SS: Torn Apart.. Part-4 updated Pg-4(03-04-15)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Um back.. 😃 I know I know I am horrible at writing but what can I do when a idea pops up in my mind it becomes necessary to pen it down...
This time its totally a different concept so tell me if you didnt like it I will surely stop it . ...
but plz give honest reviews they are the biggest motivation for a writer .. plz plz give ur feedbacks and hit like button.

So fasten your seat belts and keep tomatoes ready and get ready for "TORN APART".

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Torn Apart
Prolouge

Life isn't always what we want it to be.
Destiny plays its part well and takes turn a whenever we see our life settling down. My life is totally in it, twists and turns mould me into what I am today and what I was once. From friends to isolence; from good to evil; from simple to complex; from living to breathing and specifically from enjoying my life to living them for the sake of others.
This is what life has made me in these years.

And you can't change it even if you want and even if your utmost desire is to get out of the place and situation you are trapped in.
You simply can't.

But again I say "Destiny plays its part well." And I truely believe in it because now I am used to it.

Everytime I pray to the Lords Of Sky my only wish is to let me have a glimpse of my past life everyday, in the mornings and evenings so that it can give me the strength to just carry on with this cruel life you have bestowed me to save me in the future as I am already torn apart from inside.

Give your feedbacks and forgive me for the mistakes ... and if you don't like it tell me I will stop it..

Part-1 will be updated tommorow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index

part-1: page-below

part-2 : page-2

part-3 :page-3
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Character Sketch


Riya Roy Kapoor: Dead for the world. A simple girl who had her own dreams to fullfill but life took a turn and her life was completely changed rather destroyed.



Sameer DhamSingh Rathod: An outstanding police officer and chief of the Emergency Task Force,Mumbai. He always keeps to himself and doesn't like interference of anyone in his personal life after some dreadful incidents took place in his life.



Arjun Suryakant Rawte: An intelligent and fun-loving person but when it comes to its family and friends, he doesn't leave anyone. Sameer's best friend and also works in ETF with him



MRS. Roshni Arjun Rawte: A sensible girl and a journalist by proffession. knows Arjun and Sameer from college days. Only one who has an acess to Sameer's heart and knows her in and out.



Ayesha Singhania: works as an ammunition expert in ETF and admires sameer secretly.



Naina Malhotra: lives in London with Raina. They both live in a PG but are friends as well. she lives her life to the fullest and advices her room mate cum friend to do the same.

Others Are the members of ETF..
Shreekant Sen,the technical expert
Liza D'cruze,the forensic expert and
Chandrakant Patil or Chotu,the commando

Others will be introduced as story progesses


Edited by misakiscarlet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really interesting prologue dear!
loved it
Waiting for the CS n story to unveil!
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Really interesting prologue dear!

loved it
Waiting for the CS n story to unveil!
do continu soon
thanks for pm



thnx dear.. glad u liked it..
CS has been updated and PAart-1 will be updated in few minutes.. so stay tuned.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Torn Apart

PART-1

"This blast has left everyone in a great despair as today we lost one of our most prominent police officers, ACP Riya Roy Kapoor", the news reporter says showing some pictures of the blast site. Next I hear the screams of my friends and of him-my only family.

I wake up in cold perspiration and curse my luck- my destiny as This memory haunts me not because it contains news of my death but just because I saw them cry and accuse themselves for all this. Sometimes I can't understand - understand why not this part of my memory leaves me alone, as I am. Why it always tries to remind me of who I was and where I actually belong.

As I sit upright on the bed and rest my head on the head rest, I see my friend sorry my only friend come and sit beside me on bed. Though in everyday life, a friend is a person who knows you in and out but my life as I said before is one of its own kind and in this odd life of mine Naina is a pillar of strength. Though she doesn't know much of me or my past but still every time I feel alone and devastated I find her beside me no matter what.

"Hey, you okay?" she asked, worry lines clearly visible on her face.

I gave a faint smile. She slides her palm in mine and tightens the grip assuring that she will be always there.

"Nightmare?"She asked

I nodded. And she continued "why don't you go out for a walk, I know it's not the right time" she said gesturing towards the window "but maybe you will feel better".

Usually I don't take advices but this one seems of no harm if taken. I looked out of the window and became conscious that she was right, it was nearly dawn and an odd time to go out but it didn't matter what time of day it was, as I was too ravaged inside to care, I just needed to go out in fresh air to bring some relief to my old scares .So I quickly took a bath and grabbed my overcoat and set out for a walk .

As I closed the door behind me, a gush of cold air gripped me on all sides and I tightened my grip on the coat and shook it closer to me after all it was winter and cold was inevitalble.

Each step of mine echoed as I walked through the streets of London. It was so calm and to some extend it soothed out my turmoil for a while, on either side of the road were houses lined up and separated by a fence, if mine would have been a normal life I would have loved to live in this locality but alas! It's not. And with this thought I realize how much I wanted to change my life, how much I missed them and how much I desired to see them and have them back in my life but I know it's not possible at least not now when I don't have any evidence of proving myself right and getting out of here.

I pushed these thoughts at the back of my mind and entered the gates of the park, all the trees in there had shed their leaves and they looked so bare unlike my life which even to me was a big confusion. I found myself a bench facing east so that I see the sun rising and each sunrise brings a new hope that someday a sun would also rise up in my life and rekindle my identity-my own identity as Riya..Riya Roy Kapoor and not as Raina but for this world Riya is dead and all that is alive is Raina.

Not only my identity has changed but my existence has also changed and all my life has turned upside down.

It scares me even if I share it to myself but in the deepest of corners I know it's the truth and truths make way to come out even if they are hidden behind a thousand walls. My legs tremble and become numb as I make myself believe that Riya lives in me and...

Yes I... I am Riya Roy Kapoor, who-who faked her own death.


Precape: more story to unfold .. stay tuned

Don't forget to give reviews..😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept
Great start
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue...😃😃😃
Why did Riya faked her own death???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic dear
Loved it
Well some characters are new it would be intresting to read
Continue soon
Ps I will not be able to read n comment timely due to exam devta but after exams I will try to follow
Ps please please update bikhrey hue rishte

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