Arakshi TS - Stay - Part 2/2 Pg 1

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sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome part

Starts with emotions

Con soon

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

bas laal ishq daal do ya phir humari adhoori kahani aur uske baad barish main bhigado aur woh waala gaana dal do bas...

uske baad maar hi daalo humein!

ab ke liye res, unres karungi - bohot hi jald... ;)

with lots of love,

ur innocent sista :*

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Asyalover
nicely explained their emotion..cont soon

Thank u!😃

Originally posted by: Devangana
Very well written.. please update part 2 soon.

Thank u!😃

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Super awsome start...
loved it very much...
after so long read ur update tht too on special day...
reallly happyh...
please con.sooonnn...

Thanks soo much Gausii.. good to hear from u after so long😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u
awesome update.

Thank u!😃

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
that was a pure bliss reading the lines.the words laced with insecurities,pain and emotions have struck the chord of heart.the setting is just perfect for spectacular city and night view.
Anticipations has been increased to manifolds for the next part.
In precise its incredibly awesome.
thanks for the pm and do continue soon.:)

Eesh.. how do you make me feel good about my writing?😳😳

Thanks soo much! It really means a lot.. hope u like the next part!

Originally posted by: shurtiekta
awsm ts
feeling described r so natural luvd it
thnx fr pm
update nxt soon.

Thank u!😃

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu
mee too obssed with hamari adhuri kahani music
specially the title track
coming to the ts
nice starting
description of feeling is too good
description of scene makes it more realistic
sakshi is divorcee and arjun is not believing in love due to his parents divorce
but when both together something is change in feelings
I don't know but i feel sakshi k past me se kuch cheeze abhi bhi chupi huyi hai
jo wo ya to bta nhi rhi...ya bta skti nhi hai
cont soon

Thanks so much.. 😳

Nah.. simple sa TS hai.. so there's not much about her past.😊

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome start
Loved it
Loved the way you depicted each and every emotion
Just amazing
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Thanks so much Shravani!! Means a lot😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Oh that was just soo... WOW

The way you write their emotions, their misery, their helplessness, their LOVE, and every thing they've gone through put life in this beautiful price of fiction

It was awesome ritu
Brilliant
Totally love it
Thanks for pm
Update soon 😊

Aww.. thanks sooo much Areesha🤗

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow lovely start
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon

THanks a lot😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Arjun and sakshi both having painful past
both want to love each other
both r confused on thr heart desire
both want to complete each other
make other happy
u write is so well
continue soon

Thank u soo much ..hope u like the next part😳

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
Awesome.. wow its was superbbb..
Loved it to bits...
Arjun and sakshi's emotions were amazingly explained..
Honestly I loved the title too... the banner ... everything
Plz plz update soon

Thnx for pm

Thanks sooo much.. it means a lot😳

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
this must be the first of ur stories which says more abt emotions rather then nature 😊
but was very nice how u said sakshi's pain and how arjun understood her
thanks for pm

Hahaha.. wait till the next part.. it's packed with emotions😛

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi..
SUperb one..
Really loved it.
The emotions you brew is mind blowing.
Please con soonz..

Thanks soo much Eshuu🤗

Originally posted by: anu91
amazing one...
waiting for part 2

Thanks anuu😳

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Payal_156
I simply love d song..
hamari adhuri kahani...
Outstanding start di...
ur writing iss too beautiful...
awesome banner..
ty for d pm...
update soon

Payaluu.. good to see u here😳 Thanks so much!!🤗

Originally posted by: kunchu
Beautiful and touching as always
U keep it simple direct to heart

Thank you soo much KK🤗

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved It
Every emotion you explained so perfectly
Just Mindblowing
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much Nikii😳

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome part
Starts with emotions
Con soon

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: Armagadon
bas laal ishq daal do ya phir humari adhoori kahani aur uske baad barish main bhigado aur woh waala gaana dal do bas...

uske baad maar hi daalo humein!

ab ke liye res, unres karungi - bohot hi jald... ;)

with lots of love,

ur innocent sista :*

Bass oye.. maar daalegi kya?🤪

U mentioned the 3 most ultimate songs of his... THANK GOD u didnt mention the most ultimate song.. LOL. Waise humari adhuri kahani is booked for Web of Love😉

Of course.. i shall wait meri 'innocent' Strawberryyy😛 🤣

Loads of love❤️

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Shruti

@shurtiekta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

fab ending
luvd it
so emotional thnx fr pm...

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Febulesss part di!!!🤗
Reallly lovdd it very very much...
The way u blended their emotions And their understanding for each othrr is just fantAstic nd beautifulll...
Great work di!!
Keep writing more on our Arakshi...