ARAKSHI.A DIFFERENCE.part13 PG 13 updated - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
awesome update
love sakshi's confession😃
ani n abhi both are fine
who leak the information ???😲😕
lets see age kya hota hai
loved it
cont soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hi Vikas this is Nethra. I m a die hard fan of Arakshi.

Interesting story hain yaar. Sorry maine aaj hi padna shuru kiya

Sakshi wapas aanewaali hain? 😃 Aisa kya huwa tha ki Sakshi resign karke chali gayi thi aur sab pareshan kyu hain uske wapas aane se?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Part 2

Ayesha, Chotu, Shree, Sameer sab bhaage chale aaye Sakshi se milne?😆😆😆 Kyu na aaye itne gehri dost jo he sab ke sab

Sakshi has a baby?😲😲😲 OMG aur vo kuch na kuch toh chupaarahi hain

Roshni in wheel chair? 😲😲😲

Yaar ye ho kya raha hain?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Part 3

Sakshi Ani ke papa ke baarein kuch nahi batana chahti. She is hiding something very big. Ayesha ne bhi haar maanliya

Chotu aur Shree ko toh sirf biriyani ki chinta hain😆😆😆 Ani toh US time itne acche se follow karta hain. Sab ke saath itne acche se gul milgaya Ani😃

Arjun wanted to hold Ani in his arms😊 How cute. Sakshi was happy for a reason seeing them both together😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
hello vikas

super awesome story
read all d 10 parts in just one go
brilliant writing
in starting i thought this story is all about only sakshi's love and sacrifies. but twists and turns are mind blowing
their is some little mistakes in story but jo tumne twist and turns dale hai mistakes are ignorable...kaun dhayan deta hai 😉😉😉super awesome man.
aisha to antaryami lgti hai sakshi k bina btaye hi use pta chal gya bachcha arjun ka hai. sakshi bachche ko arjun se dur rakhna chahti hai, pr jb arjun samne hai to bat kbhi na kbhi to khulni hi thi. so khul gyi. thanks to doctor and sakshi's phone. liked arkashi confrontation.
Liked the part k arjun ne pehle envelop nhi open kia...sakshi k saamne open krne ki baat kahi...aur sakshi ko sach bolna pada...
your writing style is super good...sidhi baat no bakwas...arjun ko pta chala to usne direct roshni ko bataya...tumne roshni ko btane wala portion naa kich kr bada achcha kia...and glad k tumne roshni ko villian nhi dikhaya...roshni ne samjhdaro ki tarah behave kia...
arjun ka faisla k wo sakshi ka sath dega...is justified... sakshi ne itna saha hai...ab arjun ki bari hai sakshi ka sath dene ki...and arjun ne jo apne dad ko jawab dia hai...wo to super good tha...jab arjun hi kahega k bachcha sakshi k pass rehna chahiye to court ya Mr. Senior rawte bhi kuch nhi kr skte...
now you two bombs and story ka genre change kr dia tumne 😛 but jo bhi tha mazaa aa gya i didnot expected this...k bacche ek nhi do hai...and wo sakshi ko goli lagne wala part...mujhe lga tha tumne zyda hi strong kr dia sakshi ko...but now its justified...drugs k side effect ki wajeh se baccho me faster healing hai...tabhi jab sakshi pregnent thi to bachche aur sakshi dono hi bach gye 👏
ye wala twist mujhe sabse zyda mazedar k sath sath khatarnak bhi lga
now the new twist baccho ki files chori ho gyi hospital se 😲😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
what vare mistake buddy.pls share.thanks for review
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Mr.PsychoTech

what vare mistake buddy.pls share.thanks for review


don't worry they can be ignoreable...arre DS me itne loop holes hote hai...and by the way story is super cool...and I edited my comment...now comment on all the 10 parts...pehle mobile se type kia to pura comment nhi aaya...isliye ab pc se pura comment dala hai

update update update update update

i want update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu



don't worry they can be ignoreable...arre DS me itne loop holes hote hai...and by the way story is super cool...and I edited my comment...now comment on all the 10 parts...pehle mobile se type kia to pura comment nhi aaya...isliye ab pc se pura comment dala hai

update update update update update

i want update


buddy I didn't feel bad.
I infact felt very happy that you pointed some mistake.
it will help me so I won't repeat it again.

plz tell buddy.it will help for improvement in me.

I came back here to learn .it is arakshi who taught me how to write.

I yet remember esha advices to me to write more dialogue s I still follow it and it helped me.
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
buddy yesterday is supposed to be update day buddy.
but my system broke and ws busy have lot of work.
will update tomorrow.

if everything good update will come every third day or early .if I feel like every reader read.
I mean known to me 6 or 8 readers.
when I know their presence I will progress.

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
PART 11

Scene starts with Sakshi sleeping with both her kids beside her and Arjun looking at the trio .Roshini came there at same time.Arjun gets distracted and goes towards Roshini.

Roshini "Arjun kyaa huan tum idhar kyaa kar rahen hon"

Arjun "Kuch nahen bass bacchin ko dekh rahan thaa?"

Roshini "Arjun tum mujhsey sach nahen chupasaktey hon.Bolon kyaa huan .Yeh math kehnaa kee tumm bass dekh rahen hon."

Arjun " Kyaa Roshini tum bhee.Main sach kehrahan hun naa"

Roshini "Arjun tumhaarey aakhein kuch aur kehrahen hain,Mujhye bahuth acchey yaad hain jabh tumney Ani ko haath mey liyaa thaa jabh tumhey pathaa tha ke Ani tumhaara beta hain.Abh wo khushi nahen hain tumhaarein aakhon mein.Mujhye darr dikhrahan hain ,Kyaa huan?"

Arjun was silent and he know he can hide anything from Roshini.

Arjun "Roshini koi baath nahen.Bass doo din mey kyaa kyaa badala soch rahan hun."

Roshini "Arjun jho bhee hotha hain acchein key liyen hotha hain ."

Arjun nodding his head agreeing with it.

Arjun "Main office jaakey aatha hun .Main ney kissey ko bathaaya bhee nahen kee aaj leave ley rahan hun."

Arjun "Sam aaya thaa?"

R "Han subaha aaya thaa .Mainey bola Sakshi key saath bahaar gayen hain."

Arjun leaves from there first time wondering how much safe is this place for his kids.In whole quarters there are thousands of police officers living.His ETF team and the best cops of the Mumbai Police Department are all here but will they be able to protect two kids from what not.

Arjun immediately called Ayesha.

Ayesha "Sir aap kahan gayee they .Aap subaha sey gaayab hain aur Sakshi bhee kyaa huan?"

Arjun "Tumhey Sakshi ney ABhi key baarey mey bataaya thaa."

Ayesha "Han sir jyaada nahen bass.Kyaa huan ussey who theek tho hain naa."

Arjun "Abhi aaj hee discharge huan hain..Ghar par hain Sakshi key saath donon.

Ayesha "Sir main abhee aathee hun main bhee Sakshi key saath jaaney waaleee thee but aap ney ussey achaanak ley gayen."

Arjun "Ayesha .Plz wait mujhye tumsey kuch kaam hain ."

Ayesha "Bathaayiyen sir.Kyaa huan."

Arjun "Tum Sam,Shree ,chotu our Liza ko lekar hummarey puraaney office aana hain."

Ayesha "Sab theek hain naa?"

Arjun "Ayesha main sach bathaney waala hun.They deserve to know the truth."

Ayesha "Sir bakee log?"

Arjun "Ayesha pehley tum log aon."

It took another 20 minutes they all came there as Ayesha ssembled them in quick time.

Sam "Arjun tumney yahan kyon bulaaya.Arjun kya baath hain itney confidential kyaa hain."

Arjun "Sam bathaarahan hun."

Arjun "Main ney kabhee bathaaya nahen but you people are closest to me than anyone.Tum logon ney hummesha meey saath diyya .Aaj main jho bhe hon tho aap logon key wajaha sey."

Arjun "You people have always been a family to me."

Shree "Sir yeh sabh baathein abh kyon.Kyaa huna?"

Arjun "Sakshi merey bachon kee maa hain."

All are confused except for Ayesha.

Arjun "Ani our Abhi merey bachein hain.Merey aur Sakshi key."

Sam was out of it faster and Shree and chotu took longest time to come out of the shock.

Ayesha then explained them everything on what happened and what Sakshi was hiding with them.

Shree and Chotu were in mixd feeling whether to be angry on Arjun or to think this way that it was not his fault.

Arjun "Main aap logon ko ek baath bathaan chaahtha hun jho abh tak Sakshi ko bhee nahen patha hain."

Arjun "Abhi aur Ani donon .They both are in danger."

Ayesha "Sir aap kyaa kehrahen hon.Kyaa huan?"

Arjun "Ayesha aaj mainey unkey doctor sey baath kee hain."

Arjun "Donon ordinary nahen hain donon embreyoo stage mey hee drugs effect honey sey it effected them genetically."

Arjun "They are immune to all diseases and have a faster healing rate .Half time."

Arjun explains to them everything doctor told about their condition..

Shree "Sir yeh tho khush khaba hain naa."

Arjun "Shree baath wahen nahen rukthee hain Shree.Abh poorey duniyan issey key liyen khoj rahen hain."

Arjun "Immunity from all diseases and faster healing."

Arjun " Abh bachon ek experiment key cheez banengey."

Realization struck everyone on it.

Arjun "Bachein hain donon .Main undonon ko khoona nahn chaahtha hun."

Sam "Arjun main ministry sey baath karoonga .We will do something.."

Arjun "No Sam .Ministry bhee inkey peechey hee lagegee.Shaayad who hee unlogon kaa madad karey.Sam I don't trust any one on this."

Arjun "Baath hummary nahen hain Sam baath bachon kee hain.Thye don't deserve al this.Lab key chuhon keyt tarah."

Sam "Arjun tum bass jyaada soch rahen hon."

Arjun "Sam main sahen soch rahan hun yeh shaayad unkey liyen gift hain but ussey duniyan unkaa shaap bana sakthee hain."

Arjun "Sam Aaaj yahan Acp Arjun nahen ek baap khada hain .Kyaa main um logon par vishwaas kar saktha hun."

Shree "Sir hum aapkey saath hain .Hummesha rahengey.Aap bathyiyen kyaa karna hain."

Sam "Arjun " he just nods his head.

Chotu was next to agree and he never looked for Ayesha's decision he trusted it and Liza.

Arjun "Yeh merea personal mission hoga.Target patha nahen kitney yeh bhee patha nahen."

Arjun "This is going to be a never ending war."

Everyone were ready to go for it.They were the cops who went on mission to protect everyone .Fought numerous battles on duty.

Now they are taking part in a battle for themselves their friend and family it is their battle now.

Arjun "Yeh baath Sakshi ko math bathaana.She can't survive this."Thooth jaayegee."

Everyone agreed for it.

Arjun "Sam abh tak information key hisaab.Kissey ney report churaaya hain bachon ka health status ka."

Arjun "Information is leaked."

Sam "Fir hummey pehley wahee sey suru karnee hain.Humey yeh kaam officially nahen unofficially karna hain.So hum sabh wahan nahen jaa saktey."

Sam "Main Vishal,aor bakee logon ko bathadoonga."

Arjun was silent but wan't to leave it on Sam as he recruited the team .

Arjun get a call from Roshini.

R "Arjun kahan hon tum?"

Arjun "Kyaa huan?"

R "DAD Sakshi sey milney gayen hain."

Arjun "Whaty?Tum kyaa karr ahen thee mainey bola naa uss insaan ko merey bachon sey door rakhney."

Arjun "Main abhee aa rahan hun.Tum bhee wahen rahon."

Arjun very angry with the news.

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