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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: cutenamu
Lovely update...arjun ka plan toh flop hogaya...bechara chotu...arnav was soo cute...baba ne kaha hai kisi bhi khubsurat ladki se rakhi nahi bandhwate...hehehe kya shikaya hai arjun ne...i will miss this story alot...dii u r superbb writer 69 parts is not a joke...cont writing dii luv u

thank u dear..

love u too..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Sonu

Kya baat hai Awesome epilogue

Sam & riya bhai behen & Arjun & Aisha bhi

Right kabhi kisi khoobsoorat ladki ko behen nahi bnanna chahiye 😆

Arnav bhi papa ki baat maanta hai usne bhi apne friend se rakhi bandhwaayi 😆

But amazing end loved it

Choree moments were also good

Keep writing like this 😃

thanks so much dear for ur encourgeing comments..

ya will surely update my another stories..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Sonu

Kya baat hai Awesome epilogue

Sam & riya bhai behen & Arjun & Aisha bhi

Right kabhi kisi khoobsoorat ladki ko behen nahi bnanna chahiye 😆

Arnav bhi papa ki baat maanta hai usne bhi apne friend se rakhi bandhwaayi 😆

But amazing end loved it

Choree moments were also good

Keep writing like this 😃

thank u dear..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Superb one...

I can imagine Arnav... when Riddhi come to Him to tie rakhi.

and Arjun bechara last part tak try karta raha ki sam & Ri bhai - behen ban jaye... per bechara khud Bhai ban gaya...

If possible give Epilogue...

I miss this one...

thanks dear..

this was epilogue itself..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: whitelily
lovely ending 🤗

thanks dear

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: ...anika...
Unresd my comment for part68 on pg35

thank u dear

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: ...anika...
Wow..
I m speechless..
Beautiful,lovely n funny ending.
Will miss this story a lot...
Arnav's antics made me laugh a lot.
Aayesha ne Arjun ko raakhi baandh di,but,Riya refused to tie rakhi in Bhai's wrist.
Riya's explanation was lovely.
Woh chhoti larki Arnav ko raakhi bandhna chahti thi par,Arnav ne nahi bandhwaya... Hahahaha... That was lovely.
Will miss this story a lot.
Thanks for the pm.

thank u so much dear for ur lovely comment..

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wordsofwisdom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

res/unres

i'm so sorry dii for late comment

i just forgot to unres my comment

i just thought i've commented

i'm really sorry for this

now coming to the ending

it was just awesome and so funny too

bichara arjun end tak sameer ko riya ka bhai banane mein laga hua tha

but didn't get succesful in his mission

aur ulta wahi aaisha ka bhai ban gaya

i was laughing like hell when i imagine the scene

when riddhi was running behind aarav to tie rakhi on his wrist

just loved the ending

and will miss this story so much

Edited by stutisinghania - 10 years ago

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//Unres
Yippeee...

Me first...

Awesome update

Loved it

Amazing

Arjun chahta tha Riya Sam ko rakhi bandhe😆😆

Lekin Sam apni ek lauti gf khoni nahi chahta

Aisha ne Arjun ko rakhi badhi😆😆

Lekin Sam-Riya nahi mane

Best part was Riddhi running behind Arnav😆😆

Last part was beautiful

Just loved it

thank u dear..