Ariya SS - HUME AANA PADEGA DUNIYA MAI DOBARA part 13 on pg 27 14/12

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Hi this is my new story .I know thodi unbelievable lagegi but kya karu mere mind mai kab se chal rahi hai .plz thoda bear kar lena .agar pasand na aye to discontinue kar dungi. So here is prologue.


Prologue




Pyar ek beautiful feeling hai..kya kisi ka pyar itna strong ho sakta hai ke wo uske liye wapas aa jaye. Kya kisi ka pyar itna strong ho sakta hai ke wo kismat se lad jaye .or jab pyar or niyati ki jung hogi to kaun jeetega. Kya wo fir laut kar apne pyar ko pehchanenge or use payenge .ya fir se itihas dohraya jayega. Kya unhe fir kehna padega

HUME AANA PADEGA DUNIYA MAI DOBARA

New character sketch
Old character
Sameer Rathod he is a big businessman of Delhi. Husband of ayesha father of armara .he is strict caring n calm man.love his family alot.bro of shree n bil of litu. All decision of trio family is taken by his consent. He is best friend of his son n call him buddy. He has feeling of guilt n pain inside him. Support all kids n love them.

Ayesha sameer Rathod - she is wife of sam n mother of armara.she is principal of reputeted girls school of Delhi. She is sweet caring emotional n strong lady. She is sis of litu n sil of shree. She always take tension of smara n arjun. She is very protective n possesive about his son ajju. Love all kids n dont want them to learn their past.

Shreekant sen - he is CEO of software company in Delhi. He is funloving , supportive guy. Husband of lisa n father of twins lavanya n tanmay. Love to fight with his wife over their children actully love both eqally . share friendly bond with arjun.love to play chess with him. N his partner n supporter in prank.love all kids.bro of sam n bil of aytu

Lisa shreekant sen - she is docter in a hospital of Delhi. She is sweet happy n commanding lady. Wife of shree n mother of twins. She love to fight with her hubby over their children .love both equally.sis of aytu n sil of sam. Emotional support of ayu. Love to cook at home. She care arjun n love alot .

Chanduakant patil - he is owner. Of sadabhar restaurant in posh area of Delhi. He is loveble happy n soft heart man .miss his wife divya alot .n give love to his son nihal of mother n father both. He has special bonding with arjun n know his secreat.bro of liayu n bil of samree. Become always prey of prank of his bff shree.

New character
Arjun Sameer Rathod- ASR. He is son of samsha n bro of Samara.love all his uncle n aunt n respect all. Protect n love all his siblings. He is funloving carefree n decent guy. Always help needy n poor people. His weakness is his sis Samara. He is best friend of his father n sensitive toward her mother..very stubborn but listen to all. Partner in chess n prank of shree .n have special bonding with his mamau n only he know his secret. He always dream of his dream girl who he never see..he called his imagery dreamgirl chanchan bcoz he only here his payal voice n see payal in his dream. Love to take tea.
He is doing last year of his MBA .age 23

Samara sameer Rathod- she is daughter of samsha.n lil sis of arjun. She is weakness of his bro n love him a lot.she is protected n pampared by all her siblings. She is youngest of all. She is shy reserve sweet n dutiful girl. She only share her feeling with her bro arj n her friend doll. She is studying fine arts in second year of college..she is very good painter.age 20

Tanmay shreekant sen - he is son of shiza. He is little shy , simple n loveable guy. He is twin bro of lavanya. Best buddy n bro of arjun .both know each other very well. Always become prey of arjuns prank. But he is Savior of arjun from elders when he do any mischiveness .he is in last year of forensic science.he is only 6mon younger then arjun. Age 23.

Lavanya shreekant sen - she is daughter of shiza. She is tomboyish in attitude. She is happy , cheerful n daring girl. Never bear any injustice . always tease her twin bro tanu. Love all her sibling a lot.partner in crime with arjun n share friendly bond with nihal n protect sammara always.she is studying IT in IIT delhi in last year. Age 23

Nihal chandrakant patil - he is son of Divya n chotu. He is serious ,sincere n dutiful guy. He respect his father alot coz he give him love of both parents. He is strong support of his father. He is angry young man type but soft at heart. He is bff of her sis lav. Always support n respect arjun as elder bro. He is studying science honors from du in second year. Age 22 Nick name Neil
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting thought 😃
Continue soon
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Part 1




In heaven
Ek beautiful fairy type ladki daud kar aati hai or dusri beautiful fairy se takra jati hai .
1 fairy - WO aa raha hai ..humari duniya mai.
2 fariy - with beautiful smile .janti hu.wo aa raha hai par jane ke liya.
1fairy - hum bat karenge unse.use yahi rok lenge
2 fairy - with beautiful smile .par q rokenge.
1fairy - tum pyar karti ho na.or waise bhi wo bagwan ji ka sabse pyara insane hai( special child ) hai to wo yaha ruk sakta hai.
2fairy - pyar mai .tum insano ki tarah bat kar rahi ho.pyar wo mai hi to hu na.
1 fairy - par tum to uske liye pritvi par gai this na.
2fairy - ha..qki wo bhagwanji ka sabse pyara insan hai. Wo pyar se nahi pyar usse hai.use khud bhagwanji ne chuna hai.
1fairy - ha par ab to uska dharti per waqt khatam ho gaya.wo yaha aa raha hai na.or tum
2fairy bich mai hi - ha wo aa raha hai par lautne k liye.qki uska dharti per waqt khatam ho gaya.or qk uska pyar ab us duniya mai nhi hoga to wo kaise rahega.use hi lene to aa raha hai.
1fairy - par wo to tum ho na.
2fairy - nhi mai to jariya hu. Usko rasta dikhane wali.uska pyar to koi or hi hai.
1 fairy - to wo alag q hue.or kya ab use isbar apna pyar milega.
2fairy - WO alag hue taki wo is dard ko bhi samajh paye samajh paye ke wo kya manyne rakhte hai ek dusre ke liye.or wo alag hue qki unka pyar swarthi nahi tha. Wo balidan dene se nahi darta tha. Or tumhara dusra jawab ke kya wo milenge is bar to
3fairy - WO to mujhper nirbhar karta hai.unki kismat to likhi jaa chuki hai.
2fairy - nahi hum bas rah dikha sakte hai .mod bhi sakte hai per badalna humare hath mai nahi.
3 fariry - dekhenge
2 fairy - hmm..hum jarur dekhenge.
1 fairy - matlab ye pyar or kismat ki jung hai.
2 n 3 fairy - ha.



Here at earth.
etf conference hall
Sh - kya yar ayesha itni badi good news hai ke tum or rathore sir parents banne wale ho or koi party bhi nahi.Hume bhi enjoy karne ka muka milta
CH - ha ayesha.kam se kam dinner per hi invite kar lete.hum kuch kha hi lete.
Sabhi apna sar move karte hai jaise kabhi nahi sudhrega.
Li - wise ayu dr me kya kaha sab thik hai na matlab tum or baby.
Ay - ha sab thik hai. Par ye sakshi kaha hai. Abhi tak nahi aayi.
Sh - pata nahi yar.or apne dono Hitlers bhi nahi aye.
Aye glares him n shree
Sh - sorry sorry bhul gaya unki patni yahi baithi hai. Ha par arjun sir ko to bol hi sakta hu.abhi sak jo nahi aayi.
Shretuza hanste hai or ayesha apna sir unbelieving mai hilati hai.
Itne mai rathore - abhi abhi hospital se phone aya hai.sakshi ka accident ho gaya hai. Jaldi chalo Sab.or arjun ko bhi phone karo.fast dammit.
Sabhi ghabra kar hospital ki taraf jate hai.
At hospital
Sabhi hospital pahuchte hai arjun bhi.
Ar - kya hua rathore sakshi ko.
Ra - pata nahi hospital se phone Aya k sakshi ka accident ho gaya hai.
CH - nurse sakshi anand.
Nu - kaun
Li - WO abhi kuch der pehle accident
Nu - ha wo room no 29.
Sabhi waha jate hai.
Ay - Dr sakshi wo thik to hai na.
Dr - sorry per unka bahut khatarnak accident hua hai or internal bleeding jyada hui hai.hum kuch nhi kar sakte.1/2 ya 1 ghanta hai bas unke pas ap log mil lijiye unse.
Sabhi shock ho jate hai.jaise ek pal ke liye sare senses kho dete hai. Fir sambhal kar sabhi ek sath sakshi bolkar uski taraf jate hai .
Ar - ye sab kaise hua sakshi.kisne kiya bolo.use gussa or ghabrahat ek sath aate hai.
Ay - kya hua sakshi bolo na.
Sak - WO aj meri ek journalist friend se milne Jana tha..usne pata nahi q call kia tha.
Mai waha pahuchi to kuch log use drag karke le ja rahe the. Maine unka picha kiya chupke se to
1 goon - kaha hai wo sabut
Joun- nahi dungi.
2 goon - bata de warna jaan se jayegai.
Jo - WO to tum waise bhi mujhe maar doge.
1goon - ha par bata degi to asan maut denge.
Jo - WO tumhe to nahi milega.bas meri khas dost ko milega.wahi jaha hum dukhi hote the to jate the.
Sak - WO mujhe dekh li thi usne goon se baat karte hue mujhe place bata di.or us goon be meri dost ko mar dia.
Mai waha se bhagi to ghabrahat mai main gir gayi or phone tut gaya. Un logo ne sun liya par mai waha se bhag nikli..bhag kar mai icecream k thele par gai Jo humari favourite place thi. Waha kaka ne mujhe ek file or pendrive di. Use padte hi hosh ud Gaye mere wo sik ki detail file thi.or uske khilaf sabut.
Ar ,ra - sik
Sak - ha sik. Waha Jane kaise wo goon aa gaye .mai etf aane ke liye bhagi. Unhe chakma dene k chakkar mai ye accident ho gaya.tum logon ko WO file or pd is jagah milegi.
Ye bolkar ek slip rathore ko deti hai.
Ra - tumne ye kab kiya.
Sak - mujhe pata tha ye apne pas rakhna matlab wo log ise chin lenge isiliye chupa diya.or accident k bad unhe kuch nhi mila to unhe laga wo galat ladki ka peecha kar rahe hai.mai bas us murder ki eye witness hu bas.or mujhse koi khatra nahi qk wo log mask pehne hai or mai mar rahi hu.for koi mujhe yaha le aya.
Ay - sakshi or wo rone lagti hai.
Sak - hay ayesha congrates tum mama bunne wali ho.khub khayal rakhna apna.or apne baby ka.mujhe had karogi na.
Aye - tumhe koi kaise bhul sakta hai kitna bolti ho tum.
Sak - ha par ab nahi jhelna padega tum logon ko.
Ra - sakshi.in trembling voice
Sak - tumhe bhi congrates sameer .akhir dad banned wale ho.ab to yakin karoge na sikandar hai ab to arjun ka sath doge na.bolo na sameer.
Ra nods or kuch bola nahi jata.
Sak shree Liza ko dekhti hai WO shree ki bahon mai ro rahi hai.
Sak - shree Liza ab to ek dusre ko i love u bol do meri last wish hi puri kar do
Sh - li dono use dekhte hai jaise tumhe pata tha.
Sak - aise mat dekho Mujhe hi nahi sabko pata hai.ab jaldi propose karo mere pas jyada time nahi hai.
Sh propose Lisa n she say yes. Par WO log khush nahi hai honge bhi kaise unki dost chord ker ja Rahi hai.
Sak - ab sik ko pakadte hi shadi ker lena promise karo
Both promise.
Sa - chotu
ch - mat jaao sakshi Hume chodkar .mai kiske sath khane ka competition karunga.
Sak - mai bhi nahi jana chahti par jana hoga.tum apni 11:30 wali ko jaldi propose karo or shadi karo .life ka koi bharosa nahi kab dhoka de jaye.
Sab rone lagte hai.
Sak - arjun
Arjun ki ankhe bhi nam hai.
Ar - ha sakshi.bolo
Sak - bahut pareshan kiya na Maine. Par ab nahi karungi.
Ar - nahi sakshi.aisi bat nahi hai .manta hu tum bas mujhe smile karana chahti thi.
Sak smile - arjun u know what I love you
Ar - janta hu.bahut pehle se but
Sak - janti hu mai bahut pehle se.
Ar - sach.mai . ha to kaha q nahi
Sa - kaise kehti tum is bat par bhi naraj ho jate.
Ar - sak.
Sak - main bachpan se pyar ko tadpi hu arjun .tumhe usse itna pyar karte dekha to pyar ho hi gaya tumse.ya shayad tumhare pyar se. Arjun wada karo ke agle janam mai mujhe mera pyar milega.
Ar - mai in sab mai nahi manta sakshi par yadi sach mai agla janam hota hai to mai wada karts hu tumse.apna sab kuch dao per laga kar bhi tumhare pyar ko adhura nahi rehne dunga.tumhe tumhara saccha pyar jarur milega..promise bolke sak ka hath pakadta hai.or sak ek smile k sath apni akhiri saanse leti hai.
Sab - sakshi



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue.
And very interesting update???
Re incarnation story??? Punar janam.
Mujhe at first laaga shayad koi re born ho rahi hai as sameer and Ayesha's child but sakshi ka maut toh baad me hui.
Anyways the scenes were quite painful.
Cont soon.
Waiting to see aage kya hota hai??
Will arjun die too??
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Part 2
Sakshi apni akhiri saanse leti hai.
Sab - sakshi ..or rone lagte hai.
Sak ke furnel ke bad uski batai jagah pahuchte hai.waha unhe sabut milta hai.waha se sab etf aate hai.sab dukhi hai par delay nahi kar sakte sik already alert ho chuka hoga.
In heaven
Teno fairy wahi hai.
1fairy - to wo aa gayi.
3 fairy - ha aa gayi. Par abhi jane ka waqt nahi tay hua hai.
2 fairy - ha ab usko bhi to aana hai.par abhi Use apni jindgi ka maksad pura karna hai.
1 fairy - chalo dekhte hai kya ho raha hai.
At earth
Etf conference hall
Ra - so team all ready.plan mai kisi ko koi problem.
All - no sir
Ra - backup ke liye call kiya.
CH - yes sir ..
Ar - team you can relax for some time rat ke andhere mai niklenge.
All nods and leave for their respective cabin.
Arjun uske cabin mai hai.rathore waha aata hai.arj k kandhe par hath rakh ker
Ra - arjun
Ar - is waqt nahi rathore.
Ra - par
Ar - kaha na ye waqt nahi hai. Rathore hume ayesha ko nahi le jana chahiye she is 4 mon pragnent .
Ra - maine mana kiya par wo nahi man Rahi hai.
Ar - WO bhi bahut jiddi hai na..
Ra - ha teri tarah. Pehle jiddi dost ko sambhalta tha ab biwi ko.
Ar - hmm. Let's go
Sab sik ki den mai aate hai waha dono taraf se fighting ho rahi hai. Etf over power kar lete hai sabko pakad ke le ja rahe hai tabhi sik bhagne lagta hai.uske samne ayesha aa jati hai use rokne ko. Wo sik ayesha ko target karta hai.lekin beech mai arjun aa jata hai.ayesha ko bhi dhakka lagta hai wo gir jati hai or chikhne lagti hai. Sik bhi bhagne lagta hai.
Ar - rathore ayesha ko hospital le kar jao.mai use dekhta hu.
Ra - par.
Ar - jaao
Rathore aye ko utha kar le jata hai.or arjun sik ke piche jata hai.use ek bullet already lagi hai.
Kuch der chase karne k bad ek Cliff k end par
Ar - ab bas sik bahut bhag liya tera khel khatam. Kehkar use khoob marta hai.or last mai use chaku se Marta hai jaise usne roshni ko mara tha. Fir apne ghutno par baith kar Jorse roshni chillata hai.
Idhar ssik mai thodi si jaan baki hai wo arjun par gun point karke uske heart per goli marta hai or khud bhi mar jata hai. Usi waqt waha shreetu ate hai or use jaldi hospital le kar jate hai. Dono ro rahe hai.
At hospital
Dr - sorry Mr rathore bacche ki saanse nhai chal rahi hai.use operate karke nikalna padega warna infection se Mrs rathod ki jaan chali jayegi.
Rat wahi chair par baith jata hai.or apne hatho se apna chehra chupa leta hai.
Ra - OK Dr ap taiyari kijiye.
Itne mai shreetu arjun ko lekar aate hai.Lisa bhi.
Ra - kya hua arjun ko.
Sh - between sob sir sik ne goli mar di.
Ra arj ka haath pakad ke - Dr Dr jaldi aaiye.arjun kuch nahi hoga tumhe.or ro padta hai
Ar - bas kya sam ro kar dost ko Vida karega.
Ra - kahi nhi ja raha samjha tu. I m sorry yar. Par itni badi saja to mat de.
Ar - nai sam tujhse kabhi naraz ho sakta hu kya mai. Mai to khud se apni jindgi se naraz tha.
Ra - arjun tu nhi ja sakta
Ar - ab is jindgi mai bacha hi kya hai.apne jivan ka maksad to pura kar liya Maine..or wo bhi to nahi hai yaha.to main kya karuga aisi jindgi ka jismai wo nahi hai.
Ra -ab tu selfish ban raha hai. Kya mai koi nahi.mujhe akele chod dega tu. Kya pyar hi sab kuch hai dosti kuch nahi
Ar - abhi mujhe jana hai sam .par mai lotunga tere pas wada hai mera. Waise bhi humara pyar jo adhura rah gaya use pura karne to

" Hume ana padega duniya mai dobara"
Or kuch adure wade bhi pure karne hai. Kuch chut gaya hai jo pana hai.wo bula rahi hai mujhe apne pas. Par hum jarur ayenge.
Choree - nahi sir aisa mat kahiye.
Ar - bahut sataya na Maine bahut danta tha .or tum logon ko shikayat bhi rehti thi mujhse. Tumhari shikayatien bhi to dur karni hai. Sam mai aunga.is bar mera sath doge na .mujhe mera pyar dilwane mai madad karoge na.
Ra - ha arjun mai kabhi bhi tumhara sath nhi chodunga.i promise.
Arjun ko apni life k start to end flashes aate hai.mar aa raha hu r ..Arj apni akhiri sanse leta hai.
Dr - i m sorry .he is no more.
Idhar ayesha jor se chillati hai.dr uske operation ki prep chodkar use attand karta hai.or injection deta hai. Sab waha daud kar aate hai.
Ra - kya hua dr.
Dr - its unbelivable. Maine apni life mai aisa case kabhi nahi dekha.
Ra - hua kya hai.aye thik to hai na dr.bolo
Dr - wo wo baby ki sanse fir se chalne lagi.sonogrphy ki to baby n mother is all fine. Its a miracle..matlab insano ko kai bar mar kar jinda hote dekha hai but embrao wo bhi least develop i really cant believe this.
Ra - with little smile ..aise sabko shock kar dena to uski aadat hai. To wo mujhe chodkar nahi gaya.
Sab apni apni soch mai hai..or ro rahe hai arjun ke liye.or uska furnel bhi kar dete hai.
In heaven
1 Fairy - to akhir uska waqt pura ho hi gaya. Usne apna maksad pura kar hi liya. Ab
3fairy - ab kya wahi hoga Jo kismat mai likha hai. UnKi kismat to likhi ja chuki hai..tumne dekha nahi ye chamatkar to kismat ki wajah se hi hua hai. Ab kya kehna hai tumhe.
2 fairy - Maine kab kaha kismat nhi hoti. Hoti hai. Par tum bhul rahi ho kismat hum nahi likhte wo bhagwan ji likhte hai or badalte bhi hai.
3 fairy - tum bhul rahi ho priti mai niyati hu kismat ka sitara ..mai kismat ko pad kar niyantrit karti hu. Uski kismat mai wahi hai or wo hi uska pyar bhi.
2fairy (priti) - mujhe bata rahi ho pyar ke bare mai.tum janti ho na mai pyar ka sitara hu.
1fairy - ap log kya bat kar rahe hai. Priti ap pyar ka sitara gai or niyati ap kismat ka.ap log bahut samajhdar hai par mai nahi.mai to ek aam pari hu.
Pri - aam or khas kuch nahi hota vanya sabki apni khasiyat hoti hai .tum bhi to swarg hara bhara rakhti ho.jab jindgi se thak kar insan yaha aate hai tab tumhre hi karan to unhe sukun milta hai.
Van - par aap log kya bat kar rahe hai. or kya aap fir se prithvi par jayengi priti.
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[It's about arjun riya n sakshi. Detail you will know after next part.
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Nice update.
Iska pls jaldi jaldi update dena.
Too interesting.
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Part 3

At heaven
Pri - nahi.mai fir se prithvi par nhi jaungi.
Van - to arjun k bare mai bataiye ap to use bahut acche se janti hai na . or ap use pyar nahi karti to uski roshni bankar q gai thi.
Pri ( rosh) - arjun ka janam khas tha..uska janam burai se ladne ke liye hua tha. Or pyar ko ek nayi unchai dene ke liye .mai to bas jariya bani .uska saccha pyar to koi or hi tha. Mai to us pyar ki paribhasha tha. Jisse usne pyar ko samjha or jana.mai wo jisne use uske maksad or pyar tak pahuchaya.
Van - matlab sakshi hi uska pyar thi..
Niy - haa whi uska pyar thi or ab uska naseeb bhi.
Pri - nahi..sakshi arjun ka pyar nahi thi.
Uska pyar to.
Van - bataiye na priti kaun thi arjun ka saccha pyar.
Pri- riya
Van - niy - kya riya par kaise.
Pri - chalo mai samjhati hu. Arjun uske dad ka business nhi sabhalna chahta tha wo police bankar desh or samaj ki sewa karna chahta tha. Uske dad ne use kabhi pyar nhi kiya. Ma to jaldi hi chali gayi. Pyar kya hai usne thik se mehsoos hi nhi kiya.bas uski life mai ek hi rishta tha dosti.
Sam se dosti.wo hasta tha masti karta tha par kuch kami thi. Fir mai ayi uski jindgi mai sam ki dost or uska pyar roshni bankar. Use pyar ke mayne sikhaye use pyar ki ahamiyat batayi.or meri hi wajah se to wo apne maksad se juda sik or uske jaise kai khatarnak logo ko mara usne.
Or isi bich wo apne sacche pyar se mila riya se.
Niy - nahi wo usse pyar nahi karta tha.wo to kuch hi samay raha uske sath. Usne sak k sath jyada waqt bitaya.
Pri - pyar ka ehsas hone ke liye bas ek pal hi kafi hai. Or wahi unhe hua ek pal mai pehle hi pal mai pehli hi mulakat mai pehli hi najar mai.dekho
Ariya first meet
Unki ankho ne apne pyar ko pehchan liya tha. Par dimag un par havi ho gaya.
Accha batao sak or arju ki first meeting mai kya hua tha.
Niy - kuch khas nahi.arjun to uski taraf thik se dekha bhi nahi .par sakshi ki ankho mai kuch tha.par iska matlab ye nhi k use bad mai nhi hua pyar
Pri - wo pyar nhi admiration tha. Accha batao kabhi usne sakshi ko dekha or uski koi special care ki.
Ni - haa. Jab bunti k apharan k liye wo car mai baithe the tab use dekha raha tha
Pri - wo uski feelings samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha na ki uski or feelings se dekh raha tha.
Ni - use us anjan lash ko dekhte waqt kaise pata sak ko vomit sassion ayenge.or use pani bhi diya usne ye care nhi.
Pri - use riya ki yad ayi thi us waqt yad hai ek bar use bhi aisa hi hua tha. Usne sak ko casually as team mate diya tha .use pata tha liza ayesha is mamle mai strong h wo nhi.
Ni - or jab use chot lagi thi to use god mai uthaya tha or uski care bhi li thi..
Pri - wo guilt tha .use laga uski wajah se sak ko lagi.ye bat to shree nhi samajh gya tha or tum
Ni - or jab sak ko birthday wish kiya tha
Pr - to kya hua . wo dil ka bura nhi tha as team mate wish kiya..wo sak ki feeling samakhta tha .respect bhi karta tha. Qki uska bhi pyar adhura raha tha.
Ni - or kidnapping k waqt law todna minister se ladna
Pri - ye sab arjun rawte k liye koi nayi bbat nhi thi WO to aisa hi tha.or maine kaha na wo sak ki as team mate care bhi karta tha.
Jaise shree ko jab killer ne attack kiya tha tab ki thi, jaise sam par hue humlo k waqt chinta karta tha. Jaise Lisa par attack hua tab thi.WO us team ko pariwar manne laga tha to pariwar ki care to har koi karta hai.
Ni- accha to riya special kaise wo bhi bas team mate hi to thi.
PR - accha. Kya sach mai..
Van - matlab.
Pri - matlab fir arj ne uska clip q usi waqt wapas nhi kiya jaise sak ke laye phool wapas kiye.Qk wo uski koi chij anjane mai hi apne pas rakhna chahta tha yad ke roop mai.bad mai wo mile na mile.
Ni - fir wapas bhi to kar di thi.
Pr - qk wo pareshan ho rahi thi.use accha nhi laga.or use laga wo rosh ko dhokha de raha hai.or waise bhi ab wo usi ke samne to rehti thi.
Ni - to isse kya sabit hota hai
Pr - humesha gusse mai or mujhe kisi se matlab nhi kehne wala arjun riya ko dekhne laga tha use tease karne laga tha.
Jaise
Gadi park kar paogi.
Ya fir kaise file hasil karogi use apni data ya percentage ki theory mai puri tarah uljha kar.
Bolkar.us waqt uska chahra kuch alag tha dekho.( dulha murder case scene)
Tabhi to riya ko gussa aya or wo file lekar ayi .jab usne kaha aurat ki kabiliyat par kabhi shak nhi karna chahiye. To uska chahere per ashchrya , riya ki or khichaw or ek Choti si hasi bhi thi jise wo rok raha tha.
Ni - fir jab use jab wo paper mile to sabke samne danta.or sak ko akele mai.
Pri - haa use gussa to aya.or us waqt wo sahi bhi tha..or use accha nhi laga.wo nhi chahta tha riya uska dard sahe.or rahi bat sakshi ki to use bas use batana tha wo galat hai or use uski chal acchi nhi lagi..par riya ka galat kam karna usse saha nahi gaya or wo khud par kabu nhi kar paya. Ummedien Hume apno se hi to hoti hai.
Van - ha ye to hai.aage bataiye
Pr - fir use pasand na hone par bhi riya ki di hui chai li.or uski baton or masumiyat dekh kar wo muskuraya tha. Jo or kabhi kisi ko dekh kar nhi muskuraya wo mere bad. Ha kabhi kabhi fir baccho ko dekhkar jarur muskuraya warna nhi.
Ni - fir bhi use dantta to tha na.
PR - ha as senior or as mentor.. Qki wo use majboot or perfect cop dekhna chahta tha. Isiliye to use goli chalane par majboor kiya..or usne chalai bhi apne arjun sir ke liye. Dusro ko practical ka object banane wala arjun riya ke liye khud practical ban gaya.. Usse uska banduk se dar un halaton mai darna saha nhi gaya.
Or uska tutna or rona bhi.isiliye kuch der k liye fir un diwaro ki kaid se fir asli arjun
Bahar aya. Or riya ko bhi to kitni fikar thi uski jab wo car mai band tha use nhi mila to wo kaise dar gayi or kaise rat k case se withdraw karne k bad bhi usne shree se jankari lene ko bola..arjun ki halat dekh kar chai mangwai.kair yaha bat arjun ki ho rahi hai.riya ka pyar or sak ka khichav to sabne dekha tha.
Van - ye to hai ..
Pr - or jab riya ko goli lagi thi. Kitna dar gaya tha wo .apni duty itne paise or apni jaan dav per laga kar gaya tha use bachane. Usse req kar raha tha man mai hi goli chale ko. Or jab use andar laya to uski ankho ne hi sab keh dia.uska pyar dard takleef sab.or usne kaha mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga vishwas rakho mujh par. Qk usko pata tha riya uspar wishwas nahi chodegi. Or use jaldi ilaj ki jarurat hai isliye bina kisi ka rasta dekhe khud hi ladne chala gaya..agar aisa hi karna tha to pehle bhi ladne ja sakta tha na.
Va - ha .pehle to wo intjar hi kiya usne sabka.
Pri - or fir hotel mai jab riya aayi to use uski fikar hui isliye danta..or riyaj khan k case mai to arjun ko Jalan bhi hui. Tabhi to riyaj k bare mai itni concern se puchtach karna accha nhi laga to uski bat bich mai kat di. Fir pyar ka matlab bhi samjhaya..dekha jaye to usne pyar me bare mai USSR khul kar baat ki. Shayad use uska I just love him kehna accha nhi laga.
Or fir mandir mai uske jeb mai coin dalne par bhi usne inkar nhi kiya.or nikala bhi nahi.or usi me pyar or vishwas ne hi to uski us din Jaan bachai.
Ni - or use bar bar wapas desk Jane ko q kehta tha
Pri - use or behtar banane ke liye.WO janta tha wo bahut mehnat karke waha I hai.or itni aasani se haar nhi manegi.uske igo par chot karta tha taki WO behtar bane. Or use uski fikar bhi thi.
or jab riya ne use thanks bola or kai bat ki to use welcome bola.wo uska thanks tha itni kam waqt mai use samajhne k liye. fir jab use rajat ne pakda tab ek pal ke liye arjun duty or duniya bhul gaya bas riya ki hi fikar thi.unki aankhe bhi baat kar rahi thi ..or jab wo hospital mai thi to kaise wo bar bar uspar viswas karne ko keh raha tha. Or jab usne akhiri saans li to use mai dikhi yani pyar najar aye use ..uspal pyar or riya uske liye ek ho gaye. Fir uske bad uska dil puri tarah band ho gaya.wo fir kabhi nahi muskuraya. Fir kabhi kisi ko itne paas nhi ane diye .fir kabhi kisi ko us tarah nhi dekha.uske bad wo tuta nahi qki usme insaf or Basle ke siwa kuch nhi bach



Note - this is what i observe throughout serial.if i miss something or wrong somewhere plz pm or comment ill add it in next part.. Its purely ariya love story n fight with destiny. Thanks..
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Ni - par Jo bhi ho uske naseeb mai sakshi ko likh diya gaya hai.
Pri - smile kismat ki rekhaien karmo se badalti rehti hai.
Ni - par ye itna asan bhi nahi
Pri - asan to nhi par namumkin bhi nahi.
Ni - to tumhe lagta hai arjun or riya apne bhagya se lad kar jeet payenge.
Pri - ab kuch chijien hume waqt par chod deni chahiye.
At earth.
Ra - ayesha ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho.
Aye - better. Sik pakda gay na..arjun sir ka badla pura hua na.
Ra - ha ..or wo rone lagta hai. Par wo hume chod kar humesha ke liye bhagwan k pas chala gaya.
Aye - nahi sam ye nhi ho sakta. N she weeps
Ra - shh ayu mat roo wo ayega usne kaha tha. Mujhe lagta hai wo humara beta banke ayega. Promise me ayu tum mujhe mera arjun sahi salamat dogi.
Ay - I promise SAM

After 5 month hospital
Ra - Dr Dr plz attand my wife use labour pains ho rahe hai.
Dr - nurse jaldii karo.
Shree Lisa bhi ate hai now they are married. Chotu bhi apni 11:30 wali Divya k sath aata hai.they also married
Li - sir ayu kaisi hai.
Ra - andar ot mai le gaye hai.
Kuch der bad
Dr - congratulation Mr rathod apki wife ne bete ko janam diya hai n she is also fine.
Ra with very bright smile - thank you Dr.
All hug him.n congratulate
Sab andar jate hai.ayesha ko hosh ata hai. Itne mai nurse baby ko lati hai.
Nu - ye lijiye Mr n Mrs rathore apka beta
Ra- kitna cute hai.thanks ayeaha n give her baby.
Ay - kitna chota or pyara hai humara baby SAM.
Sh - bahut accha hai ayesha. Tumhara baby congrats .
Li - ha ayu so sweet ..
Di - Cong ayu. She also become their friend .she is interior designer by profession.
Ch - ha aye Cong but baby ka naam kya rakhna hai.
Ra - arjun ..arjun sameer rathore.he told with teary smile.
All have tears in their eyes.
Aye - my baby..my ajju. N kiss his forehead.
2 weeks later
SAM mom don arti of samsha n arj.or dono ma k pair chute hai.
S.ma - beta humare pote k liye humne puja rakhi hai.tum log rest kar lo or ready ho jana.aj sham mai kulguru ji bhi ayenge.
Samsha - ji ma
In evening.
Samsha baby k sath puja mai baithte hai.Puja complete hone ke bad.
S.ma- kulguru ji ye hai humara pota arjun .iski patrika banwani hai.
K.gu- bahut pyara beta hai.or naam bhi bahut accha rakha hai.mai patrika banata hu.
Kuch der bad
Kugu- sameer beta bahut honhar hoga apka beta.apko garv hoga uspar. Bahut janbaj or hoshiyar hoga. Par
Ayesha ghabrakar - par kya guruji.
Gu- bahut sangharsh hai ek samay ke bad iske jivan mai. Ye khas maksad se janma hai. Jo iska hai use pane k liye. or hathiyaro se khatra hai ise..par ye to har yoddha ko hota hai.hathiyar to isle khilone hai. 23ve saal mai bahut bada tufan ayega iski jindgi mai.Jo ya to sab bana dega ya mita dega.
Aye - ye kya keh rahe hai aap.mere baccha kya hoga ise.
Gu - kuch chijen waqt par chod do beti. Bahut ladla hoga tera beta. Ye yad rakh. Tum dono hi Ise sahi raah dikha sakte ho.or ye vijeta hoga .
All smile.
5 year later
Arjun is 5 year old. Sam ki pith par ghoda ghoda khel raha hai.or ayesha khana khila rahi hai.
Ar - ye dadda ghoda ye jaldi jaldi chalo na
Sam - ha mere baap chal raha hu.
Ay - no sam dhere chalo warna tumhare sath chalte chalte mere hath se plate gir jayegi.
Ar - mamma plz maja nhi aayega.
Ay - no ajju mamma ki bat mante hai na mamma thak jayengi.
Ar - stop dadda .
Sam - kya hua beta.
Ar - mamma thak jayengi.or ap bhi to.
Ay - are kitna samajhdar hai mera ladla. Ohh mera beta n kiss his forehead
Sam - mera bhi..n hug both of them. So my champ kya karoge aaj to holiday hai na.
Ar - ha aj hum khub masti karenge.
Sasha - OK beta.
Itne mai shiza or divtu bhi aate hai.
Sh - yes champ aaj pure din masti.
Ar - shree chacu Lisa masi..ap dono ye ye.
Divtu - or hum bhi hai.
Ar - ye mama mami bhi aye hai..wow ab to bahut maja ayega. Matlab tanmay or lavanya or nihal bhi aye hai.
( tanmay or lavanya shiza ke twins hai arjun se 6mon chote or nihal divtu ka beta arj se 1 sal chota)
Ch - ha baba sab aye hai.
Arj - wow . mom mai Samara ko bhi utha lu.
Aye - no ajju Samara bahut Choti hai only 2 year old. WO apke sath cricket nhi khel payegi.
Arj - OK mumma.
Li - aj Samara abhi tak so rahi hai.
Ay - ha wo use fever tha .to rat ko late soyi..bas kya ajju bhi nhi soya .par fir bhi jaldi uth gaya.Samara to jan hai uski.
Di - bahut hoshiyar hai ayu tumhara beta.
N all doing chit chat n children are playing.

Precap - 16 year latter. Grown up kids.

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