SiN TS: Guns and Roses [Ch 3 - pg 9] *Completed* Replies on pg 11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: zubiya92

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Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Awsumm Concept Chutki and Shree!! 🤗 really glad that u like it so much😳Well, unlike all I've always imagined Sikander to be Very Handsome And Eaually Hott!! 😉❤️ and to Imagine Ranveer Singh as Siki..Uff! Oh La La! Qaatil!! And Deepika as Nehaa!! Hayeee!! I lovee this woman! ❤️ Neha teri nikal padi..!! 🤣 The first chapter was very sensous!! ☺️ Loved Sikander-Neha's Intro! The lust was very much evident in Sik's voice but As he saw Neha, he stopped! He isnt that bad!! 😃 haan..banda itna bhi bura nahi he😉😆Iss story ke baad, tera sikki mera!! why wait for story to end Di?? abhi se rakh lo.. I don't have any problem😆 Rannveeerr!! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!

Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Awsumm Concept Chutki and Shree!! 🤗 Well, unlike all I've always imagined Sikander to be Very Handsome And Eaually Hott!! 😉❤️ and to Imagine Ranveer Singh as Siki..Uff! Oh La La! Qaatil!! And Deepika as Nehaa!! Hayeee!! I lovee this woman! ❤️ Neha teri nikal padi..!! 🤣 The first chapter was very sensous!! ☺️ Loved Sikander-Neha's Intro! The lust was very much evident in Sik's voice but As he saw Neha, he stopped! He isnt that bad!! 😃 Iss story ke baad, tera sikki mera!! Rannveeerr!! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Heylo Neha... Hi😃

Hihi... I am so damn excited for this... sacchi! I think you do know how much I love this! Execution was brilliant... Neha's mental rambles was really funny! Aha... I just loved her dialogue to those gundas! They damned deserved it! yupp.. they deserved it to the core!😉

You know what I really liked - you kept it real. As written in the CS 😉 Neha used her brains more than her brawn, if she tried to hit and tackle, definitely her situation would have been worse, thus her being silent and complying was apt - I also liked the fact that Neha was taking a note of everything happening in her surroundings... really glad that u liked it!😃

Am so glad Neha punched and slapped Sikki... his entry was heart-attacking! Aha... aasu se kuch yaad agaya kya sikki ko 😉 ho sakta he.. I'm zipped 😉😆

Now how much i loved this part you might know it very well as of now! yess..I know it!😃🤗

Only two advices... 😃

Number 1 - make Neha l'il bit more snappier... (that guy just tried to... ahem her...) ok.. will do it surely!👍🏼

Number Two - make Sik more villainous till the "breaking point" you know where when that happens and then that follows and then that happens 😉 ok..point is noted My Lord😉😆

Apart from that the story is going excellent... I loowweee it 😃 😃 😃 I'm really glad! 🥳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Start
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Very Interesting Concept
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