Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update shomi.
Chalo arjun ko jhatka laaga lekin usne bhi jhatka de hi diya.
Bhai hero Jo hai, itna toh banta hi hai.
Riya and meher ek hai, chalo sab ki guess ki jeet hui. Sab log milke clap karo buddies. Its celebration time aur haan author ( shomi) ko bhi party me invite karo. Usko treat hum denge.
Shree, Riya and ayesha share a great camaraderie. Very refreshing amidst all these taunts, glares, tears of one sided selfless love, pain , agony etc.
Great progression of the story.
Wow!!! Lady dabang ki yeh kaunsi avatar hai janab??? Liked it.
Toh inke story toh banne se pehle hi track pe aagayi.
Ab hero heroine ka kuch kijiye shomi ji. Ab toh ap unse directly communicate bhi karti hai toh apke liye yeh mahaan kaam ko anjaam dena aur bhi aasaan hai.
Anyways, that's it for today.
Waiting for future updates filled with lot more surprises.
Do cont soon dear.
And thanks for pm.
Edited by utsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulous
Arjun super shocked face
This is new ayesh loves sameer
Hope to see their love story too
Please continue soon
Thanks for pm



Thanx 4 liking
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

I knew of Riya and meher are same people..

So is riyas real name Riya??
Arjun's shocked face..
Imagined it so good..
Wow Aisha is in love with Rathore...
While Riya loves Arjun..
Riya shree Aisha bonding is amazing..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon

P.s. Who is me??




Thnx sb bata dun gi sab jaise jaise story agy bare gi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Spcl note for spcl people.


Mai kch dino tak update nai kr sakti bcz mai kafi busy hun cznx ki shadi mei, 10 feb tak free hun gi.

S0rry
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's k dear
we can understand
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Posted: 9 years ago
its ok dear we understand enjoy the wedding 🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It's k dear
we can understand




Thanx for undrstsndng me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

its ok dear we understand enjoy the wedding 🥳


Thanx for undrstnding me, i'll enjoy thnx [^:-P]
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 8(A)



Riya:"ab tum jao or paper work complt karo. Or shree sandhya ko bolo k jo arjun sir file dy k gye hain wo ly kr mere cabin mei aye." in very strck voice
Both:"yes mem" and left

After 3 mins.
Sandhya:" mai i come in mem?"
Riya:"come in" or usy beithne ka ishara krti hai.

Meher:"vry welldone sandhya tum ne jaisi mai ne kaha tha bilkul waisi file banayi, thanx"
Sandhya:"thank you mem, and mem thanx kis lye?"
Meher:"pleasure is al mine,mujhy kal raat file complt kr k dyne k lye hata k wo file jani ETF mei thi or wahan se yahan aani thi, or file mai banani thi is lye thnx kaha"

Sandhya:"mem its ok mai samjh sakti hun ap par kia guzri thi raat mei."

And phr file k about discusse krte hain.

09:00 pm

Riya:"chalo shree mai drop kr dun gi, or haan gauthan tum kab apni gari agye bara rahe ho ya sari life sirf utsha ko drop hi krte raho gye. 😃 😃 " ye sunte hi sb hansne lagte hain or hamari UTSHA rani aaisha k pechy khari ho jati hai and start blushing.

Gautham:"mai tu kb se tyar hun apni gari aagye barhane k lye mgr aaisha dii ki shadi ka wait hai"
He is smiling bcz this is his most fvr8 topic.

Riya:"hope so ab wo din bhi jald hi aa jaye ga" and wink at aaisha and shree "liken abi tu tum in dono ko drop kar do"
Gautham:"yes mem" and riya and shree.

Shree ko drop krne k bad wo sidhy apne papa (com) k ghr jati hai.

07:45 In morning.
ETF office.
Arjun sb se pehly aa k conf.room mei betha hai or riya shree ka wait kar raha.

In mind.
*ye aj dono late kaise hun gye aane do unhe*

After 15 mins rathore also come and sees arjun in conf.room.

Rathore:"rawte tum itni subh conf.room mei q?"
Arjun:"kisi ka wait kar raha hun"
Rathore:"kis ka?"
Arjun:"riya ka"

Rathore:" dam it, riya ka wait or wo bhi tum 😲 " he is in shock.

Rathore in mind
*kal tak tu usy dant'te dant'te ye thakta nai tha or aj drct uska wait is k dimagh mei kia chal raha hai*
Rathore:"rawte tum kal cbi office gye thy cbi cheif meher se mulaqat howi"

Arjun:"han howi thi wo meeting mei thi mai khud conf.room mei chala gya and i was shock"

Rathore:"shock or tum? Aisa kia dekh lia tum ne wahan?"

Arjun:"shree"
Rathore:"shree? Kia Shree wahan tha?"
Arjun:"han shree wahan as a cbi teach exprt kam kar rahe"

Rathore:"dam it" in mind *ye tu mujhy pata tha, riya wahan hai ya nai ye pata krna hai*
Choreeya:"gud m0rng sir"
Arjun:"gud m0rng team" rathore and trio ne shock ho k arjun ki tarf dekha in mind *ye kia howa kharus ko*

Riya in mind *mujhy tu laga tha k arjun sir ghussa karen gye but ye tu norml se bhi kafi zeyada claim hain hn k dimagh mei kia chal raha hai*
Arjun:"riya tel me al the truth tum wahan kaise?"

Rathore:"tum kis truth ki bat kar rahe ho? Or riya kahan thi?"
Arjun:"riya tum i mean ap batao gi ya mai batao?" rathore and chotu are shocked bcz of his andaz e beyaan.

Riya:"sir mai just us ko pakra chahti thi jis ki waja se mujhy ETF mei aana para"

Arjun:"sik ko q pakrna chahti ho?" in little bit anger.

Riya:"sir 4 saal pehly us ne apko chot punhchai thi?"
Arjun:"han tu?" he glare her.

Riya:"sir 6 saal pehly jb cbi waln ne sik ka sb ko bataya tha us wqt cbi ka cheif kon thy pata ap ko?"

Rathore:"haan us wqt cheif of cbi shivaji satam mukharjee thy jo ab com hain"

Riya:" yes sir un k bhai k aik beti jise unhun ne apni beti banaya howa or ye bat kisi ko nai pata, or 6 saal pehly sir un k bhai, bhabi, bhatjy or bhatiji ko sik ne maar dala bs ..." phr wo rone lag jaati hai or shree k elawa sb shock mei usy dekh or sun rahe hain.
"ye pani piyo beta!" sb awaz ki tarf dekhte hain wahan com SHIVAJI SATAM MUKHARJEE khare hote hain with lots of tears in his eyes.

Riya:"nai mujhy nai peena"

T.b.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update yrr
arjun ka behaviour sach mein shocking hai
aage kya hua pta nhi chala
and sam bhai bhi riya k cbi mein hone ki mystry k peeche hai
yrr arjun bhai apna gussa control kro
riya bhabhi waise bhi aapse senior hai
and eagerly waiting for watching their reaction
aur comm ab kya krenge pta nhi chala
kyu ki aapne prt A hi diya
pta hai shadi mein busy hai
fir bhi thank you
for update
and enjoy there lot yrr😉

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