Ariya FF: Shadow Chapter 2, Pg 11, April 6th 2015

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dinazz

@dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

nice one .

cont soon.

thanks for pm.😊

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swethalovely

@swethalovely

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey really great start...😊

Looking forward for the next update...

Hey please do pm me next time..

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Di it's great concept
What the hell
Ariya were married
After 3 months
Suddenly roshini came
Nd Arjun nd his family abounded Riya
How could they
Nd how could Arjun
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon di
Nd thanks for the new story on Ariya

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Ariya were happy together

but Roshni came back

Poor Riya😭😭

feeling bad for her

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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rvss

@rvss

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Kya yaar tumne to suru me hi rula diya hame.

I feel very bad for riya.

arjun and uski family roshni ke ate hi riya ko hul gaye.

thank god ramu kaka vo rosh ke ane baad bhi riya ka pehle jesahi kgayal rakhte he.

bapaa kya ariya ko alag karne ka irada to nahi.

agar he to roshni ko dur kar dena.

sachi hame jara sa bhi bura nahi lagega.
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nice. Super.

please continue. .

Me waiting.

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Oh I so loved it !
That choaking feeling i did feel so I loved it.
And yeah for a lot more of it!

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Update toh faaru tha di
But u devil u made me cry
Awww my precious tears
But I loved tis one do update soon

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aptl123

@aptl123

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

very well written...

poor riya...

continue soon

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

omg... wat a start...😲 starting mai ye haal h to aaage kya hoga...
it was so emotional, so intense... really felt bad for riya.. poor girl... and the way you described everything... could actually feel her emotions...
awesome...👏
continue soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

really feel sad for riya
how easily they forgot riya after roshini's come back
huh arjun is thinking abt the darkness in her room
seriously man??? u gave her darkness for lifetime
why she is still in that house& bearing all this ignorance???
it started on very sad note
hope it will have a happy ending as u said in ur note
some sorrows are to fill ur life with happiness in future
aweesome start
cont soon

Edited by madmadona - 10 years ago