ARIYA OS :: INTEZAAR - Page 5

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome OS
wow ariya was married 🥳
arjun had to go delhi for meeting
ariya were missing each other so much
loll karan play prank on arjun 🤣
ariya moment was lovely ❤️

Originally posted by: shaheen82

awesome os 😊
i just loved ariya conversation 😳
they lied to their family so they can spend time together 😉
nd finally the kiss 😳
overall beautiful os
nd thanx for the pm... 😊

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
Continue soon. Thank for pm

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome. lovely. Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: Mariaakanksha

Hey Harshu.. awesome story.. kaani nuvvu 2 places lo Sameer and Viren ani type chesavu.. where as it should be karan.. check and edit it.. and inko place lo Riya unde daggara naina ani type chesav.. just edit it dear.. and it will be perfect.. I mean the sentence where u were describing Riya's hair.. 😊..

Originally posted by: skrafty

Lovely OS

Originally posted by: hellohello_29

👍🏼

Originally posted by: cutenamu

Aawwwiieee...it was a lovelyy os didu.,,,,everything was potrayed soo beautifully...u did justice with the characters...loved karan's prank...loved the bhai-bhabhi-devar moment...loved ariya...thanks for pm

Originally posted by: utsha

Lovely OS dear. Beautiful writing. Complete in all senses. Great bonding b/w the members of the family is something to be cherished. The emotions were perfectly portrayed.

Waiting for some more from u. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: KaViannn

oh em geee!!! this was so so so sweet! I loved it to the bits... thanks for the pm.