Arakshi FF - Web of Love - Chapter 20 & 21 updated 27/01

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Welcome back babua!
happy new year...

a very interesting and promising start...indeed

looking forward to it...

continue soonish...

PS: waiting for one last epilogue if phirse milenge...too selfish...I know

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ress..
Will comment tomo..

Unress..

The prologue was interesting, and the concept was something different and promising.Waiting for the story to unfold.👍🏼
As you said, this is the first from you in crime genre, so wishing you and this story the best. Tussi tension na lo iss genre mein bhi aap chaa jaoge..🤗

The banner is awesome.
But the best is the trailer..Wow..! What a VM..! Its amazing..The mixing of the dialogues, the song and the scenes too, it came out to be the perfect one..👏👏
Khamoshiyaan is the only song I'm listening to recently..and you have used it, I'm so happy..!🤗
Now as I look back to all the VMs I've seen, this is my favourite one.

Wishing you a very Happy New Year.😊
Cont soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago

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Preethu

@crazysakshi_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

hmm interesting start

lved it

continue soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Unressed on page 3.

Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago

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sweetpari4u97

@sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

amazing start

Loved the prologue.

cont soon.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Res./Unres...

Yippeee!!!! Me first on ur new
story...*dance*

Fantastic start ritu di!!!!!

Just loved the way u potrayed everything!!!

Sakshi condition made me senti yaar!!!!

And arjun in coma!!😲

Supeerr interesting di!!!

Con.sooonnn!!!!

Yaay🤗

Heyloo Gausiii.. thank you soo much rey😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
WOW
Now that's an amazing start
Loved the prologue
It was perfect
Waiting for the first part
Continue soon

Thanks soo much Shravani.. this means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Armagadon
OMG... IT'S FRIGGIN AMAZING
TOO FAINTED TO SAY ANYTHING

I wanted to be first *boohoo*

I just loved the trailer Rtiz... aha... Arijit strikes again eh? How much of research did you do to get the voice overs and shots? You did a bloo*y lot of research...

Anyone watching the trailer - seriously it ain't easy shit! And where did you get those HD videos! *crying* mujhe milta hi nahi... sobs...

The prologue was flawless! Beautifully flawless! I am in love with this... wah wah... pehle shot main hi Arjun ko semi uda diya! Perfecto...

Oh shit... this is going to be a really long fic! And you have left me restless... not fair... not at all fair re! Before exams erokom bhabbe amake restless kore rakli kano???

Looks like iss vacation main kuch solid hi inspiration mila *wink*

Kya mila kya mila kya mila

I will take revenge for the comment on CE *grr*

Lots of diabetically sweet love,

Shree

Shreee🤗 Aww it's okayy!

I have been reading and re-reading your comment and feeling sooo good😳
Hahahaa oops sorry😛 I hope you don't get tooo distracted 😉 but where hotwa is concerned *ahem* LOL LOL
Would u believe it if I say I got lucky with the dialogues? Ok I had to watch tons of KB videos and hunt in the Arjun ones for the perfect dialogues😳 Luck favoured me a lot tooo.. so yeahh! It was so much fun though! 😳
Thank youuu heaps and heaps.. and tiiight hugs to you🤗 It means a lot rey😳
Ne jaa ebar porte bosh😛
Oyeee kuch nahi mila ok?😆😆 Actually story r idea aagei chilo but plot ta shaky chilo... and those 9 days just made it more real😃
Aha! Ota amar bodla chilo for the Phir milenge comments😈 but then I see that you've had your sweet revenge too😆😆 Grrr.. anyway, I still looouvedd it😛
*Ahem* maybe I should read those two OS's u mentioned

Love ya loadsss🤗

P.S - I hope u found the HD videos?

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie
Res!!
My louuve is here!! 🥳 (Eh! Not u, Him and HIM!) ❤️

-Unres-
Hola! *waves*
Yes, I feel like an absolute idiot and zombie now.. But it's all worth it in the end.. 🤗

Sooo.. meri eklauti sautan.. How can I ever thank you for penning down this one.. 😳
No.. Honestly, I got major goosebumps right when you mentioned it for the first time.. And my level of curiosity keeps scaling new heights..
And then.. You had to go and make that sheer awesome piece of creation!!
Bass.. *tanpura delivery on the way* - Aata hi hoga.. 🤪

Sooo.. Khamoshiyaan..

Ahem! You already knew that, didn't you.. Evil Sautan!
Do you have the remotest idea of what that lethal, deadly, heart-stopping, mind-boggling, hawt combination did to me? *Sigh*
O wait! I think you do.. 🤣

Seriously.. You were right.. Never again will I be able to listen to it, without the dialogues goonjing in my ears.. *heavy sigh*
That VM is one of the bestest things I've ever watched.. *Pat on the back, my love* absolutely brilliant!

Aaandd.. The banner.. It's just sooo goose-bumpey.. Crap! That's not even a word.. 😆 I mean it is sooo kuch kuch hota hai taipes.. *hatt besharam* not humarawala.. but u know, that warm fuzzy feeling you get, when u listen to 'Duaa' or 'Khamoshiyaan'
Yes.. I had to bring HIM in! *bows*

Anyhow.. sooo..

You had be thud-ing right from the first quote!!
It's funny how words can do that to you..

But.. For someone who eats, breathes and loves mushkil prem kahanis, that quote is like a soothing balm..
Sigh! Yeh louuve bhi humse kya kya likhwata hai.. *facepalm*

*Will be back later when I find a quiet corner for myself!*
Until then - please fetch me a box of tissues or a AK-47 (Kissiko threaten karna hai..)

Heyloo Sautan dearest🤗😈

Eeeshhh all those praises coming from you.. I feel so overwhelmed every time you comment on my stories.. sachiii! Coz u know how much of an awesome writer you are and for this one.. I shall be even moreee nervous coz NO one.. and i repeat NO ONE can write mushkil prem kahanis as well as you😎... I just hope that this can be even 5% as good!😃

Anywaaay.. of course I did it to make u go *thud*.. but then you do the same to me hahahaha.. ruko I have a world record in reincarnation (you're close too btw🤣)

@bold - SO TRUE!!!☺️ Isn't that why I did it🤪

👏You even brought him into the banner.. sheeeshhh I so agree.. *ahem* Duaa... is deffo gonna be included in this one🤣 *dreamy*

Am I digging my own grave here?🤣

@second bold.. LOOLLL... sach mein😆😆 And woh bhi kiske pyaar mein🤣

Chaddo! Meerabais ka naam roshan karenge hum

Love you loads for the comment sautannn... you have no idea how much u motivate me (or maybe u do😛)🤗

Originally posted by: Maha-Srk
hmmm
kea baat hai
hatke story wow
waiting 4 story 2 unfold

Heyloo Mahaaa🤗

Good to see u heree.. thanks soo muchhh!!😳

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
Seriously...i m dumbstruck... Hats off buddy...very well written... it was flawless... Yaar tune prologue mein hi Arjun ko adhmara kar diya... Feeling bad for Sakshi... Imprisonment for life...holly sh*t... Ab ki hoga bhayya... Pls humein aur na tadpa... jaldi update de... P.S. meko trailor link nhi dikh raha...esa kaiko hota hai...ki tumhra or thare shree ka video linkwa humeiko hi kahe najar nhi awat hein... :@ >:)

Whoaa.. thanks soo much! That means a lot rey..😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm concept
something different
sounds interesting
continue soon

Thanks soo muchh Humaira! It means a lot😳

Originally posted by: NainaSM
ye kyaa
starting me aisaa
arjun aur sakshi durr ho Gaye
sakshi par murder k charges
arjun kaise bachayega ab
continue soon

Thanks sooo much Nainaa😳

Originally posted by: kunchu
Good Lord
Ri...
That was bang on
Kya dhamaal writing hai
Another new feather to your splendid cap
Aage bhado
We with u
PS: isse kehthe hai lollipop wali precap
Buhahaha

KK🤗

Do u have any idea how much that comment means to me?😳

I hope I can keep it up... thank u sooo muchh!

Bahahaa.. abhi toh aur lollipops milne hai😛

Love yaaa🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Honestly, I never expected crime story from you...😆😆😆
Anyways a superb start...

Prologue is 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Sakshi is declared guilty...
Arjun is in coma...
Trailor was amazingly Awesome...👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Trust me I didn't expect myself to write one either😆😆

Thanks sooo much Snehaa🤗

That really really means a lot😳

Originally posted by: Asyalover
omg...awesome VM firstly...and the concept too...thanks for sharing with us..cont soon

Thank you soo much.. for watching, reading and commenting😳

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
amazingg... what a web u have wooven...
sakshi is behind bars for murder of arjun's elder brother 😲
and arjun is in comma ...
waiting for more..
update soon
thnx for pm

Thank you sooo much Aradhya!🤗

hoping you'll like the rest 😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
OMG where do u come up from all these ideas 👏
the video was so amazing
and the start sakshi's state of mind after getting arrested and then waiting for her arjun was so well written and then when she heard a voice a but not her hubbies and that same voice told her that her arjun is in coma poor thing that to go through so much and all alone
thanks for pm
what happened to forever with u 😊

Thanks soo much Shefali🤗 LOL i dunno how.. bas ideas aa jate hai.. call me my crazy running dimaag and the love for writing😆😆😆

It means a lot... thanks soo much for all the comments! And yes, will be updating it by tomorrow.😃

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Rituuu rituuu back with a new story...this deserve a celebration haina 😳😳
Yayayayaya am sooo happy that finallyyy i'll get to read the story which made me sooo sooo excited from the beginning only

First of all the banner...i think its absolutely amazing,the color effect,the pictures and then the Rajasthan view and also the cage...the whole of them trying to tell us something...fantastic job with it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The VM is just mindboggling...i looove looove it way too much,you worked sooo sooo hard on it and the result turned out to be fantastic...this is my second favorite vm of yours 😳😳

Now coming to the prologue...i've always been excited about this story since the time you told me about it and today reading it hereee makes me veryyy happy and at the same time thrilled also as its new concept and hatke and and i just loove dishuum dishuuum scenes 😳😳

I cant wait tooo start reading it actually...you better updateee sooon haha 😆😆

The prologue was mindblowing...totally looove it

Biiig biiig hugs and all the very best with the writing 🤗🤗

Bhaaaruuu meri devranii🤗

Awww love youuu for your super colourful comment and all the emos.. u know how much you motivate me every single day right? I love u for listening to all my stupid dreams and crazy story ideas..😆😆 and of course, always always motivating me!🤗

All that means a looottt to me.. I am missing u right now, just so u know😛

Love yaaa loads and loads.. u know na😳❤️

Originally posted by: rvss
Interesting. ..

please continue. .

Thanks sooo much 😳

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Superb start
sakshi ko jail ho gayi
hope arjun jaldi aaye use bachane
waiting for the first chapter

Thanks soo much Anita!🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
What have u done didu!!!!!!!!!!
I just loved it..
Superbly written...
What the hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arjun is in coma and Sakshi is in jail!!
Please please con soonz..

Thank you sooo much Eeshuuu😳

Hehehe.. hope u like what's coming up!! Hope u're goood😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
The judge's verdict declared me as guilty for the murder of Rajveer Suryakant Rawte: Arjun's elder brother. I was sentenced to imprisonment for life.

Jaane do.First chapter mein hi dimag lagaugi to Takli ho jaugi.

Trailer **Day dreaming** Darn!!!These trailers make my blood boil 😡**Angry **Tumpar nahi baba.The ones who spoiled the Jodi who could have created it's place among the popular Indian Telly jodies.Anyways,I got you ppl to fulfil my wishes.Mind you Takli smiley matlab wooo.Samaj jao mere code words.☺️
As always magical moments by Rituparna Mallick always work.O BTW,this sentence is one of the hint that I sent u**Unpredictable Me**😈

Farheeennn🤗

First of all... yeah unpredictable u. I never expected that even though I knew half of it😛 I cannot tell u how much that meant to me.. 😳🤗

Back to the comment! Hahahaa arrey ruko abhi toh case unfold karna baaki hai. I must prepare myself for your questions😛

About the trailer... GRRR I know😡 Anyway... *deep breath* let's not think about them and what could have been

We have us - Avni and KK and everyone else.. we shall create what they left incomplete!

*ahem* main samajh gayi🤣 But for now the answer isss...

Let's leave that as a lollipop, shall we?😛

Originally posted by: fly.high
Welcome back babua!
happy new year...

a very interesting and promising start...indeed

looking forward to it...

continue soonish...

PS: waiting for one last epilogue if phirse milenge...too selfish...I know

Birdieee🤗

Thank u soo much! 😳 Hope you'll like it!

Originally posted by: Swara85
Ress..
Will comment tomo..

Unress..

The prologue was interesting, and the concept was something different and promising.Waiting for the story to unfold.👍🏼
As you said, this is the first from you in crime genre, so wishing you and this story the best. Tussi tension na lo iss genre mein bhi aap chaa jaoge..🤗

The banner is awesome.
But the best is the trailer..Wow..! What a VM..! Its amazing..The mixing of the dialogues, the song and the scenes too, it came out to be the perfect one..👏👏
Khamoshiyaan is the only song I'm listening to recently..and you have used it, I'm so happy..!🤗
Now as I look back to all the VMs I've seen, this is my favourite one.

Wishing you a very Happy New Year.😊
Cont soon and thanks for the pm.

Heylooo Swara🤗

Thank youuus jiii. I really need it and hope I can do justice to the story😳

Your comments mean a lottt... motivating me as always😃

Thanks againnn.. and the VM ..ahh it took a while to get the perfect dialogues but it worked out and I am quite proud of it😳

Thanks againnn🤗

Originally posted by: crazysakshi_19
hmm interesting start
lved it
continue soon

Thanks a lot!😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
amazing start
Loved the prologue.
cont soon.

Thank u soo muchh Parii😳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much Niki😳

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