Ariya SS: Missing Puzzle Ch 5 UPDT 28th April 2016

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Hi Dearies,
After a long gap, I am back with a story. Sorry for not updating my other stories. I ran out of excuses, so no excuses for not updating😛 This is for jeharshu . Sweety, sorry for breaking the promise over and again. This one is for you, the same completed one I was talking about before months. This story is fully completed. its handwritten in my book. but I just have to type it out.

Missing Puzzle

Chapter 1


Sun started dipping taking away the light with him. Slowly darkness prevailed in the atmosphere. Amidst the darkness, some people carried out their secret plan in a ship docked near the shore. Iqbal, the underworld don stood near the window over seeing his crew carrying out their assignments. Time to time he gave instructions to them regarding how to pack the cargo efficiently. He was a bit restless. He was in a hurry to dispatch the consignment without any problem. This consignment will help him to settle for life.

Breaking him from his thoughts, a loud gunshot was heard outside the ship. Everyone was alerted, so was he. Fishing out his gun he started firing towards the source of voice. All of a sudden he was kicked from behind. The gun flew from his hand. He turned back and saw Arjun Suryakanth Rawte and his elite team of ETF. Iqbal knew that his dream of settling for life has been shattered into million pieces.


***(@)***


After arresting Iqbal and gang, Sameer Rathod (Chief of ETF) instructed Arjun (2nd in command) and Chotu (Commando, ETF) to search the ship. Sreekanth Sen urf Shree (Technical Expert) was given the duty to hack into the system, Ayesha (3rd in command) oversaw the process of sending the criminals to the station. Sakshi (Crime Journalist) recorded everything in her video camera which will be later published as breaking news.

Chotu opened the barrels one by one. There were drugs filled. He opened the last barrel and was shocked by what he saw.


"Arjun Sir"


Arjun, who was searching a barrel, looked at Chotu as he called him. Clueless, he walked towards Chotu and followed Chotu's eyes; his heart skipped a beat as he saw a girl lying in the barrel. Her face was not seen properly. Coming out of the shock, he got hold of her shoulder and started pulling her up. He was afraid that she may be dead. Chotu also helped him in pulling her out.

As soon as he managed to pull her half way, he swung her over his shoulder, effectively taking her out of the barrel. He ran towards Liza (the forensic expert).

To his luck, the girl was still breathing. He heaved a sigh of relief as he processed the information. He looked at the girl who was lying in the ambulance. She had worn ragged and dirty clothes. There were dirt marks all over her body. Her hairs were unkempt. Yet she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. He could feel his heart beating abnormally. He clutched his chest and moved out of there.


***(@)***


After 3 days-Location ETF

Everyone was doing their paperwork when Arjun got a call. His eyes lit up as he spoke to the other person on the line. He cut the call and turned towards his team.


"Doctor called. That girl finally gained consciousness"


That was indeed good news for ETF. For 3 days they were trying to know who the girl was. There were no missing complaints, no relatives came forward and none of the gang members knew who she was how she reached there. Since she was unconscious, they couldn't get any information from her.

As they reached the hospital, they were welcomed by loud scream and sound of breaking things. They ran towards the sources and found that the girl was breaking things while the guards were trying to contain her. She was hysteric and was not letting anyone touch her. Suddenly she saw ETF standing near the door. Next thing everyone saw was her running away and hiding behind Arjun's back, clutching his shirt.

Arjun was bewildered, so was others. They could hear the girl pleading to Arjun.


"Don't let them take me away, please."


He felt his heart beats rise again. He controlled his emotions and tried to loosen her grip but to no avail. He looked at Sameer. Sameer shrugged in response and chuckled lightly. Arjun threw daggers at his direction and then looked towards the girl. In hospital dress she looked beautiful than before. But her baby brown eyes held pain and fear.


"No one is going to take you away. Relax"


The girl seemed to process his words. She looked at him widening her eyes and asked in a childish voice.


"Promise?"


"Promise"


The girl smiled and dimples came into display. He blinked his eyes at this.


"I know you, I know you..."


He looked at the girl who was jumping up and down saying this. He held her hand to stop her.


"Oh really, then tell me who am I"


A shy smile appeared in her lips.


"You are my Arjun"


He never expected that answer. He started chocking. Others were also shocked; the girl looked at everyone and then again looked back at Arjun.


"But I don't think that you are him. You can't be him! How can you be him?"


Shree who was curious listening to all these couldn't help but ask;


"How can you be sure that our Arjun sir is not your Arjun?"


He regretted asking it as in the next moment his team mates glared at him. The girl walked towards him.


"You want to know a secret?"


Shree nodded.


"Shh... Don't tell anyone ok?"


He nodded.


"My Arjun is a ghost"


And the girl started giggling like a child. Everyone was shocked. Shree was the first one to come out of the shock. He felt bad for her.


"So... your Arjun, is he dead?"


"No, idiot. He is not dead. He is a ghost"


With that she started clapping her hands and jumping up and down like a kid. Everyone looked at the doctor. Doctor gestured them to meet in his cabin.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index
Chapter 1: Above




Edited by rosamale - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for dedicating it to me didu
it was indeed mindblowing
loved it to the core
it was just thrilling
does ariya knew eachother before??????????
does riya lost her memory?????
she is riya na????
now what will happen????????
eagerly waiting to read more
please do continue
nd thanks for the pm in advance
loved the concept so much didu
par nxt updt jaldi dijiyeh
once again thanks for dedicating it to me didu
Edited by jeharshu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Owesome. ...

Kahi vo ladki hamari riya to nahi he. .?

Lagta he Uski yaddas chali gai he...tabhi to vo bacho wali harkte karti he...

Firse ariya story start hone wali he...he na...

Par Uski esi halat huyi kese...Vo kon he..?

Bhot sare question he. .
Answer dene ke liye to tumhe next part dena padegana. ..

So jaldi dena...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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one more ariya story
thanks dear for wonderful concept
ab pls jaldi se next part update kar do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m angry with u...
So no comments...
Ek to pm nahi diya...
Doosra tumne the one i love ff update ni kiya...
Its my favourite story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start update soon and
u r other story also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting concept
awe arjun feel something for the girl they found in cargo 😉
OMG she know arjun 😲
loll she said arjun is ghost 🤣
poor arjun 🤣
I think she is riya
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg it was fav but feeling bad for our riya ok just cnto soon
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Hi Dearies,
Here i am with the second chapter. Please let me know if you like it

And pls dont send buddy request to this account. just drop me a PM saying that you want me to include your name in my PM list and i will do that.


Chapter 2



Arjun drove the SUV trough the busy roads. He looked towards the front passenger seat and saw the girl dozing off. She had kept her legs on the seat and her knees were drawn close to her chest. He felt warmth fill his heart at this sight. He tucked a hair strand behind her ear. He recalled what doctor had told about her condition a week ago.


"Officers, I believe she will of no use to you. I am sorry to say this, but she is mentally unstable. She just know that her name is Riya. She lives in an imaginary world where she is in love with a ghost names Arjun. I know, it's really insane. But this is common for mentally unstable people. Since you guys couldn't locate her relatives, I am referring her to a mental hospital nearby. I am very sorry that I couldn't be of any help to you officers."


Arjun was broken out of his reverie by a car horn. He straightened himself and drove towards his destination.

Miles away, Sakshi sat in her apartment's balcony overlooking the lake. Tears flew from her eyes continuously as she remembered whatever happened one hour before.

Flashback starts


On Arjun's insistence, ETF went to hospital to see Riya taken away to the mental hospital. Riya, unaware of the developments was playing with a toy gifted to her by one of the kids in the hospital. She had taken a shower and was dresses in a new frock gifted by the doctor. She saw Arjun and ran towards him.


"Hey Arjun 2"


"Hi Riya"


"You know Arjun2, doctor uncle told me that they are taking me to my Arjun"


He felt a pang in his heart realizing the lies doctor had told her.


"Arjun 2, Arjun 2, are you going to take me to my Arjun?"


She asked feeling hopeful. Suddenly she saw the mental hospital attendants and burse. Even in her mental state it was not difficult to guess that she was being lied to. She looked at Arjun with fear and tears brimming in her eyes. She hid behind him again and pleaded him.


"Don't let them take me away. They are bad people. They won't let me meet my Arjun"


Sakshi was furious to see all these interactions. She had started loving Arjun the moment she saw him. She was not ready to see him close to any other girl. So she went towards them and pulled Riya away.

The attendants came and started pulling Riya, she was crying and trying to go towards Arjun. Everyone except Sakshi had tears in their eyes seeing this. Arjun's condition was worst. He could feel in his guts that her tears and screams were going to haunt him for a long time.

After one week

True to his thoughts, he was not able to sleep for one week. He used to jerk open his eyes from the sleep seeing her in his dreams.

In office also he spent restless days. Not able to withstand the torture anymore, he decided to check upon Riya. When he informed this to his teammates everyone was against it. Sakshi was livid, Arjun couldn't stop lashing out at them.


"You guys can't stop me. I have to go and see her. It's easy for you people to tell me to forget her and not see her again. But it's not your sleep which is being haunted by her screams and pleadings, it's mine. Its torturing me every moment, I am going to see her. That's it."


With that he had stormed out of the office and gotten into SUV. Sameer and other took the other SUV and followed him.

The doctor in the mental hospital was shocked seeing Arjun Suryakanth Rawte there. Reluctantly he led him to where Riya was being kept.

Arjun's blood boiled seeing the condition in which she was under. She was being kept in a shabby room. Her legs and hands were tied to the legs of the cot. Since the chains were really short, Riya was sleeping in the cold floor. There were dried tear marks in her cheeks. Arjun's feet moved on its own accord and reached Riya, he knelt down beside her and scooped he in his embrace. He was not able to lift her up because of the shackles. His one look at the ward boy and ward boy removed the shackles hurriedly. Arjun lifted her up and made her lay down on the bed. He called her softly.


"Riya..."


She opened her eyes slowly. She gave a tiny smile.


"Arjun 2, you came!"


He nodded smiling lightly.


"I told you, they won't let me meet my Arjun. Will you please take me away?"


Tears flew from his eyes at this. Wiping his tears he gathered her in his arms and walked towards his SUV. Sakshi stopped him.


"What the hell do you think you are doing Arjun? Why are you taking this trouble on your head? We will admit her in some reputed mental hospital. You don't have to take care of her."


"What I am going to do in my life is none of your concern Ms. Sakshi Anand. You don't know me very well. SO don't try to interfere in my life. And about Riya, she is not born as mentally unstable. Situations made her like this, situations about which we have no idea. She doesn't need mental hospital. All she need is someone's love and care. It seems like I am the only person she trusts, so I will make sure that she comes back to her life. Now, move out of my way"


With that he had walked away to his SUV


Flashback stops.

Sakshi was jerked away from her thoughts by the sound of bell from the nearby temple. She wiped her tears and walked back to the apartment.

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