ETF/CID Case SS : Restored Innocence. *Ch 3 pg 11*

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

oh wow mere tow fav shows ek sath😃🥳

amazing and superb start arma di👏

cid part was funny

sakshi😭

no sikender???

toh phir woh sab kisne kiya?

what no hp? ummm i like him, plz usey bhi include karo

arma di juldi wapis aao

missing you soo much😭

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Monika

@meera851

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Update next part soon
Ab aage kya hoga

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@Arakshiya_58

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

res/unres...

Awsome Awsome Awsome start Rockstar!!!!!

Reallly loved this update!!!!!!

The best of story a little smily Arjun nd as always his miss publicist!!!!

The new little girl part with arakshi was beautifulll!!!!

Saki having past nd jumpi dead😲!!!

Like CID part also!!!! kavin is gaurav khanna or someone else?????

Con.sooonn!!!!!!

Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 11 years ago

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

nice update.

wow arjun has becomed much more relieved after finishing his enemy. and cupid sakshi did not want to be kabab me haddi ...😆 jhumpi .. cute girl..

sakshi too has a past . !!

cid pulling each others leg . 😆😆

someone's jeleous !!😆 ex... batchmate...😆

oh no it was jhumpi's body !! 😲

cont soon ..😊

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I am speechless...

Even in midst of ur hectic schedule u managed to write a new SS..

It's superb.. Very beautifully written..

From first to last u got me hooked up..

The bond between Jhumpi and Arjun is beautifully described..

The masti and love atomosphere of CID is...

I am at loss of words..

Mwaaahhh...

But what have u done at last!!!

Jhumpi is dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't u dare to DC this story..

Con whenever u have time..

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savali

@savali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful start
Etf aur CID sath me.
Sakshi arj part was awesome.
Arj knows abt saks intention to send the couples together.
Sakshi ka bhi painful past hai.
Loved their time with jhumpi.
Cid fun was also good.
Arjun rawte jealous???
OMG Jumpi died,arjun khudko kaise sambhalega?
Waiting to know n cont soonish.

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Isha S.

@Sisha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

awesome start
very nice update
loved it...
do continue this story...

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angle1shanu

@angle1shanu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

superb start...love the concept...cid mai be love is in the air...and same in etf...sakshi ka bi painful past hai...!!!! Love the jhumpy arakshi moments...superbly written...so nice ...arjun amd purvi jeleous...hehebehe...but ye kya hua jhumpy died...???? Kyu...???? Plz continue soon..!!!