LOVE WITH GHOST PART 5 UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys

I am writing this story based on ACP Sameer rathod

I hope u people will love it

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Part 1

Sam case solve hone ke bad office se ghar nikhalata hai.

Wo uska rojka rasta rahata hai.

But today something different happened.

Ek ladki ne sam ko smile di jab sam roj ki tarah bike se ghar nikal raha tha.

Sam surprise hua as he don't know who is that girl.

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Next day again that incident she gave to smile to sam. Sam also gave smile to that girl.

Ek hafte tk ye sab chalata raha.

Suddenly sam notice that she is not there.

Sam daily come to that place even some time he come early from office to see that she is there or not.

Sam beechen ho raha tha us ladki ko milane ke liye.

He is in love.

Use uski smile se pyar ho gaya tha.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start dear
do continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Arjun sam's best friend, see his friend in trauma.

Arjun,"Sameer kya hua kuch dino se dekh raha hu tumhe tum bahot silent ho gaye ho kya hua?

You can share with me.

Sameer,"kuch nahi arjun bas aisi hi wo... Masa ki yad aa rahi hai bas isliye."

Arjun,"k..."

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Arjun came from his secret mission.

He only know sam's silence but don't know his behavior in his absence.

But aisha notice that.

Her akadu boss, always barking on his team, never smile and firm.

Aisha's crush.

She notice from few days

Sam was never bark on his team.

Being cool, he gave small lecture on what is their wrong and how to do it in right way.

Not aisha all team was shock by his behavior.

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At that time

Chotu,"aisha sir thik toh hai na badle badle lag rahe he."

Shree,"mene itani badi galati ki aur wo gusssa bhi nahi huye."

Chotu,"kahi wo kisi ke pyar me toh nahi."

Aisha get upset by chotu's word.

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Aisha always notices Sameer.

Once she saw him smiling when he was reading his file.

Aisha,(in mind),"kahi jo chotu keh raha tha wo sach toh nahi. Sir me kitana badlav aa gaya hai???"

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Present

Aisha again notices Sameer. He was in trauma.

Aisha,"kahi us ladaki ne sir ka dil toh nahi tod diya."

Sam's again that behavior shocks his team.

Chotu,"ye sir ko kaise jhatake aa rahe hai shree us din tumane itani badi galati ki par wo itanasa lecture deke chale gaye aur aaj itanisi bhul kya kar di tumhara toh pura postmortem kar diya."

Shree,"ha yar sir ko kya ho raha hai."

Aisha feels sad for her love.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg love with ghost
interesting start
poor aisha
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

One day, Sameer was busy with files in his house, Sipping coffee.

Suddenly his phone rang. That was unknown no.

Sam,"itani rat ko kisane mujhe call kiya???"

Sam receives call.

From other side,

Girl,"hello"

Sam,"hello. Kon??"

Girl,"pehachana nahi mujhe?"

Sam,"ummm.. sry but aap kon bol rahi ho?"

Girl tells him that she is that one whom he gives smile and told about that place.

Big smile spread on sam's face.

Sam stands from his place and starts roaming here and there.

Talk with her about an hour.

He was very happy that he forgets to ask her how she gets his number.

That girl calls him next day to meet her that place.

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Next morning

His room spread with shirts.

Sam,"samaj nahi aa raha konasa shirt pehanu. Pehali kisi ladki se milane ja raha hu. Aur ab ye..."

Arjun enter in his rum.

Arjun,"ye... ye sab kya hai sam...???"

Sam,"vo arjun... arjun tuzase ek bat karani hai."

Arjun,"ha bolana."

Sam,"wo...wo..."

Arjun,"are aage bhi kuch bolenga..."

Sam,"wo me... Me ek ladki se pyar karata hu."

Arjun was shock.

Arjun,"what?? Kon hai nam kya hai uska...?"

Sam,"nam"

Sam,(in mind),"kitana bewkoof hai sam tu kal ek ghanta bat ki usase par nam bhi nahi pucha."

Sam,"nam nahi pata."

Arjun,"tu use pyar karata hai aur uska nam bhi nahi pata. Wow...! Now don't tell me that ki tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ke wo tumase pyar karati hai ya nahi."

Sam,"wo chodo aaj bulaya hai milane ke liye usane muje. Arjun tu chal na mere sath. Mujhe darr lag raha hai ladki ko milane ke liye. Wo bhi pahali bar."

Arjun laughs at him.

Sam,"has kya raha hai??"

Arjun,"hasu nahi to kya.. sam tu criminal ko pakadne ke liye unke adde tak jata hai. Tab tuze dar nahi lagata aur ek ladki jo phulo ki tarah najuk hoti hai jo teri jan nahi lengi tu usase dar raha hai. Phattu..."

Sam,"oye... me fattu nahi hu. Me toh bas nervous ho raha hu chalna plz plz ...

Arjun,"k...chal pehale ready ho ja."

Sam wears white shirt and blue jeans.

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Sam and arjun wait for her about an hour.

Arjun,"kab aayengi wo ladki???"

Sam tried her no. but no use it was switch off.

After long time they went from there.

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That night,

Sam's phone ring

He smiles

Sam,"kaha thi tum maine kitane call kiye tumhe par tumhane uthaya nahi."

Girl,"tum akele kyu nahi aaye apane dost ko kyu laye."

Sam,"bas aisehi wo mere sath tha isliye..."

Girl,"nahi agali bar aana ho to akeli hi ana dost ko mat lana. Mujhe tumase akele me bat karani hai."

Sam,"k... fine me akela aaunga happy.."

Girl,"hmmm..."

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

One month completed for their friendship.

Sam can't live without her. Before going to office and after coming from office daily he meets her.

Arjun,"so kaha tak chali bat."

Sam,"umm... Pata nahi. Don't know jo me usake liye feel karata hu wo mere liye karati he ki nahi?"

Arjun," wa... Wa... Mere dost teri toh jayjaykar karni chahiye. Tu roj usase milane jata hai aur tuze ye bhi nhi pata. Pata nahi ki batana nahi chahata. Aur teri pasand se kab milwa raha hai.

Ha... ab toh teri zindagi me ek ladki bhi aa gayi ab dost ka kya kam."

Sam,"oye... emotional attyachar mat kar. Tu mera best friend tha, hai aur hamesha rahenga. Me kal hi tuze usase milawata hu."

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NEXT DAY

Sam,"are ek problem hai. Tuze pata hai tu pichali tu mere sath tha isliye wo hume milane nahi aaya is bar tum chupakese use dekh lena."

Arjun,"k... thik hai."

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Sam waiting for her and arjun hide behind one big tree.

One hour gone but she didn't came.

Both tired.

Arjun,"terewali ki problem kya hai jab bhi me aata wo kyu nahi aati??????? Phone lagaya use??"

Sam,"ha lagaya but switch off."

Arjun,"tu mere sath mazak toh nahi kar raha. Faltu ka timepass karva raha hai. Tu pagal ho gaya hai? Kahi tuze mansik bimari toh nahi."

Sam,"shut up arjun. Koi mazburi hogi uski koi kam aa gaya honga..."

Arjun,"ha le usiki side nahi. Pata nahi kon hai wo. Chal ab yaha se koi interest nahi muze use milaneka."

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After that incident, arjun was worry for his best friend.

Arjun,"kon hongi wo ladki?????? Roj toh sam se milati fir mere aaneke bad kyu nahi aati wo???

Kahi wo criminal toh nahi.

Ya phir sameerr...

Suddenly arjun remember one case.

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That boy was mad in love with her.

Boy informs etf that, he murders his love.

Arjun and whole team went to that place. (Sameer went to mission)

That boy was sitting on his knees caressing her hair.

Arjun and his team arrest him.

Arjun,"bol...kyu mara use???????"

Boy,"khel khela usane mere sath. Pahale pyar kiya aur jab us din shadi ki bat karaneke liye uske ghar gaya toh usane mana kar diya."

Arjun,"kitane din huye tum dono ke relationship ko???"

Boy,"5 mahine."

Arjun,"what??? Jhut mat bolo 5 mahine wo new-York me thi."

Boy,"jhut hai ye sab me roj usase milane jata tha wo bhi aati thi ghanto der tak ham bat karate the."

Arjun didn't understand what to do???

Arjun to girl's father,"aapki beti 5 mahine kaha thi?"

Father,"kaha na wo newyork me thi."

Chotu,"sir ye sach keh rahe wo painting ke competition ke liye waha gayi thi."

The case was getting complicated for them.

Agar wo 5 mahine newyork me thi toh wo us ladke se kese mili?????

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god damn interesting...
Too good..
Nice updates..
Waiting for the next update..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5

Arjun,"dekho jhut bolneka koi fayada nahi."

Boy,"sir me sach keha raha hu."

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Arjun to chotu,"mujhe is ladke ka pura background chahiye."

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Chotu,"sir ye ladka engineering ka student hai.

Topper hai aur use company se job bhi offer hui hai. Apane ma aur behan ke sath rehata hai.

Baap bachpan me hi mer gaya. Aur behan pagal hai. Use pagal pn ke daure aate hai.

Jab wo company me interview dene ke liye gayi toh uske kuch kagaz gayab ho gaye imp the wo job ke liye.

Iska sadma use bardasht nahi hua aur wo pagal ho gayi. Use laga hoga ki uski zindagi barbaad ho gayi. Waise bhi usane pura education complete kiya par wo kagaz nahi mile toh use job kaise milati. Bichari depression me chali gayi aur wo pagal...

Arjun,"use koi treatment nahi diya?"

Chotu,"umm...pata nahi sir."

Arjun,"to pata karo."

Chotu,"sir par is case se us ladki ka kya relation."

Arjun,"jitana kaha gaya hai utana kaaro chotu."

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Chotu,"sir dr. khan. Unke pas uska treatment kiya. But paiso ke kami ke vajah se wo treatment chod di unlogone ab wo ladki ghar pe hi baithi rehati hai.

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Arjun went to that boy's house.

His mother,"are aap aap yaha kaise???"

Arjun,"aap se kuch bat karni thi."

His mother,"ha puchiye..."

Arjun,"aapki beti ke bare me puchana tha..."

His mother,"pehale mere bte ko girftar kar liya aapne ab aapko mere beti ke bare me kya janana. Mana ke wo pagal he aapko kya lagata hai usane khun kiya."

Arjun,"maine kab kaha aise? Bat suniye meri dhyanse. Mujhe aapki beti ke bare me janana hai. Uska behavior etc. jo bhi hua uske sath."

His mother starts crying.

Arjun see towards aisha she understand.

Aisha gave sympathy to his mother.

His mother,"job ke liye gayi thi meri beti par kuch kagaz gayab ho gaye uske aur wo sadme me chali gayi. Bahot samazaya usko par wo apani halat se bahar nahi aayi. Aapne bhai ki tarah wo bhi hoshiyar thi."

Arjun,"aur kuch aisa jo ajeeb hua ho aapki beti ke sath."

His mother,"ha... ek din hum sab log mere bhanje ke shadi me gaye they. Mene vijay (that boy) ko mana kiya tha ki isse nahi leke jate par vo nahi mana.

Us din

FLASHBACK

Vijay was enjoying his brother's wedding.

His mother was busy with other people.

Sima (his sister) was alone.

She saw that one boy call her

She went there.

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Suddenly she starts crying.

Hearing her sound vijay and his friend went towards that room.

That room was close from inside.

Vijay and his friend break that door.

Vijay saw that no one was there

Sima seems that one boy call her she assume that he is forcing on her.

That was her illusion. As there was no one she was alone and herself she close that door.

First step towards psychological disorder.

FLASHBACK END

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Aisha,"pata nahi sir us ladki ke bare me kyu janana chahate hai?"

Chotu,"ha... aisha us din sir ladki ke bare me zyada puch rahe they"

Shree,"guys arjun sir puch rahe hai toh kuch toh gadbad hongi."

Aisha,"u r correct."

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Arjun told about that girl to dr. khan.

Dr. khan,"hmmm...arjun that's call illusion. Ek pschyological disorder jisame ek insane apani alag duniya banata hai. Wo jo akele hote hai jinhe aapano sath chahiye par milata nahi. Wo kisi dusare insan ko assume karate hai jo sirf unhe dikhayi deta hai. Seema ke case me vahi hua wo akeli thi aur sadme bhi use us bheed me dar lag raha tha usane vahi assume kiya fir koi ladka uspar jabardasti kar rha hai. Jo ki nahi ho raha tha.

Rahi bat vijay ki toh to shayad uske bhi sath. Seema aur vijay bhai-bahen hai aur genes ke vajah se shayad seema ki bimari vijaya me..."

Arjun was shock ke aisa bhi kuch hota hai.

Dr. khan,"chaukane wali bat haina arjun kisi ek insane ko assum karake apani duniya banana.

Vijay ke sath yahi hua arjun...

Vijay ne bhi us ladki ko ek bar dekha pyar me pad gaya aur jindagi bana li apani. Us bechari ko kuch patha bhi nahi honga.

Usase milana aur uska milane aana sab illusion.

Agar kanun ke nazar se dekhe to wo murderer hai but he is innocent.

Wo ladki usko janti bhi nahi. Kk... janati bhi hongi par achanak uska ghar ana aur shadi ki bat use ajib laga honga.

Yahi bat vijay ko buri lagi aur usane bada galat kadam uthaya. Wo metally disturb tha aur akela use shayad smj nahi aaya kya kare aur kya nahi???"

Arjun,"k... thaks doctor aapne meri madat ki thanks."

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Arjun,"vijay tum dono kab mile?"

Vijay,"jab mere cousin ki shadi tab use dekha maine usase bat ki usane bhi."

Arjun(in mind),"hmmm...usi din seema ko daura aaya aur dusare din wo ladki newyork cali gayi. Aur uska chehara vijay ke man me bas gaya.

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Shree,"sir ye aashish vijay ka friend."

Arjun,"vijay aur aarti (girl whom he loves) ke bare me jo bhi janate ho hame batao."

Aashish,"sir wo ladki ..."

He was scared.

Arjun,"don't worry jo bhi tumhe pata hai wo bolo."

Aashish,"sir us din...

FLASHBACK

Vijay,"aashish chal yar tujhe me apne pyar se milvata hu."

Aashish,"ohooo...bhabhiji. tu to bahot aage nikal gaya."

Vijay,"vo dekh aarti aa rahi hai."

Aashish was shock.

Aashish,"kaha pe hai aarti??"

Vijay,"vo dekhna gate ke pas andar aa rahi hai."

Vijay ran towards gate and hugs aarati.

Aashish was fill with sweat.

Aashish,"me tuzase bad me milata hu bye..."

FLASHBACK END

Aashish was fill with sweat remembering that incident.

Aashish,"sir... vah...a par... Koi n...a..hi tha."

And begins to cry.

Shree gave sympathy to him.

Aashish,"sir uske bad maine aarti ke bare me pata lagaya toh she was in newyork. Maine vijay ko bahot samjaya par vo nahi mana aur usane mujase dosti tod di."

Arjun,"hmmm..."

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Court

Judge,"vijay ek mansik rogi hone ke vajah use mental hospital me bheja jata hai vahape uski treatment hongi aur 4 sal use jail me katane honge.(maine man se saza I don't know mental logo ko kya saza di jati hai."

Arjun to vijay's mother,"aap chinta mat kijiye aap ka beta thik ho jayenga aur aapki beti ko treatment deneke liye me help karunga."

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Arjun come to reality after remembering that case.

Arjun(mv),"kahi sam ko bhi aisa kuch..."

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Oh god illusions...
Nice update...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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is that ghost, illusion or someone's trap
poor sam kahan phasgaya
awesome updates
cont soon

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