Ariya ff : Magical Pyaar

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Jannat

@Sana_Jannat

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

nice 👏
KP 👍🏼
thanx for PM ..
All the best for XM..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Awesome update..
Plz update soon
Thanks 4 pm

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SYSHA

@cutenamu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Very nice update...liked it...loved this attitude of kp...hmm wanna know about kp's past...cont sooon..thanks for pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Nice part

Loved it

KP was amazing

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

oh liked kp s attitude.

and waiting for Riya's entry continue soon

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: samirakhan16
It ok for late but last time next time don't be late with that much time any way I like the way kp and and where is riya s entry 😊

Yaar i know riya ki entry ke liye sab wait kar rahe hai lekin mere dimaag mein riya ko introduce karne ke kuch ideas jinhe compile nahi kar paa rahi hu like getting a glimpse of her somewhere and then vanishing. I know sameera that you want riya in it but believe me i am trying. Maybe after a few updates where i set it in a flow because i also don't know where the story is going, new idea new update

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Wow dear...
Mind blowing update
Just loved it...
Yeh kp kya ladki hain...
Iska attitude to kamal ka hain boss...
Loved the way she give answer to arjun..
So all are badly missing riya...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm..
And all the best for exams dear

Di i am thinking about some more flashbacks, suspicions, secrets and yes ariya flashback moments

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: cuteariya
awesome update
god KP have so much attitude 😉
samjun ki band bajgai 😆
even com scared of KP 🤣
so much mysterious abt KP 😕
now what secret going to open abt KP that connect with samjun 😕
loll KP ke karname sun kar samjun bhi shocked ho gai 😆
poor kunal fall for sherni 🤣
uff KP tease Aisha 😳
Aisha all blush blush 😳
poor choree missing riya a lot 💔
so Aisha & KP going for duel martial arts 👍🏼
continue soon

Thanks di for a long review warna baki chutku se dekar nikal lete hai

I really need to know all your thoughts so that i can mould the story

Its my first time at writing a story