ETF/CID Case SS : Restored Innocence. *Ch 3 pg 11*

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

awesome update

arjun was broken seeing jhumpi dead

5 saal pehle kya hua sakshi ke saath????😕😕

arjun was shattered...par use sakshi ko slap nhi karna chahiye tha

"Daya darwaza todo" "Chotu darwaza kholo" 🤣🤣🤣

daya aur chotu confuse ho gaye 🤣🤣

poor jhumpi😭😭

how can her parents do this😡😡

case is solved

love ACP pradyuman n arjun convo

i think commissioner bhi iss sab main involve hai

loved it

thanx for the pm

waiting for the next part

cont soon

😊😊😊

Edited by aditiarakshi - 10 years ago

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Isha S.

@Sisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

awesome update..
loved it..
chotu and daya confused ...
continue soon...

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

It was a beautifully written update and emotional too..
The best part of the update was the talk between both the ACPs at the end..I loved that part..
And the way you have portrayed Arjun after Jhumpi's death..credit for your writing..👍🏼 because that felt real for me.
First the silence,the slap, the outburst and crying..It made me all emotional.😭
5 years before something had happened..curious to know about it.
Amazing blending of both the teams..great work.
We got to see Samjun also here..
Daya-Chotu part..Omg.😆.! that was too awesome..I actually imagined tht scene..😆
Jhumpi's parents are such..🤬...How could they do that..
Commissioner is involved in the case and so doesn't want them to investigate further..But guess Kavin and Sakshi have a plan..
thanks for pm..cont soon...It was a superb update.

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

awesome story.

read both parts just now.

liked it very much.

cont soon.

thankx for pm.

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

the update was just...

mein ko aur rula diya

anyways it was penned down magnificently

poor arjun, his condition is just... Umm cann't explain in words

slap was understandible

cid too is investegating jhumpi's case

chotu and daya was in deep turmoil.., hehehe

arjun's outbrust on jhumpi's parenets was good.., they need that

thanks for update

hp means hrishkesh pandey aka sachin

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

SUPPEERBBB!!!!!! & Awsome updates ROCKSTAR JAAN!!!!!
Loved it!!!!!
But its tooo emotional...😭
Eagerly waiting for next part...PLEASE..Con.sooonn!!!!!!

P.S...No Sorry for short nd late comment...exams time!!!!!!

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

wow both the chaps were written beautifully

loved it

continue soon

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angelshah

@angelshah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

it was awsome
loved it
cont soon

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Hi Devi maiyya

read both parts in one go 😃

i havent watched CID so mujhe unke baare mein nahi pata but i like the way you described them 😃

so love is in the air 😆

loved jhumpi...such a cutie pie 😳

kavin is sakshi's chocolate boy...haan 😉 😆

but then the blow came...poor girl 😭

arjun slapped sakshi 😲

the convo between arjun & pradyuman had so much depth...am sure that his words might have some effect on arjun 😳

ab yeh commisioner bhi involved hai kya is mein 😡

cont soon 🤗

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Yay! me first!!
Awesome story dear
loved it

Ch 1

ETF n CID together.. oh..what a treat!😃
Trust me I myself loved writing it!

Sakshi didn't wanna be a haddi in the kebab.. Shriza n SaSha..lovely!😳
Kaam ho na ho, Cupidgiri Sakshi se behtar kaun kar sakta hai?😉

Loved Arakshi convo.. they're hilarious!🤣

Were't they always?😆
What mistake did Sakshi do? Really intriguing.. something related to her sister? Maybe!
Yep.. bacchi sayani hoti jaa rahi hai eh?😉

Jhumpi.. loved her n Arjun's bonding.. even Sakshi's too😳

It was her birthday.. Arjun made it really special😃👏

Sakshi remembering something about her sis.. the past haunting her..

She wore the dupatta like a saree.. Arjun commented n she became shy..hehe.. sweet!😳
Yeah... yeh mere saath bohot hua hai! U r right... something's wrong with Sak...

CID was lively n lovely enough.. nice..hhaha..😆
Ab bechare un logo ki bhi love life ko dhakka dena mangta hai na!

Case..

Team ETF is no less.. bechare Sam n Shree.. Rawte ne pakad liya..😆
Ab hotwa ke aankho se kuch miss toh nahi hota na😉

Sakshi said the words of her heart.. we..us..😉
Dil ke baat zubaan pe... LOL yeah...

Kevin n Sakshi friends.. Arjun n Purvi jealous.. hmm..😉
Jab tak kuch jale na kahani aage kaisi badegi?

n what's this.. body of Jhumpi..🤢 no.. Arjun ka kya hoga..???😭
I know... this part was :'(

Ch 2

Arjun was broken seeing Jhumpi dead😭
the scene was beautifully penned!👏
Glad you loved it dear.
Sakshi remembered something..what happened 5 yrs before??
Arjun's outburst.. the slap was quite unexpected.. he was feeling guilty for it..
It was indeed, he might be feeling guilt but Sakshi won't go easy on him.
CID team was investigating the matter.. everyone is sad seeing the dead girl..😭
Arjun cried his heart out.. that was needed!😊
Sam ne aate hi apne sawal puch liye.. she answerd the needed robotically..
Sakshi asked Kavin about..umm.. her sis??😉
Shush!
ETF n CID working together.. wow!
Child trafficking..
loved the small SamJun scene😳
Jhumpi's house..
poor Daya n Chotu.. confusiya gaye..kya kare..khole ya tode..🤣
Maine yeh bohot baar socha ki agar Chotu aur Daya ek saath ho toh phir kya hoga???
Freddy took the way out
Arjun gave good SYS to Jhumpi's parents.. the dealer also caught!
Arjun did her last rites😊
loved the two ACP's talk..👏
Commissioner doesn't want them to go ahead in case.. n Sak-Kav agreed.. hmm.. kuch to choot raha he..
Bohot kuch choot raha hai *wink*
do continu soon