ARIYA FF : DEVIL'S TRIANGLE discontinued

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Shona77

@Shona77

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Awesome update
Thanks for disclosing that its ariya ff
Dont ever think to stop writing
You r amazing writer its not look like that its ur first story.
U potray every relation very well.
Ri, shree,liza,chotu bonding is so awesome.
Ariya confession was superb.
I hope u will give next update soon.
Thanks 4 pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Awesome update

Loved it

Amazing

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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neitka

@neitka

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

wow

such an amazing update dr

i have no words to describe

its wonderful, mind blowing superb update

arjun itna impatient

i sec bhi wait nhi ho rha usse

sari watches ka time galat lag rha hai😉

riya discharged frm the hospital

loved it

woh lift wala scene

kya osume tha

even i imagine laughing like mad🤣

only chotu have capacity to stand🤣

baki sab ne to girna hi tha

riya come back to home

omg hygenic freak ise har waqt safayi ki padi rehti hai

ayesha n liza welcomed her

loved it

girls made snacks

n boyz praised them

loved it

omg ayesha blushing

dinner time boyz made it

oh god arjun ne sam se onion katwaya

ye kabhi nhi sudhrega

riya come to office

all r arranged welcome party for her

lovely

n arjun propose her

in a such a romantic way

its brilliant

in the end arjun's mom cme

so sorry dear

for late comment

my net is not working

so that's why

continue soon

thnx for pm

and a big thnx fr such a long update

thnk u so much

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

don't stop writing dear

u r such a beautiful writter

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: rosamale

Atta girl👏
Thats the spirit writers need. Keep it up.
And i am soo happy that its an Ariya story. Separation is welcome but end game should be Ariya😆

wow great😃

and thanks for diclosing

its on ARIYA 🥳

waiting for next update

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neitka

@neitka

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

hey dr

this is awesome story

loved it very much

but don't discontinue it

thnx for disclosing

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Diya

@auroradowney

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Guys I can't be able to update the next part as I m not well... really sorry for disappointing you...
Here is a small teaser for u...

TEASER:
Sam : what ??? Ma me isse shadi nahi kar sakta...
Maasa: Sameer ye rishta pehle hi tay ho chuka h in fact u both r married...
Sam : ma I don't remember anything...aur me isse shadi nahi kar sakta...its final...
Maasa:apni Maasa aur apne papa ki izzat ki koi parwah nahi h tumhe... tum isise shadi karoge...me aur kuchh nahi sunna chahti...chalo beti...
And Maasa goes away from there with that girl...All are too shocked to react but there is someone whose heart is broken in a million pieces...ayesha glares Rathore angrily n exits from the conference hall...
Arjun n riya see each other n then towards Rathore...

N plz I will not be able to send pms as the net is slow... so jo bhi ye read kar raha h if u can send pms plz do it... I m just requesting... anyway enjoy the teaser

Edited by neerajanariya - 10 years ago

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SYSHA

@cutenamu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

nice teaser...get well soon and cont plz...waise teaser was shocking...who's that girl...bechara sam shadi hogayi aur usse pata bhi nahi hai...is this some child marriage??😊