Arakshi FF - Web of Love - Chapter 20 & 21 updated 27/01 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
such a touching chapter...
the whole chapter showed the depth of love arjun has for sakshi...

I felt bad for Sam' s perplexed condition... he had to sadly choose for with whom he wanted to be with... at that time...

he thinks he failed arjun but that's wrong...he tried his best to save sakshi..BT said true...we can't change fate...

the suspense is building up...many questions are clouding my mind right now...

who actually this rajveer is? why arjun hates his own elder brother...? what made me leave to visit rajveer so urgently seething with anger...?
what really happened at his flat?


waiting for the mystery to unveil...

and the letter...it just ripped me to read such pain induced into mere words...

the display of that letter and the chosen handwriting gives it a realistic visualization...


loved it...

continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
amazing update...
arjun loves sakshi soo deeply...
feeling horrible to see sam in such a condition ...
letter... no words to define it .. it was . .magnificient the font .. the colour .. the words everything was just beautiful.. loved it
soo many questions brewing in my mind this time but its better for me to keep mum and wait for for you to unveil it yourself ..
only i can say is plz update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Superb update
arjun came out of coma
arjun was restless to meet sakshi
sakshi's letter to arjun
you described everything perfectly
waiting for their meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Ress..

Unress..
The line in the beginning..Gave away the glimpse of how this chap is gonna be..
Description about her in the lehenga ..the wheat fields...I was totally in there..But was back to the hospital virtually and literally too..🤢(Coz I m reading this chap sitting on a hospital bed, laptop on my lap and 2 nurses at the foot of my bed,starring at me as though I hav told their secret love-story to their parents..hahaha..🤣🤢)
Will be back later..Better I shut off now..Koi mujhe shanti se padne bhi nahi deta..😭😡😭

Hush..! Finally got my personal space..Got a full 30 min scolding session from those evil nurses..😡blame you for this..could not wait to read..😳
Ok back to the update..
The flashback of their last meet...😭Wish he would have stayed back..Lekin agar aisa hota toh ye story aage kaise badhti..😆
"Agar kuch pata lage toh phone karna. They have your number as well.".. "Woh wapas nahi aayenge." ..What were they talking about..? and who are 'THEY'..?
Sameer telling him the truth and the aftermath was painful..😭
So Arjun was returning to Mumbai to meet his brother..and that he was angry on him..And while on the way he met with an accident..
Now tell me one thing..his accident was just an accident or planned..Or maybe I'm overthinking..

Sameer's pov was written well..His best friend's accident leading to his coma..A sister who was accused for a murder..All happening at the same time..His desperation to get Sakshi out from this mess, failing each time..and the helplessness...and then the 'FAILED' feeling...and worst part, being the one to tell Arjun and facing him..
Made me all emotional..😭Glad Aisha is there with him..

True to be said..sometimes fate fails everything..even truth..
Perfect comparison given..Sakshi as the dove..
"We couldn't do anything to save the dove who was once synonymous with freedom. And the worst thing was that she didn't even struggle to liberate herself."... 😭These lines were hurting..

The letter..The contents in it felt so real..not just visually but emotionally too..👍🏼😭👏
"You had the strange power to soak the light from anything around us, even darkness, and throw it like a blanket around me so I would always be cocooned in its warmth." ...this line was just "WOW"..👏
Lots of guessing work going on..but will wait for you to reveal..

This was whole lot of emotional and a beautifully written update..😭👏
Cont soon and thanks for pm.

P.S: The handwriting in the letter..nice choice👍🏼..to you and 👍🏼to someone named Bhartee as you said..

Oh God..! I typed so much.?.😲This was, guess my 1st so long comment..don't mind ha..!

Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
NEW STORY?
proluge

ITS FREAKING AWESOME RITU
WAY TOOI FABULOUS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
part one
wow
it was amazing
sister you rock
awesome story
awesome banner and now the letter...
teach me please, i beg you

p.s. bend nahi ho sakti na so paaon parna cancel
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Ritu ji!!
Tussi great ho!
Kya idea hai janeman.
It just made this story all the more wonderful

He is awake
the restlessness and his doubts were just perfect
There is a lot in the past. and cant wait to know more
the impatience and void feel is hitting at the right part
And then the precap!! hayeee update soon na
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
First of all congratulations for new thread
Awesome and emotional start
Sakshi under bars and Arjun in coma
What happened with Sakshi
Thank God Arjun is out of coma
Letter is well written
Con soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Superbbb update didu!!!

Fantastc work!!

Con sooonn...eagerly waiting for their meeet!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
jaldi next update dijiye
trailer bohoth acha tha
update was awesome
continue soon

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