Ariya ss please forgive me (part 9: pg 52 Dec-18 updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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good i read all the parts in one go.

as areesha said...this concept going on

but u r presentation is new and i think only one point is same...remaining not same.

wonderful presentation of emotions

continue...

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swethalovely

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 5:

All are confused about the revelation then arjun said Roshni ne aisa kyon kiya...

Mujhe nahi patha hai ki maine roshni se nahi balki riya se pyar kiya...

Oh god riya eh samaj rahi hogi aaplog khi tarah ki maine usey dhokha dedhiya..

Abhi: main kaise maanlu khi thum sach bolrahehooo...

Aur roshni ne eh sab kiya...

Jaha thak hum jaante tum donone milkar riyu ki dil thoda...kya sabood hai tumhare pass arjun bolona...

Arjun was shocked but he remembered something and said them and then showed them something now all became sure that arjun was not aware of roshni deed...( I will say later what he told)

Arjun connected the dots..now he remembered that y riya became angry on seing the locket design he thought it was of roshni but in actual is was of Riya..

she was reminded of past and she became angry...ohno riya is thinking me as a cheat i gave her so much pain unknowingly... No doubt all are mad at me for hurting a girl who loved me madly...

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swethalovely

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Posted: 10 years ago

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He immediately want to go near her and he wants to set everything alright...

Abhi wasi in a state where he cant understand what to do...he also love Riya more than his life...

He cant decide anything viren understood his situation but he himself cant say anything till now all are thinking roshni and arjun milker riya kho dhoka diya ...

but they now understood that he is innocent...no one can guess what he might be going through...

He thought he married his love..but he was framed as a cheater in infront of his love...

Viren glanced at arjun and understood that he is trying to digest the facts...

Sam too understood arjun state he just kept his hand on his shoulder and asked him to calm down and relax..

he tried to assure arjun that everything will be fine...he also noticed abhi who is very sad...

He felt bad for both as he also know that abhi loves Riya a lot ...Riya told him once about abhi...

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Meanwhile doc came out and said her condition is not stable and her condition needs to be stabilized and she need to open her eyes for her to get well...they shifted her to ICU...

All are shocked listening to that viren, abhi and arjun at a time said she has to be fine..

they look at each other and abhi took viren inside both pleaded her to get well soon and she need to be with them...

viren and abhi remembered the happy times with her and begged her to open her eyes for them at least..

Abhi thinks of their fun moments in college and at their outings with friends...

He and viren can't stop their tears flowing...viren hold her cheek and said riyu please riyu apni bhai kha baath manle ...

Jaldi ankhe khol riyu..apni bhai kho koun datega thune kaha riyu Thu kabhi mujhe chodke nahi jaovogi..

maa khi tarah mera kyal rakhogi...aghar ab thu mera baath nahi manogi tho dheklenaa.. Still they can't succeed in their trials...

Abhi in mind riyu I love u alot please open your eyes and god please save her if you want then take my life...

But please save my riyu I have accepted her rejection but can't accept her going her away from me..

both came out of ICU and others outside understood that she didn't open her eyes...

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swethalovely

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Now unable to take it anymore entered the ICU...

He was pained to see his love in such a situation... He went near her and caressed her face and tears from his eyes fall on her cheeks...

He wiped the tears and he placed a kiss on her forehead...

He placed his palm on her cheek and apologized her for his mistake because of which she was pained a lot...

He remembered her words when they used to talk to each other...I trust u arjun a lot in fact more than anyone and even myself...

I love you arjun ...and always will...bus us ghadi kha intazaar hai jab mein aapke saamne aavungi...

I m sorry Riya please forgive me I broke your trust now please wake up and listen to me...

I want to clear everything Riya I want to rectify my mistakes... I m even ready for any punishment except you going away from me...

I got u Riya after a long time and I can't loose you again... Please Riya please saying this he placed his hand on hers...

Seems like Riya heard his plead she moved her fingers when arjun looked at her she is trying to open her eyes...

Arjun ran outside like a maniac calling the doctor to check Riya as she is opening her eyes...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zubiya92
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shanafr
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Originally posted by: Cieli.Santi
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