Ariya SS - HUME AANA PADEGA DUNIYA MAI DOBARA part 13 on pg 27 14/12

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one more ariya story...loved it

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D way u explaind abt Ariya is simply outstanding dear

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Part 5

After 18 year location shimla

Night time

Sam window k pas khada hai kuch soch raha hai.itne mai koi uske kandhe par hath rakhta hai.

Sam - tum soyi nhi ayesha

Ay - ap aj bhi wo sab nhi bhule na ap aj bhi chain se nhi so pate.

Sam - kya wo sab bhulna itna asan hai.kya tum bhul payi ho.

Ay - nahi par maine apne apko samjha liya hai .ap bhi samjha lijiye.

Sam - q bandh diya tumne mujhe apni kasam se ayesha.

Ay - qki ab or kisi apne ko khone ki himmat nhi bachi hai mujhme. Chodiye wo sab .so jaiye.

Sam - neend nahi aa rahi

Ay - to wahi kijiye jo ap roj karte hai.

Sam - hmm.

Sam apne room ke bahar jata hai. Or do rooms mai jata hai .kuch der bad laut aata hai.

Ay- ab to neend aa jayegi na.

Sam - hmm..ab aa jayegi.jab apne baccho ko sukun se sota hua dekhta hu to mai bhi so jata hu taki subah uth kar unke muskurate chahere dekh sakun. Or khud ko yakin dila sakun k us waqt liya humara faisla sahi tha.

Aye - ha . ab so jaiye.gn

Sam - gn .thanks for coming in my life.

Aye smile.

Next morning

Samsha uthte hai ready hokar room k bahar aate hai or samne dekhte hai pura room dacorate hai or sab log hatho mai ful lekar khade hai.

All - surprise.. Happy marriage anniversary.

Samsha - thanks. Par ye surprise.

Sh - ye sab apke ladle ka plan hai bhabhi.

Aye - par wo hai kaha. Itne mai ek ladka guitar le kar gana gate hue aata hai.

Yeh toh sach hai kee bhagwan hai, hai magar phir bhee anjan hai

Dharatee pe rup ma bap kaa, us vidhata kee pehchan hai...

WO guitar kisi or ko dekar aakar samsha k samne baithta hai or unhe flower deta hai or unke pair chuta hai. Sam use utha k hug karta hai

Janmdata hai jo, nam jinse mila,

Thamkar jinakee unglee hai bachpan chala ( hold his finger)

Kandhe par baithke, jinke dekha jahan(put his hand on SAM's shoulder)

Gyan jinse mila, kya bura kya bhala

Itne upkar hain kya kahe, yeh batana naa aasan hai( move his head in no)

Dharatee pe rup ma bap kaa, us vidhata kee pehchan hai...

Sam kis his forehead n they see ayesha looking at them teary eyes.he goes to her n wipe her tear

Janam detee hai jo, ma jise jag kahe

Apanee santan me, pran jiske rahe

Loriya hothon par, sapne bunatee najar( put his palm on her eyes)

Nind jo var de, hanske har dukh sahe( smile at her n make her seat on bad)

Mamta ke rup me hai prabhu, aapse paya vardan hai(put his head in her lap n she crease his hair)

Dharatee pe rup ma bap kaa, us vidhata kee pehchan hai...

Then a girl come with cake in her hand put that on table n hold samsha hand n bring them in middle of room. Both boy n girl sing together

Aapke khwab ham, aaj hokar jawan

Us param shaktee se karte hain prarthna( both put tilak on their forehead n take blessing again)

Unakee chhaya rahe, rehatee duneeya talak

Ek pal reh sake ham naa jinke bina( both put their hand on their head n four of them hug)

Aap dono salamat rahe, sabke dil me yeh arman hai

Dharatee pe rup ma bap kaa, us vidhata kee pehchan hai.

All circle around them n dance.

All clap.

Aye start crying

Girl - ohh no bhai humne to socha tha mummaor dadda khush ho jayenge par ye kya ho gaya.

Boy - ha sim mujhe to lagta hai hum kangal ho jayenge itne pracious moti to kho rahe hai .n both wipes ayesha tears

Ayesha smiles n says- arjun samara kitni badi badi batien karne lage ho ajkal my babies.

Ar - thats not fair mumma i am 23 years old

Sa - ya mumma i am also 20 year old not baby

Ay - but mere liye to tum log humesha mere baby hi rahoge.

Armara- we love you mom.

Sam cough

Armara - we love you too dad

Four of them hug

Now all clear their throat.

Now samsha hug shiza n chotu.

They cut cake n feed each other n all.

Aye - ap sab lawn mai baithiye mai breakfast lagati hu.

Ar - no mom aaj ka khana hum bacche banayenge.

Aye - kya tum log nhi ajju

Sa- no mom hum banayenge.

Li - nhi hum kar lenge

Tanmay - no mom ap log bahar wait kijiye bas.

Lavanya - ya mom n masi plz.

Cho - but khana accha banna chahiye

Nihal - ha baba ek dum dhasu khana banayenge.

All kids - aap sab bahar jaiye

Samsha shiza chotu comes at lawn.

Sam - thanks tum sabko wakai bahut accha surprise tha.

Shr- kya bhai sa ap bhi hum family hai or ap aise thanks bol rahe hai.

Cho. - ha jijaji.shree sahi keh raha hai.

Li - or plan to apke ladle ajju ka tha.

Aye - tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise wo bas humara ladla hai kya hume nhi pata ke tum tanmay lav or nihal se jyada ajju ko pyar karte ho.

Ch - q nhi karenge Ayu wo humari family ka first child Jo hai.

Sh - par yakeen nahi hota uska naam hi nahi uska face bhi pura arjun sir jaisa hai. Koi bhi antar nahi.

Li - ha or adatien bhi kuch same hai.

Cho - par wo arjun sir ki tarah dukhi nahi rehta.or khadus bhi nhi hai.din bhar hansta hansata rehta hai.

Sam - arjun bhi aisa hi khush rehta tha or rakhtta tha.or pehle WO akdu or khadus bhi nhi tha.wo to bichare ki kismat or waqt kharab the.pehle uski family or fir roshni use chod gai.wo bhi khush rehna chahta tha par.

Ay - par mere ajju k sath aisa kuch nhi hoga. Qki har hal mai hum uske sath hai .or na hi past mai Jo hua uska asar hum apne kisi bacche par padne denge.

Precap - discussion on past Some happy n sad moment n breakfast prepare by kids.

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Tumpa12

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Posted: 9 years ago

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interesting

loved it

thnx for pm

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow..
Arjun is back..

Plz continue soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 6

Samsha sheeza n chotu in lawn

Sh - haa bahut kuch ho gaya in 23 salon mai humari life mai .pehle sakshi fir arjun sir chale gaye..us dukh ko arjun ke janam ne kuch kam kiya tha. Fir humari life mai lavanya tanmay nihal or Samara aye. Kitne khush the hum.fir wo haadsa ho gaya.

Chotu ki ankhe nam ho jati hai.

Sh - sorry chotu mera wo irada nhi tha.

Ch - janta hu shree. Par kya karu us hadse ko yad karte hi Divya yad aa jati hai.

Ay - chotu..plz sambhalo apne aap ko nihal ka socho ab Divya bhabhi ki jagah tum hi ho..

Ch - ha ayu ab wo nahi hai.us hadse ne chin liya use mujhse.

Sam - chotu hum sab hai na..

Ch - ha ap sabke sahare hi to itne sal katien hai..

Li - baccho ko kuch nhi pata chalna chahiye.

Ayu - ajju to aksar mujhse sawal karta hai. Humne Mumbai q choda yaha q aa gaye .pata nahi kab tak sambhal paungi uske in sawalon ko

Li - ha tanlav bhi puchte hai.par hume chup rehna hoga.

Sam - par kab tak hum sach chupa sakte hai hume unhe sach bata dena chahiye

Ayu - nhi mai kuch nhi janti. Apne kasam li hai sam meri ap nhi batayenge.

Ch - ha Jo bat takleef de use chupa Lena hi behtar hai. Humare baccho ki khushi ke liye..

Sh - or hum sath hai ye kya kam hai .past to nhi badal sakte par aj Jo hamare pas hai usme khush to reh sakte hai.or mum ne Hume milaya ek pariwar banaya or yaha shimla mai wo rishta or majboot ho gaya.

Ayu - ha humme hi nahi humare baccho mai bhi kitna pyar hai.chahe humme khun ka rishta nhi par shree sam ka bhai hai.chotu or Lisa mere bhai bahen. Or humare bacche kabhi lagte nhi k ek parents k bacche nhi hai kitna pyar hai. Isi liye to hum pas mai rehte bhi hai.

( guys samsha k left mai sheeza or right mai chotu ka ghar hai)

Or ab yahi humari Choti si duniya hai.

Sam - mai wapas jane ko nhi keh raha par baccho ko unki jadon se dur nhi rakhna chahiye.

Ay - nhi ap aisa kuch nhi karenge

Sheetu - ha ayu is right

Sam - OK..

Itne mai kids enter

Ar - breakfast is ready ...

All refreash their mood

CH - accha to bana hai na..

Ni - oh baba common jab in logon k sath sadabhar restaurant k malik ka beta hoga to bura banne ka sawal hi nhi.

Armara n tanlav glare him

Ni - I mean jab humari team hogi to khana bura kaise banega.

Chotu dekhte hai..

Sh - hope lisa tumhare bete ne koi gadbad na ki ho .WO or uske experiments

Li - shut up shree mere bete k khilaf kuch nahi.tum apni beti ko sambhalo jab dekho tab tab mai ghusi rehti hai.kabhi help nhi karti meri.

Sh - ha to dekhna kitni badi software engineer banti hai meri lab

Li - haa to tum bhi dekhna mera tanu ek din jab bada scientist banega tab.huh

Sh - him

Sam - ye log kabhi nhi badlenge. Pehle etf mai ek dusre ko pareshan karne ka or ladne ka ek maunka nhi chodte the socha tha shadi k bad badlenge par

Ayu - par ab naya topic Jo hai ladne ka lisa ka tanu or shree ki lav

Ch - or inki humesha ki bahsa..

Sab helplessly dekh rahe hai or shija lad rahe hai..

To be continued...

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello guys

Character sketch is added on page one please have a look.

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manasvi..

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All are watching shiza fight helplessly..

Ar - are meri beautiful masi apka tanu the best hai.or mera champ kaku apki lav top class hai..or ho bhi q na mere bhai behen Jo hai.hai na

Shiza - ha ajju u r right.

Sh - tum bhi na Lisa

Li - ha shree mai bhi na samajh gai bas tum nahi samjhe

Ar- offo apki bahas mai humara banaya breakfast thanda ho jayega.samjhe ya samjhau

Sasha shiza chotu shocked hearing that

All kids watch their faces.

Ar - kya hua.

Ayu - kuch nahi ajju wo tumne sys q bola

Ar - what mom aap bhi muh se nikal gaya isme kuch special hai kya.

Ch - chotu nahi chalo tum logon ka banaya breakfast test karte hai.

All sat for breakfast..

Nihal - so baba kaisa hai

Ch - tum ek din mera naam jarur roshan karoge beta.kya banaya hai.

Samara - that's not fair maamu hum sabne banaya hai.

Ch - ha par ye halwa nihal ne banaya hai bilkul divya ki ..or wo ruk jata hai.

All get sad.

Ch - ha to ye acchi bat hai udas hone wali nahi.beta ma ki tarah hi banayega na.

All smile at this

Sam - OK.sab log kal chuttiyan khatam ho rahi hai hum Delhi wapas ja rahe hai.

Tan -no badepapa plz ek do din or

Ayu - no beta ap logon ke college bhi khul rahe hai.

Ar - ha hume jaldi jana chahiye.bahut chutti le li..

Tan - ha ha tujhe to jaldi hogi hi.

Arj glare him..

Lav - kya hua ajju tanu ko q ghur rahe ho wo tumhari .bich mai hi

Nih - tumhari matlab arjun bhai ne gf bana li.

Arjun split his tea n cough ..ayesha rub his back.

Ayu - tum log dhere 2 kya batien kar rahe ho..or ajju tum thik se chai piyao.

Ar - yes mom.

Samara - what bhai ye kya chakkar hai.mujhe bhi batao na.

Ar- tanu- lav- nih- simmi you are kid ye tumhari bat nahi hai samjhi tum..

Simmi - look mom dad ye log mujhe kuch nahi batate kiddo bulate hai.I am 20 not any more kid huh ..mujhe bat hi nahi karni kisi se..

N she left lawn .4 of them rush behind her to pacify her.

Sh - bhaisa dekha apne kitne khush hai bacche .kya apko ab bhi lagta hai unhe past k bare mai batana chahiye.

Li - ha jiju i think unhe aise hi happy free life jeene deni chahiye.

Ayu - mai to kab se yahi keh rahi hu.

Ch - ha Jo batien takleef de unhe bhul hi Jana chahiye.

Sam sigh - ok ..ap log jeete mai hara. MV par kabhi na kabhi to sach bahar ayega hi. Sach ko hum kitna bhi chupa le par wo kabhi nahi chupta .kash aplog ye jaan pate.

Par in sab ki batien koi sun leta hai. Wo arjun hai.

Ar mv aisi kya bat hai jo dad batana change hai or sab unhe rok rahe hai. Kuch bahut serious hai. 13 sal ho gaye maine dad ke chahere par ssukun nahi dekha.kya ye who bat hai Jo dad ko pareshan karti hai.agar ye bat hai to mai pata laga ke rahunga.I promise you dad mai apko apka sukun lotaunga ye apke buddy ka wada hai apse .Arjuna's promise.

Next day all reached Delhi.

Arjun tanu lav nihal and samara gather at their daily adda.which is tree house in samsha garden.it is prepared on request of arjun bcoz he want his conference hall (ha usne apne dad se ye hi bola that)where he can meet all his bro sis cum friend andspend time.they gather there two time in a day.first in morning after breakfast n before college and second time after dinner.

So all are present there.

Sam - OK all my bros ab batao kal kis bat par ajju bhai ko ched rahe the.kya sach mai unki gf hai.

Lav- thoda complicated hai simmi wo hai bhi nahi par wo hai..

All laugh at this arjun glare at them and Samara confused

Simmi - matlab

Tan- matlab ajju par waise to college ki jyadatar girls flat hai.but humare bhai sahab apni dream girl ka wait kar rahe hai.

Simmi - what dream girl matlab kaisi hai wo

Nih - ha bhai aj bata bhi do uske bare mai him to bas jante hai koi dream girl hai but description to bata do.

Tanu - ha bhai ajju bata bhi de..

Lav - shayad hume mile to hum pehchan le.

Ar smile OK- WO uska chahera to maine bhi nahi dekha. Par jab wo sapno mai aati hai to har taraf dhuan dhuan hota hai.

At two places

Place 1 pink

Place 2 red

Place 1 - har tarf dhua dhua hai.gas par rakha khana jal gaya hai.

Place 2- ek ladki puja ki thali le kar aa rahi hai.usme dhup hai jisse Charo or dhua hai.

Arjun - or mere kano mai pyara sa music bajne lagta hai.

P1- usi dhue mai ek ladki apne mobile ko ful volume mai laga kar song par dance kar rahi hai.bina aaspas ki khabar ke.

P2- WO ladki thali se arti kar rahi hai. Charo or arti ki awajen gunj rahi hai

Ar - fir wo dhere dhere chalne lagti hai or uski payal ki chanchan mere dil tak pahuchti hai.

P1 - usi waqt ek lady aakar uska iPhone band kar deti hai or wo ladki bhagne lagti hai neche pade bartano par se bhagne ki wajah se chanchan ki awaj aa rahi hai.

P2- arti k bad wo ladki chalne lagti hai or sabko arti deti hai.jisse uske payal ki chanchan sunai deti hai.

Ar - uske face par humsha ghunghat hota hai mujhe chahera dikhta hi nhi.WO apsaraon ki tarah white saadi mai face dhak kar aati hai

P1- ladki ne knee length danim skirt or pochie top pehna hai agte bhagte white curtain se takra jati hai or wo us curtain k sath niche gir jati hai..

P2 - WO ladki k sir par duppatta hai or wo sabhi bado ka ashirwad leti hai.

Ar - mujhe naam to nahi pata isiliye mai use pyar se chanchan bulata hu.par uska naam bahut hi pyara hoga jise log bahut pyar se bulate honge ..arjun smile.

P1- WO ladki khadi hoti hai fir bhagne k liye par wo lady aa jati hai gusse mai riyaaa ..n here is our riya with naughty smile

P2 - uske sir par ek old lady hath ferti hai or pyar se ashirwad deti hai.khush rahiye sakshi bitiya..n she smile sweetly.

N our screen freeze on arjun dreamy smile riya naughty smile n sakshi sweet smile..

Pink for ri n red for sakshi

Ohh humari heroine to junglee billi hai.. N second one sanskari gudiya.

Baki bad mai...