Arakshi TS - Stay - Part 2/2 Pg 1

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sairam175

@sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome part

Loved it

Amazing

Thanks for pm

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

so finally ''if not forever stay with me the longest time you can''...

the emotions just transcended the balustrades of the balcony and hit the four chambered organ with all their potency.the music at the background added the required hue that the sun setting at the horizon at sometimes failed to paint.I loved the description of setting sun and the changing coloring patterns than what transpired between the couple.😃😃

thanks for the pm and keep writing such shots if you stumble upon some ideas which can be knit into a splendid story...😊😊

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Wonderful Sparks!

loved this cute little story..of emotions...

I love this song...and I love papon...

of course not more than HIM...

*winks*

keep writing

love
birdie

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome update..

So beautiful so pure that it touched the very core of my heart.

really an unique piece of work it is.

I loved it..

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

All right so I am unressing it here 😃

Sigh, this was yet again, a beautiful two shot. Man Ritu tor dimaag e ki chole ak baar amake bol toh!

I loved the way how Arjun had an almost instant parallel comparison amidst the young Sakshi and the Sakshi now.

Everything makes a difference.

The fact that one is together at the lowest point of time, or just when someone's need is required - that explains all.

From the surface Arjun would indeed be one of the last people to actually lend and ear and be a silent wonderful companion yet Sakshi wished to spend her time with him - the speaks volume hai na?

And I loved Arjun's point of view, especially the few moments when he realised that he had been falling hard and fast for the woman in front of him 😳

Ah... you definitely played so well with the lines of destiny on our palms. Thanks to that I can barely see my palm properly ... *hehe*

And the end *sigh* you nailed it 😉

Daal diya na! Meri pyaari si jaan lene waali machine!

You had to add a song from HAK 😲

I half thudded while reading the update! Emnito it's your update and you add that with tumhara Arijit ka gaana 😉 😉 😉

Ritzy... you are alive na? 😆

Haha, jokes apart. This was truly a beautiful two shot from you 😳

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

story was as fab as every other story u have written and the song i mean the lines were so nicely placed 😊
but what i have to say is that after reading ur stories the world actually looks so beautiful which actually is not but u make even a underconstruction building so beautiful the mumbai traffic which is so horrible with all horns and all that pollution even that sounds a beauty when u write
so in short u have made the world a beautiful place
thanks for pm