ab or kuch bolna hai.

Sam MV ha usne kal hi to bola tha uff ye ladki k aane se sab gadbad ho gayi dimag mai sunami aa gai hai uff.

Sam - nhi bas case ke bare mai hi bat karna tha.or has ye ayesha hai etf ki new officer or ayesha ye acp arjun.

Aye - hello sir

Arjun nods

Arj ayesha glare each other

Aye MV huh samajhte kya hai apne apko kaise ghur rahe hai .khair aap kuch bhi kar lo Jo mai lene ayi hu wo to lekar hi jaungi.or ap mujhe nhi rok sakte acp arjun

Arj MV q aayi ho tum yaha. Jo tumhe chahiye mai janta hu par wo tumhe kabhi nhi milega.samjhi tum

Sam - officer humare pas case hai pending to solve kare.

Sh - yar ye to lady dabang hai pehle rathore sir ko sunaya or ab dekh arjun sir ko ghur rahi hai.

Ch - ha shree isse bach ke rehna padega.

Sak smile at their talk.n they goes for area where arj informer inform.

Precap - sam attraction toward ayesha n her hate toward him.

Arjun search for bracelate girl

Shree lisa prank to each other

Chotu find someone

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Sam - to kya info mili hai.

Ar - mere informar ke according kal drug ka bahut bada consignment aane wala hai .but ek problem hai.

Ra - kya

Ar - problem ye hai ki use do location pata chali hai. Sahi kaunsi hai keh nhi sakte. Hum bat gaye to problem ho jayegi.or ye kaam hum 6 logo ko hi karna hai. Maine dig sir ko inform kar diya hai.

Ra - ye to serious problem hai.

Ais- mai undercover ja kar correct location pata kar sakti hu.

Sam - no ye bahut dangerous hai ..

Ais - aapko lagta hai mai yaha tak rishwat de kar pahuchi hu Sir .apko meri kabiliyat par sham hai..

Sam - nhi par..MV uff kitna gussa karti hai ye ladki.mujhe fikar hai iski or ye

Arj - OK tum jao..par rathod tumhe drop or pick karega.

Ais - par mai akele ja sakti hu.

Ar - Jo kaha jaye wo karo we are your senior. Sys

Ais - samajh gayi. Huh .mai apko 8 baje yahi milungi.

Sam - OK..MV ladai arjun k sath or uska bhi gussa muhj par yaha tera kuch nhi ho Sakta.

Sh - yar rathod sir ko kya hua hai Aisha ke samne bolti band ho jati hai.

Ch - or hum becharo par atyachar hota hai.

Sak - tum log bhi na Aisha is sweet girl bat hui thi meri USSR

Sh - WO kya hai na sakhi tum hi itni sweet ho tumhe sabhi sweet lagte hai arjun sir bhi huh.

Sak - arjun sir se yad aya unhe chai nhi pi

She go n come with tea

Sak -arjun tea

Ar - thanku sakshi. But tum q pareshan hoti ho. Chaiwala le ayega na

Sak - it's OK arjun. Hum sath kam karte hai to itna to chalta hai isme problem kaisi.

Ar smile.

Sh - chotu tujhe arjun sir mai change nhi lag raga.pehle sakhi par kitna chillate the par ab uski care karne lage hai.or use dekh kar smile bhi.

Ch - ha shree .accha hai aisa hi ho to .dono ne bahut kuch dekha hai apni life mai.WO log khush rahenge to hume bhi khushi hogi.

Sak - kya bat hai guys.

Sh - kuch nhi sakhi bas aise hi.tum to ye batao akdu par kya jadoo kiya hai Jo mijaj Badle badle hai.

Ch - ha sakhi tumhe dekh kar smile deta hai.thodi si hoti hai par hoti hai.

Sak- kuch bhi tum logo ka kuch nhi ho sakta.or shree tu kaha ja raha hai.

Sh - bas aata hu. Us miss oversmart ko thoda maja chakha kar.he he

Shree waha se pantry mai jata hai.use pata hai Lisa is waqt waha coffee banane aati hai.

Kuch der bad

Shesa - ahhh

Chotu ayesha sakshi waha pahuchte hai or waha ka scene dekh kar haste hai..

Waha dono gire pade hai or dono k face black hai.

Sab or jor se hanste hai.

Shisa - haso mat or Hume uthao. Or dono ek dusre ko dekhte h or glare dete hai.

Aye or chotu dono ko hath dekar uthate hai.

Sak - ye sab kaise hua guys

Shisa - iski wajah se.pointed their finger to each other.

Aye - exactly bataoge kya hua. Chalo tum log apna apna batao tumne kya kiya.

Sh - ye roj coffee banane k bad tissue paper se face clean karti hai.to maine is tissue paper par aisa gel laga diya jiske skin se contact mai aate hi gel black color ban jata hai.

Li - or maine ise ate dekha to waha marbals faink diye or ye gir gaya.

Ch - ye to samajh mai aya Lisa ka face black kaise hua or shree gira kaise par Lisa kaise giri or shree ka face black kaise hua

Li - WO mai is par has rahi thi to galti se marbal par pair pad gaya

Sh - girne ki wajah se iske hath ka pani mere face par aa gaya or Maine tissue chin kar wipe kar Liya or

Sak - ha ha ha tum dono apne hi jaal mai fas gaye ha ha ha

All laugh together.

Scene shift.

Hospital

Girl - mai yaha kaise .

Sis - ap sea mai gir gayi thi apko koi yaha bacha kar le kar aye.

Girl - nam pata hoga unka

Sis - pata nahi wo unhe kisi ka phone aya or wo jaldi chale gaye. But shayad WO police k koi bade officer the

Girl - OK ..kya mai ghar ja sakti hu.

Sis - yes mam ap thik hai.ap ja sakti hai.ye apka saman

Girl - ye agar arjun aye to unhe de dena.she write some thing on page n give her.

Etf at 8 o clock

Only samjun are present. Ayesha enter in a hot dress.she is looking damm hot n beautiful. Sam to use dekhta hi reh jata hai.but ayesha ignore him.

Ar - so ayesha ready .

Ay - yes sir.

Ar - kuch or nahi pahan sakti thi.n glare her.

Ay - smile lightly.WO unhe lagna chahiye na ladki hot hai. Isiliye. Lag rahi hu na mai hot.

Sam - absent mindly very hot

Both arisha glare him.

Sam - I mean kuch jyada hi lag rahi ho.arjun is right.

Ar - waha sakshi ka dress rakha hai pichle uc ka WO pagan ke jao.waha acche log nhi hai .

Aye - to apko meri itni fikar q arjun sir

Ar - bahut gusse mai .tumse jitna bola jaye utna karo warna .

Ay - yes sir . bhag le Aisha aj k liye kafi tha jyada kuch bola to Teri khair nahi.

Sam - tumhe badi chinta hai Aisha ki.

Ar - tumse matlab . WO hum dono k bich ki bat hai. Both glare each other.

Sam MV huh mujhse matlab hai.kuch to pehchan hai dono mai. Pata lagana padega warna arjun rawte or kal join hui ladki ki fikar.kuch to ajeb hai bahut ajeb.or ayesha bhi use smile de rahi thi. Use smile or mujhe glare.huh

Arj MV manta hu ayesha tum ye Jan kar kar rahi ho .par isse tumhe WO kabhi nahi milega Jo tum chahti ho. Ohh god in sab mai us ladki ko to bhul hi gaya.kaisi hogi. Or uska bracelate bhi lautana hai.

Ar - mai aata hu.or bina kuch sune chala jata hai.

At hospital

Ar - kya chali gayi par kab.

Sis - sir kuch der pehle.

Ar - OK ..kya wo thik thi.

Sis - ji sir unhone ye latter diya hai.

Arjun use kholke padta hai.

Hello Mr ajnabi

thanks meri jaan bachane k liye or mujhe hospital tak chodne ke liye. Ap bahut hi acche insan honge Jo ek ajnabi ke liye apni life khatre mai dal di. Mai prayer karungi ke apko bhi apki sacchi khushi mile. Qki mujhe jyada hosh to nahi tha par jane q apki awaj mai ek dard ek baichaini thi.Shayad him kal kabhi mile bhi to ek dusre ko na pehchan paye ya shayad pehchan bhi le.you never know. Maine apko dekha nahi Jana nahi par fir bhi Jane q lagta hai him milenge.

Us pal me intzar mai

Miss ajnabi

Ar - mujhe bhi Jane q lagta hai hum milenge. Kash use dekh leta par jaldi mai nhi dekh paya bas uski gal k dimple hi dekhe the.kash uski dimple smile dekh pata

Ab kaise dhundu use. Kya par mujhe q dhundna hai use. Uska bracelate jo lauta hai.par kya pata kaun hai wo ..

Arjun ek later likhkar wahi chod jata hai..

At maharaja art gallery

Ch - ye rathod sir bhi na mujhe art gallery bhej diya ek painting lane.are unhe gift karni this to khud lene ate.mujhe to kuch samajh nhi aata ye art wart. Or shree bhi dhoka de gaya ke kal ke lite planning karni hai.ye shree bhi na Lisa par prank karne ke liye aide planning karta hai jaise koi ladka apni gf ko khush rakhne ke liye ya koi student exam k liye huh.

Or WO kisi se takra jata hai.or WO dekhta hai ke ek ladki gir gayi hai.

CH - I am sorry .WO meri wajah se aap gir gayi. Or use hath deta hai.

Girl - its OK .ahh

Ch - lagta hai apke pair mai lagi hai..I am sorry

Gi - nhi Wo .ap yaha q painting lene aye hai

Ch - pout ha lene to aya hu par mujhe iski koi samajh nahi

Gi - come I'll help you.

Ch - really thankyou

Precap

Arjun ka latter kya us ladki ko milega

Sam ayesha ki love hate fight

Shisa ki nayi chal ,chotu ka hal

Arakshi ki friendship

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Amazing updt
par precap mein Arakshi friendship?
Cont soon dear
eagerly waiting to read more
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Part 4

Samsha scene

Samsha ek place par jate hai jise drug dealers ka adda mana jata hai.Sam waha se kuch dur par car rokta hai.

Ai - sir mai ja rahi hu..info lekar aati hu.

Ra - OK..take care Aisha. N she nods.

WO andar jati hai.isi tarah 1 hr ho jata hai.

Sam MV - 1 hr ho gaya ye abhi tak nahi aayi. Mujhe andar jana chahiye. Par use ye na lage ki mai use underestimate kar raha hu..dammit kya hai ye sab mai SDR ek ladki se dar raha hu strange WO bhi apni subordinate se.ohh god this girl is driving me crazy.. Kuch to hai isme par ye mujhse itna ajeeb behave q karti hai ..why it seems she hate me.

Itne mai

Ai - sir sir kaha khoye hai aap kab de apko awaz de rahi hu..

Sam - ha WO..tum batao kam hua

Ai - apko kya lagta hai sir mai bas badi Badi batien karti hu

Sam - kya pata chala.

Ai - first loc is correct xyz godown.

Sam - great fir kal subah strategy banayenge deal to eve mai hai.abhi tumhe ghar drop kar deta hu.

Ai - no thanks sir .I can manage.

Sam - bahut rat ho gayi hai. Or I m your boss god dammit.

Ai - don't you know office hours khatam ho gaye hai.you can't order me like this.

Ra - chup chap gadi mai baitho.you are my team mate is tarah nahi chod sakta tumhe.

Ai - grate her teeth.I said it before sir I can manage.

Itne mai arjun ka call sam ko ata hai.

Sam - ha rawte bolo

Ar - kya kuch pata chala .Aisha aa gayi.

Sam - ha first location is correct.kal discuss karte hai.or Aisha aa gayi.

Ar - tum use drop kar rahe ho na.

Sam - Maine kaha par WO nhi man rahi hai.

Ar - what itni rat ko akeli jayegi. Give her phone.

Sam - par

Ar - just give her phone I said

Sam Aisha ko phone deta hai.Aisha raised her eyebrow

Sam - arjun

Aisha frowned n take call

Ai - yes Sir

Ar - Aisha car mai baitho rathod will drop you.

Ai - par sir I can manage.

Ar - mai jitna keh raha hu karo sys.

Ai - jaise ap mera kaha mante hai huh

Ar - Aisha.

Ai - OK..OK.I'll go with him .but we are not finished. Yet.

Or WO gusse mai call cut kar deti hai or piche jakar baith jati hai.

Sam - driver nahi hu tumhara.

Aisha gusse mai aage aati hai .

Scene shift. At maharaja art gallery

Gi - kya chahiye apko sir.

Ch - WO mere boss ne unki father ke liye ek painting mangwai hai but I don't know how to select.

GI - chaliye..I'll select.

Kuch der mai wo chotu ko kuch pentings dikhati hai or describe karti hai.or ek select karti hai.

Ch - wow matlab ek painting mai bhi itni batien or gehraiyan hoti gai..ye sab apne banai hai

Gi - ha.maine hi..

Ch - bahut khubsurat hai.kya ap mere room k liye bhi ek select kar ke dengi..

Girl - smile OK. Kuch der mai. Ye lijiye is painting ye meri favourite hai.

Ch - wow bahut beautiful hai apki tarah.I mean bahut pyari hai...is ladki ko pyar ka intzar hai or ladka uske liye aya hai .inhe dekh kar lag raha hai.

Gi surprising - apko kaise pata .apne to kaha apko painting ka knowledge nhi

Ch - par emotions ka to hai .or aapne abhi sab kitne acche se describe kiya.

Girl smile.

Ch - help ke liye thanks. I am chotu.

Gi - chotu??

Ch - I mean

Itne mai ek or ladki aakar

G2- hello madam 11:30 baj rahe hai Hume chalna chahiye sab gadi mai baith chuke hai.

G1- ohh .chalo jaldi.sorry chotuji bye..I have to go nice to meet you.

Ch - same here .bye

Uske Jane ke bad 11:30.ohh no .

Scene shift.shisa

Sh - q bulaya hai mujhe yaha

Li - tumne mera face kharab kiya tha na to tum hi mujhe parlaur le jaoge same

Sh - pagal ho tum ..me with you wo bhi parlour ..impossible..

Li - OK to mai ye video clip rathore sir or arjun sir ko send kar fungi jisme tum unki mimicry kar rahe ho.

Shree watch video n affraid.

Sh - par itni rat mai parlour

Li - ek parlour hai Jo day n night open hota hai.or tumhe mere bhaisa se bat karni hogi k tum mere dost ho or mujhe safely ghar drop karoge.

Sh - what no way.

Li - soch lo.

Sh - par tum khud q nhi karti unse baat.

Li - qki unhe mujh par yakeen nahi unhe mai abhi bhi kid lagti hu.

Sh - ya ya spoiled kid

Li - what you Mr chidchid

Sh - nothing miss oversmart.

Li - call him or unhe apna naam raghav batana samjhe.

Scene shift at arjun place

Arjun hospital se ek jagah info keliye jata hai waha

Ar - sakshi tum yaha

Sak -haa wo samay ki tabiyat thodi kharab thi .shretu the nahi to medicine lene ana pada.

Ar - itni rat ko .ruko mai drop kar deta hu.

Sak - its OK arjun tumhe pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi.

Ar - its OK sakshi hum sath kam karte hai or itna chalta hai.

Sak smile

Ar - waise use hua kya hai.

Sak - fever hai.dr ko dikhaya to unhone ye medicine dene ki bola

Ar - agar meri jarurat lage to bula lena.

Sak - thanks arjun bye.

Ar bye.

Scene shift at hospital

Ek ladki aati hai.

Gi - hii sister ..kya wo aye the jinhone mujhe bachaya tha.

Si - ha or unhe maine apka letter bhi de diya.

GI - unka naam addr pucha

Si - I m sorry .emergency aa gayi thi or mai bhul gayi.par unhone ye letter diya tha..

Ladki jaldi se wo letter chin leti hai. Or open karti hai with dimple smile

Hello miss ajnabi

Hope ab aap thik hongi. Apne likha hum milenge par apko ye letter bhi milega ya nahi pata nhi. Na apne mujhe dekha na mai apko dekh paya .khair ap apna khayal rakhiyega. Or next time beach par sambhal kar jaiyega. You know what aap bhi bahut acchi hai.is duniya mai jaha apne bhi dekhkar humare gum ko andekha kar dete hai wahi apne ek ajnabi k dard ko mehsus kiya. I even can't tell you apke un do shabdon ne mujh jaise tute insane ke jakhmo par marham ka kam kiya. Thankyou for that.

Mr ajnabi

Is ladki ki ankhon mai ansu aa jate hai or wo ek or letter likh kar sis ko de deti hai.

Girl POV - kitna dard hai Mr ajnabi k dil mai.par q mujhe bhi betahasha dard apne dil mai mehsus ho raha hai.q lag raha hai jakar unko hug karke kahu mai hu apke sath. Par pata nahi mera letter bhi unhe milega ya nahi.kya wo fir wapas ayenge

Precap-- kya arjun ayega or use letter milega.

sasha k bich ki love hate war mai kaun jitega

Kya shree Lisa se badla le payega.

Chotu kya karega.or sakshi ki life ka kya hal hai .

PART 5a

Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Awsm updt mini didu
loved all trough d updt
do cont soon
eagerly waiting to read
nd thnx 4r d pm didu

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update...interesting concept!!!
There is so much of mystery!!!!
who was d girl arjun saved???
Y was she der at 1st place???
Somebody pushed her???
Y Aisha hate Sam...?
Hw arjun n Aisha know each other...
N wat Aisha want from arjun???
So many questions!!!!
So plz continue soon
Wanna read more...
N luvd d story...

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Ritikanfly

@Ritikanfly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Waiting for next update
update soon

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