T4:Jiya Jale..(completed)

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Awesome ending...

Arjun invited Sameer on lunch for something special...😆😆😆

Sam-Riya's reaction was 😆😆😆

Sameer ko Riya se rakhi nahi bandwani kyunki woh uski ek lauti girl friend hai...😆😆😆

Aisha ties rakhi to Arjun...😃😃😃

But Sam-Riya apni baat se nahi hatte...😆😆😆

Sam-Riya's friendship is special...😃😃😃

Arnav ne Sameer ko mama bolne se mana kar diya...😆😆😆

LOL...Poor Chotu...😆😆😆

Best part of update is Ridhi running Arnav with rakhi...😆😆😆

Liked the last scene...😃😃😃

Waiting for Epilogue...😉😉😉

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

wow dear such a beautiful update

u r outstanding writer👏👏👏

love u n love ur story

big hug🤗

waiting 4 next story

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SYSHA

@cutenamu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Lovely update...arjun ka plan toh flop hogaya...bechara chotu...arnav was soo cute...baba ne kaha hai kisi bhi khubsurat ladki se rakhi nahi bandhwate...hehehe kya shikaya hai arjun ne...i will miss this story alot...dii u r superbb writer 69 parts is not a joke...cont writing dii luv u

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Loved it Sonu

Kya baat hai Awesome epilogue

Sam & riya bhai behen & Arjun & Aisha bhi

Right kabhi kisi khoobsoorat ladki ko behen nahi bnanna chahiye 😆

Arnav bhi papa ki baat maanta hai usne bhi apne friend se rakhi bandhwaayi 😆

But amazing end loved it

Choree moments were also good

Keep writing like this 😃

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

I'm laughing like hell awesome loved it gonna miss it yaar thnx for pm

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Superb one...

I can imagine Arnav... when Riddhi come to Him to tie rakhi.

and Arjun bechara last part tak try karta raha ki sam & Ri bhai - behen ban jaye... per bechara khud Bhai ban gaya...

If possible give Epilogue...

I miss this one...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Unresd my comment for part68 on pg35

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Wow..
I m speechless..
Beautiful,lovely n funny ending.
Will miss this story a lot...
Arnav's antics made me laugh a lot.
Aayesha ne Arjun ko raakhi baandh di,but,Riya refused to tie rakhi in Bhai's wrist.
Riya's explanation was lovely.
Woh chhoti larki Arnav ko raakhi bandhna chahti thi par,Arnav ne nahi bandhwaya... Hahahaha... That was lovely.
Will miss this story a lot.
Thanks for the pm.

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
so ye bhi khatahm kardi

really u r great

69 parts not an ordinary thing

i always admires...how ???"

really u r great

excellent dear

mujeh tho arav aur riddi ka part bahuth achha lagi baap pe aaya.

very well

hats of to u