arakshi ss; meant to be together

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys i am priyal...i was a reader till now...and from now it is upon u guys whether to keep me just as a reader or promote me to a writer...This my first story... pls read it and comment about it all the comments are welcome(good, bad ,worst)...and pls tell me should i continue it or not...need ur support guys.. 😃


p pls forgive me for my spelling mistakes and grammatically mistakes..

In this story etf team has just fulfilled their mission of killing sikander. Sakshi is at her home after crying and moaning for two days she is now sitting on the balcany and updatading abt her life story to her only friend that friend is none other than her diary and yes etf team knows sakshi past...

(Sakshi is now writing all the below things in her diary)
Finally the revenge is completed. Finally my mission is completed. Finally sikandar is no more.
Finally I gave justice to my family my baba...but now what will everything will be OK now.NO my family will never be with me again...no one will be at home to welcome me when I comr back home after work,no one will be there to tease me and irritate me whole day,there will be no hand to tie rakhi on,no one to protect me,no one to pamper me,no one to fulfill my wishes, no one to guide me when I don't know what to do,no one to help me rise when I fall,no one to take care when I am not well,no one to worry abt me whole day,no one to check whether I ate my meals properly and that to healthy foods not junk...even though I have win this mission and gave justice to my family but there is no one in this family with me to celebrate it...there is one person for me my baba the only reason for me to live probably...but what about Arjun does he have any reason to live any hopes to live...people say one person can live without water and food for some days but without hope they can not live a single moment...I know arjun will never suicide as it is against his morals...but he will not also alive.He will be just a be breathing... After killing that b*****d when he screamed roshin's name all the love for her and pain from her leaving him alone was visible in his eyes and that broke my last hope...hope of receiving love from him... I know it is quite stupid hope and quite impossible one. I tried convincing my heart but it didn't listen to me...but now by breaking itlself once again it may have got a lesson...why god why you didn't show little mercy to me...now I am broken beyond repair, I can't hurt myself more I don't have strength to deal with such feelings it will be better for me to shift from here anyway my mission is over...
Arjun p.o.v
(Arjun was at beach...he stayed two days at home but he felt suffocated there)
Finally my mission is completed. Finally I have killed that b*****d... All thanks to my team, Sakshi and Sam...yes Sam...sikandar was the reason I lost my roshni and my best friend Sam but he is also the reason I got my best friend back. When Sam came to know sikandar is for real he came to me and apologies me for not believing me. I told Sam to not tell anyone that we are together as I don't want to harm his life...he somehow agreed with my decision. After knowing my best friend is with me in this mission and I am not alone I got a new strength... But actually I was never alone in my mission miss publish was always there with me she always believed me...when she told about her past to whole team we were shocked...she has gone through a lot even more than me... We were both hurt but we dealed with it differently. She is a very strong girl. Yesterday night Sam was with me at my house he never left me alone after the mission was over he mixed sleeping pills in water and gave me I didn't knew it then. Because of sleeping pills I slept last night and roshni came in my dream she told me that it was time for her to leave and told me to be happy and move on...I told about my dream to sam I told him how can I be happy without her, how can she leave me all alone we had seen so many dreams together and have to fulfill it and top of that how can she tell me to move on...I can't stay happy without her, I can't move on with Sakshi I love roshni very much. Then Sam asked me if roshni had told me to move on with Sakshi and my ans was no...even I was surprise that why I told sakshi's name. Sam told me roshni was right I should move on and made me realize that I am in love with Sakshi.I told him it is not possible but he didn't hear me he told me to not give roshni place to anyone just make some place for Sakshi...he told me Sakshi loves me a lot and it is time for me to loveher back...And even I think so he is right...


Pls do comment...and let me know how was it..I know nothing new is there in this story but if you people like it I will try to add something new in this story...pls do comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
but do give it some name and if ur sending pm then include me too 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice start
but do give it some name and if ur sending pm then include me too 😊



Thanks shefali...
Will give some nice name soon..
And i will try giving pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super awsomee start!!!! Welcome to writing world!!! The start is perfect!!! Loved it!! How you show both of them thought!!! Waiting for the real story start!!! Do con.soon!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Super awsomee start!!!! Welcome to writing world!!! The start is perfect!!! Loved it!! How you show both of them thought!!! Waiting for the real story start!!! Do con.soon!!!!



Thank you very much for your support Arakshiya_58 😊
It means a lot to me...
And yes will continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2
Arjun p.o.v
Arjun talking to himself in the beach (continuation of last part)
Yes...I do love her,I don't know from when...but I have been fallen for her deeply. I should go and confess to her. I know even she loves me,I have seen in her eyes many times and way she take care of me proves it. I should go and tell her about my feelings now yes I should not waste further time... But first I need to freshen up...yes...wait a minute when did I started to talk with myself like her...seems like she has already started to make me crazy like her...Arjun chuckles at his own thoughts and leaves to his house. At his house he searches for Sam but he is no where in the house he thinks he may have left for the office may be a case have been arrived...he wanted to thank he for making him realize his love and also tell him about his decision to confess his love...but since he has left he decide that he and Sakshi will together say this news to the etf team his only family left...he quickly freshened up...and went to his closet to wear something nice...he chose his red shirt but then he didn't think it suited him well so he changed to yellow shirt but then he thought the colour is quite bright so opted for blue that colour look too dull to him he then tried orange, drak green, light green, pink, peach and may be possible all the color's shirt he had he didn't realize when he started to behave like a teenager... Finally he got irritated...he looked at the pile of shirts when his gaze went to the white shirt which he liked he quickly wore it with a pair of blue denim pants and then set his hair he finally was ready and decide to leave his house, he locked his house. He settled in his car and started driving to his destination. On the way he saw a flower shop which reminded him about the flower vase incident with her...he smiled at the memory and buyed some violet orkets her favorite flowers. Finally after passing through long Mumbai's traffic he reached his destination her house.he parked his car took the flowers with him and started walking to her house and suddenly he felt nervous and many thoughts started to run in his mind, what if she didn't love him just thought of him as a good friend, what if, if after this situation thinks got awkward between then, is it too fast for her does she needs some time...till the time he reached to her doorsteps he almost decided to change his decision. But then he closed his eyes and there came a picture of smiling Sakshi in which all her love for him was visible in her eyes, her eyes which always spoke volumes. This made all his doubt rest. He smiled and opened his eyes and pressed the doorbell. He waited for 5 mins but no response came, he pressed it again but no response came. He was confused where she must have been...then thought my be she was sleeping he was abt to press it again when his mobile phone ringed. He looked at the caller I'd and a smile spread his face it was Sam he picked the call but as soon as he heared what Sam said the smile faded away from his face and flowers fell on the floor he couldn't believe what he heared on the other side of the call Sam was worried for arjun he knew arjun will be hurt by these news bit he need to know...Sam after not getting any response from arjun asked him arjun...arjun are u there to which arjun only replied yes.Sam told arjun to come to etf office now they will find solution abt the problem. Arjun agreed and headed to etf office. Arjun was shocked beyond words. He was hurt, angry, confused,sad... He was not able to process this situation that's why he just followed Sam instruction.
Sakshi's p.o.v
(She is in the flight right now going to manali)
Goodbye Mumbai.the city which gives me everything but also took away most of the things. This city has seen all her good days and worst days of her. This is a city which have fulfilled her many dreams but also gave her some very painful nightmares now she is leaving this city forever... And Aldo leaving behind the only family she had and also the main part of her, her heart... She don't know how she gone be live now without his heart but she has to do this...

Pls do comment
And thnxx for the support shefali and arakshiya_58
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear!!! Once again an awsomee work!!!!👏👏👏 loved it!!! I was so happy reading Arjun's p.o.v... You are showing its really good!!! How he felt for her and thoughts about her...just superrbbb!!! Awww...finally he is ready for confession... And the scene at his home...OMG!!! Behavior like teenager+!😆😆😆 that too by arjun rawte!!! Hota hai pyaar me!!😉😉 but you ruined our happiness and Arjuna's happiness too!!! Sakshi is going manali!! hope he reach to her soon!!! And we get arakshi together!!!! Do con.soon!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

awesome story.plz continue



Thanks a lot rajeeviansonai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc6633">Hey dear!!! Once again an awsomee work!!!!👏👏👏loved it!!! I was so happy reading Arjun's p.o.v... You are showing its really good!!! How he felt for her and thoughts about her...just superrbbb!!! Awww...finally he is ready for confession... And the scene at his home...OMG!!! Behavior like teenager+!😆😆😆that too by arjun rawte!!! Hota hai pyaar me!!😉😉but you ruined our happiness and Arjuna's happiness too!!! Sakshi is going manali!!hope he reach to her soon!!! And we get arakshi together!!!! Do con.soon!!!!</font>



Glad that you loved it...
Arjun finally realized his love for Sakshi...and ha crazy sakahi KO handle karnewala thora to crazy hona chaiye na...and story is always incomplete without some twist 😉 you have to wait for some more time to arakshi to be together...tthinking to add some drama...and once again thanks for your support 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyal.



Glad that you loved it...
Arjun finally realized his love for Sakshi...and ha crazy sakahi KO handle karnewala thora to crazy hona chaiye na...and story is always incomplete without some twist 😉 you have to wait for some more time to arakshi to be together...tthinking to add some drama...and once again thanks for your support 😊

Stop...thanking dear!! Here in our land... Thanks are not allow!!!😉 and I know they will be together when time comes!!! Add ur twist m having no problem!!!!😛😛

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