Ariya new story Do Qadam door thay (part 2 updated 22/11) pm late

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Hey Guyz..
this is my first story ever and it's dedicated to (lol first story aur abhi se dedication) our sweet sister shweta aka megha di, piya di and and my dear friend ArjunFanNAJAAN
unka Birthday Gift
so enjoy sisters 😳

An Ariya fanfic

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Proluge


Girl


"Shaadi..." she thought...

"Maa Baba ke kitney sapne thay,
kitney armaan thay meri shaadi ko
leke,
par yeh kia hogaya mere sath...?" she
sighed in frustration...

"Joh din meri zindagi mein
khushiyaan laane wala tha wohi din
mujhe meri zindagi ka sabse gehra
zakham de gaya... Yeh kiya ho gaya
mere sath...?" she stared at the blank
walls... her mind running loose on what had happened...

"Jise meri zindagi ka sathi banaya
gaya wohi mujhe beech raaste mein
akeela choor gaya..." she left the
room... a tear dripping down her
cheek...


Boy


"Meri Shaadi..?" he pressed his
temples...

"Yeh yeh sab kia ho gaya..? Nahii...Yeh
shaadi mujhe manzoor nahi, infact
ham dono hi yeh saadi nahi karna
chahte thy, nahi maanta mein aiesi
shaadi ko..." he banged his fist on the
table... the cup broke but he barely noticed that...

"Mein ussey pyaar nahi karta, mein
usey kabhi kuch nahi rakh sakta tha..
Kabhi nahi" he sighed...

"Isi liye mein usey wahin choor ke
aagaya... Woh wahan safe rahe gi,
kush rahe gi.. Apni life apni marzi se
jee payegi.." he justified himself... but
then the question arose... if he was so
affirm... what's the need for justification?

His lips voiced out what his nagging
conscience was telling him... "Phir...
phir q mujhe itna guilty feel ho raha
hai? Q aiesa lag raha hai kuch ghalat
hoone jaa raha ho?"

He looked aside in defeat... something
was wrong...

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so kaisa laga?
Agar pasand aya toh plz atleast ek like kardo
bachi kush hojaye gi


P.S. This fic is only for India Forum's only so please dont copy it any where

regads Areesha
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Chapter One


ETF Headquaters
Time 10:30



There hasn't been a case reported yea and luckily no paperwork was pendin

Sameer was out for some work so everyone was relaxing and enjoying

liza was on leave and shree was on his mission to

"Munch down Chotu's brian" 😆 😆

shree: Chotu this new software and gadget is just amazing,
agar hum isse use karienge toh...

chotu..? chotu? tu sun raha hai na mein kia keh raha hoon?

Chotu: hmmm..

Shree: Chotu kahan khoya hoa hai?
Chotuuu...

shree tried to bring chotu out of his dreamland..

chotu still in dreamy mode, hugged or we can say cruched shree..

shree try to free him self from chotu's grip but failed, tired shree finally yelled fearly: Rathore sir...

A scared chotu comes back to reality

Chotu fearly: Haan., wa what?

Good morning sir
Good afternoon sir
Good night sir
Jai hind sir...

chotu saluted and look here and there only to find no one,
he hears loud laughs which belongs to shree..

shree controling his laugh say's: Hahaha look at your self chotu, tu kitna dar gaya..

Chotu yelled angrily: Shreee, tu toh gaya

he opend his hair.,

Shree: uri baba, nahi chotu sun na please, nahi yaar maaf karde please and started to run

chotu ran behind him..

they were running, chasing, teasing and laughing with eachother when suddenly shree banged with someone, his specks fell on floor..

chotu saw the person and gulps in fear..

Shree: uff koun hai yaar? Kitni zor se laga pata hai? Oyiii

he didn't saw the person as he was busy in searching his specks..

chotu tries to speak but recive a glare from the person and he shuts his mouth,

shree was still busy finding his specks when that person bend down, picks up his specks and gave it to shree..


Shree: thanks yaar, but tumhe dekh ke chalna chaye tha na, kitna zor se laga pata hai?

aaah.. Aiesa laga jaise kisi brick wall se takra gaya...(lo ulta choor kotwal ko dante 😆 😆 )

shree speaks adjusting his specks.,

Person: awww tumhe zor se lage? Goud mein utha ke pyaar karoun? Tumhari seva karun?
hmmm..

horrified shree listening to voice looked up and seeing the person infront, he was surely about to faint..

thier stands thier chiefThe Great Rowdy Rathore with his hands on hips and fury in eyes

Sameer: kia hoa shree, chup q ho gaye? bolo.. Bolo na..

aur tum chotu, kia hoa tumhe? Ruk q gaye, please continue your race

Chotu in feeble voice: no sir

Sameer: no no i insist please continue your game, kitna maza aa raha tha 2 qaabil ETF officers ko bachon ki tarhan khelte dekhne mein

saind sameer with clenched jaws

really sir?? Said an amused shree happily..

chotu was giving him Are you mad?

Q bhooke sher ko aur ghussa dila raha hai?
wala look..

Sameer: hmmm really..

Shree: oh Thank GOD..
Ap bhi aaona sir, bohot maza araha tha.. Saind shree happily..

Chotu's m.v: ab toh shree gaya kaam se

Sameer: damn it.. Yeh kia laga rakha hai tum dono ne? ETF ko playground bana diya hai tum dono ne..

sameer brust in anger.,

Sameer: jab dekho mazak masti karte rehte hoo
shree toh hai hi aiesa, ya toh tumhare sath masti karta hai ya phir bichari liza se larta rehta hai..

par chotu tum..tum toh samajhdaar ho na? Khud ko iska bara bhai kehte ho aur iss samjhane ki jagah khud bhi iski shararton mein shamil ho jaate ho? Asked a very angry sameer

Shreetu: sorry sir..

Sameer shook his head in disblelief and left the room...

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to be continued

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recape:
no case was reported
liza was on off
shretu turned ETF Conference Room into playground
sameer scolded them



now read further 😊
PART 2



after pouring his anger out on shretu, sameer left the room angrily


shree made faces and mutters
under his breath in slow voice


'kharoos, akdu, sadu dusht rawan,
hunh har waqt bas ghussa karte
hain mujhe par'


but it was audioble enough for
chotu to hear


and chotu just smiled at his childlike
behavior


shree: hunh mein shararti? Mein?
Mein mastiyaan karta hoon, aur
bichari liza se larta hoon?
hunh bichari my foot...said shree to
chotu grumbling


jabse woh child trafficking case
mein liza ko sir ko bachate hoye
chot lagi, tabse sir liza ki extra care
karne lage hain..he streched word
"extra" a bit too extra


aur liza madam, woh toh ab bas sirf
sir ka hi naam japti rehti hai,
rathore sir yeh rathore sir woh..ab
toh madam ne sir ko "bhai" bulana
bhi shuru kar diya..


aur toh aur ab toh sir roz ussey pick
or drop karne jate hain, hame toh
kabhi lift ke liye pocha bhi nahi..


said shree with a ting of jealousy,
anger and maybe a little hurt


chotu laughed aloud hearing that
and said


chotu:shree rathore sir theek kehte
hain, tu waqi mein ek bacha hai, aur
abhi bhi tu bache jaise hi behave
kar raha hai..


shree opened his mouth as wide as
he could, he
couldn't digest what chotu said


chotu:kia? Ab yeh bichara wala
look dena bund kar, i know you
very well..chotu said closing shree's
opened mouth.,


tu keh raha hai rathore sir ko
hamari fikar nahi hai, woh sirf liza
ki care karte hain..


par tu shayad bhool gaya ke woh
rathore sir hi thay jinhon ne tera
khayal rakha jab toh buri tarha
injured tha..


tere pas raat bhar hospital mein
rahe qk tere parents out of city thy
aur mein mission pe..


shree tried to reason with chotu but
stoped remembring sameer's
pained and concern face when
doctor told him shree won't be able
to work as his right arm was injured
badly..


kuch yaad aya?asked chotu


shree looked aside guiltly


chotu:aur jab mein undercover
mission pe tha tab sir ne meri
family ka khayal rakha aur mera
pending paperwork complete kia..


shree remembers thoes days very
well, sameer too was a little injured
and had a fever, but he didn't let
shree work because of his injuries
and managed everything alone..


chotu:tum hi batao tumne dekha
hai department mein kisi senior ko
joh apne jouniors ki itni care karta
ho? Unke hisse ka kaam karta ho?
asked chotu to shree who was
trying to blink back his tears..


chotu patted shree's back and
wiped his tears


chotu:rahi baat liza ki., toh shree
jab hume chot lagti hai ya hum kisi
case ki wajah se disturb hote hain
tab humare pas hamari family hoti
hai, hume support karne ke liye.,
humara khayal rakhne ke liye..


par liza., he paused for a moment
then speaks


uss bichari ke pas aiesa
koyi nahi joh usse sambhale, uski
care kare, uska dard bante..said
chotu emotionally


isi wajah se sir uska khayal rakhte
hain, ek bhai ki tarha..


shree:haan chotu tu theek kehta
hai..mein waaqi mei ek idiot hoon Itni si baat bhi mujhe samjh nahi
aayi..he said sadly


par iska yeh matlab nahi i'll forgot
that liza is my jaani dushman.. He
said angrily and irritatidly


poor chotu just banged his hand on
his forehead


shree:and rathore sir hamesha
mujhe hi daantte hain, sab work
mujhse karwate hain aur mere
software and gadgets upgradation
ke liye kitna tung karte hain, kitna
plead karta hoon ussy churail ki seva karta hoon tab kahin jaa ke
upgrade milta hai...he said grumpily


"yeh kabhi nahi sudhre ga"
thought chotu and sigh


chotu:acha baba chal kuch khaate
hain bohot bhook lagi hai


shree:abey moote kitna khayega?
tera pait hai ya koowan (well)?abhi
do ghante pehle hi toh khaya tha..


chotu:arey woh toh kab ka hazam
(digest) ho gaya,chal na plz bohot
bhook lagi hai..he pleaded


shree took a deep sigh and said ok


chotu happily hugged or in shriza'
language crushed him tightly


shree:chotu chotu leave me
moote,your crushing me


chotu immediately loose his hold
and saw a badly panting shree


chotu:am sorry yaar, really sorry


shree:kamine kis janam ka badla
nikal raha tha mujhse?kitni zor se
dabaya, haaye poori body ke nut
bolts hil gaye..he said adjusting his
specks and creasing his arms


shree:abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi
hoyi aur meri koyi girlfriend bhi
nahi hai..


agar mujhe kuch ho jata toh apne
mom dad ka ikloota beta hoon,
who would then gave them
happiness of grandchildrens?


aur phir bhabi ko teri harkatoon ki
report ko deta?bol..said shree with
naughty glint in eyes and wicked
smile on lips


chotu:teri bhabi,mujhe tung?ka ka
kia bol raha hai tu? mujhe toh k ku
kuch samajh nahi araha.. he
stammers


shree:hmmm sunday, departmental
store 11:30 ko kisi ko chup chupke
dekhna, kuch yaad aya?


soch raha hoon iss sunday bhabi se
jaa kar milu, ek minute iss se bhi
acha q na bari maa ke sath jaa kar
bhabi se unka tere liye hath
maange..acha idea hai na?
teased shree


chotu:dekh shree tu aisa kuch nahi
karega, meri baat sun shreee..he
screamed as shree dialed his aayi's
number


shree:haan hello bari maa woh,


but he couldn't complete it as chotu
snatched his phone


chotu:haan aayi woh aj hum juldi
ghar aayenge toh ap khana ready
rakhna ok, haan shree bhi sath
mein aaye ga,liza o bhi call karke pooch loonga, nahi sameer sir ka
pata nahi unse poch kar phone


karta hoon..ok aayi bey..he cut the call and leave shree's mouth which


was till now covered with chotu's
palm


aaah... yelled shree as chotu twisted his ear


chotu:bus itna sa aaah, abhi toh aur
bara wala aaah nikle ga tere moun (mouth)
se..

saying that he ran after shree and chased him all over the ETF's building forgeting where they were


all officers and staffs were laughing at there antics


but when they saw sameer, they rush back to their cubicals leaving shretu with their game


sometime back at sameer's cabin


he was reading a file but couldn't concentrat as he was angry, very angry


but shretu wasn't the cause behind his anger, it was his
past which was now again haunting him


he threw the file on table and got up from his seat and
spoke to him self pacing up and fro


sameer:Damn it ek dead end, ek tara behen hi thi joh meri madad kar sakti thi par ab woh umeed bhi khatam


kisi ne arjun ke pohonchne se pehle hi unka murder kar diya

ab kia karun? how will i find her?


hehe frustratedly punch the wall in anger,not caring the pain which shoots up in his already wounded hand


how can he,the pain in his heart was far more grater than that


uch pata nahi chala woh wahan se kahan chakli gayi, kita dhoonda ussey par no use...


he slump down on ground and bury his head is palms and cried his heart out


his body was shaking badly due to sobs and guilt


sameer: i am sorry really very sorry,please forgive me


i am a faliure, i failed you, us..
you were my responsibility and i failed in my responsibility to protect you


i am sorry, i am sorry,i am sorry


he wept saying sorry until his trance was broken by his cell's ringtone


he checked caller's id, it was from liza


a genuine smile broke on his lips seeing name flashing


he quickly wiped his tears, made his voice jovial and pick her call., before he could even say hello, he hears liza's voice which was sounding worried


liza: bhai are you okay? apko kuch hoa toh nahi na?
why aren't you speaking? for GOD sake speak up Damn it
yelled liza


sameer: shhh bacha calm down, i am okay.. why are you sounding so worried? everything okay na?
now it was time for sameer to panic


liza cryingly: bhai i i saw a dream, i saw you were hurt and crying


sameer was shock hearing that, here he was crying and there she sensed it


his grandmother used to say

" zaruri nahi joh rishte khoon se jure hoon sirf wohi hamari takleef aue pareshani mehsoos karien, kabhi kabhi injaan log hame hamare apno se behter samjhte hain"


and sameer had seen this, not once but twise
first was his brother like friend arjun and second is liza


his trace broke by the sound of liza's sobs


he got panic and tried to mae er understands that he is fine


finally liza stopped crying and e took a sig of relief


sameer: waise liza e baat batao why were you sleeping at this odd time? tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na?


liza: jee bhai woh bas subha se friends ke saath masti then shopping so i was feeling a little tired


sameer: okay bacha you tack care of your self, i need to check kahin tumhare speaky sen ne office ko phirse playgrond toh nahi bana dia


liza: phirse matlab?


sameer told her earlier incidents and liza laughed hearing that


liza: aw poor specky sen bichara, bhai q appne ussey itna daanta?


hmm someone is taking a little too much interest in our technical head..said sameer with a wide grin


liza blushed heavilly hearing that and said: bhai aisa kuch nahi hai okay accha ab mein rakhti hoon beylove you take care


sameer: bey apna khayal rakhna an cut the call


he was feeling very light after talking to liza,
he checked time and thought


'hmm kafi dair ho gayi hai, ab shayad hi koi case report ho aur koi pending work bhi nahi hai, i should call it a day"


with that he march out from cabin, he was going to enter in cabin when he heared shree and chotu's convo


he at first was surprise the way shree was talking but when he heared chotu' talk he felt he is the luckiest guy on earth who have this wonderful team


he was going back but stopped in his tracks when he hears shree's comments for liza


and that arosre the naughty and wicked sam inside him,
he recorded shree's convo


sameer's p.o.v: al aayega maza jab ya recordind liza sunegi ang grinned thinking about that


then he heared shree teasing chotu about someone from department store in chotu's locilty


he was surprised to here that,he thinks


"pyaar waaki insan ko kia se kia bana deta hai,jis chotu se criminals darte hain woh khud ek larki se baat kaene se darte hai"


then he saw chotu chasing shree in whole office, he saw them running,teasing,fighting and giglging with a beautiful smile on lips


sameer's p.o.v: kitna lucky hoon mein joh mujhe itni khoobsurat family mili joh har haalat mein mera sath dete hain


musurane ki wajah tum hoo
gungunane ki wajah tum ho
jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piya re

jiyaa jayena jayena jeyena
o re piya re


liza jaisi piyaari behen mili joh hamesha mere chehre pe
muskan laane ki koshish karti rehti hai,
mujhe ajj bhi woh din ache se yaad hai jis din liza ne mujhe bhai kaha.


dil ne dua ki kash yeh waqt yahin tham jaye



o re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
hi sake toh umar bhar tham jaa
jiya jayena jayena jayena
o re piye re



phir mila shree, pagal kahin ka.. har waqt bas masti mazak
lekin jab baat kaam i ho toh he's always alert


dhoop aaye toh chaanv tum lana
khushiyoon ki barish mein
bheeg sang jaana


shree ke roop mei mujhe ek chota bhai mila joh mujhe kitne nick names dete hai, mujhe kharoos adu raawan bulata hai par agar koi aur mujhe bura bole toh uss se lar parta hai
he's always there to stand by my side in thick and thin


dhoop ayye toh, chaanv tum lana
khushiyoon ki barish mein
bheeg sabg jaana

jiyaa jayena jayna jayena
o re piya re


then comes chotu, commondo of ETF
big body with baby's heart
he's the support system for ETF, liza, shree and me
he is always their when you need him


joh mile ussme kaat lenge hum
thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum



he can do anything for his friends, family and country
when i am away, i know he can manage everything well
he thought me the true meaning of responsibility


joh mile ussme kaat lenge hum
thodi ushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
ore piya re



yeh hai meri second family who loves and respects me from bottom of their hearts


he took a deep satisfied sigh and smiles


maa babasa se promise kiya hai tumhe liye bine ghar nahi jaounga and i know jab tak meri team mere sath hai tab tak nothing bad can happen..i promise you i will find you, at any cost


he saves shree from chotu's clutches and called it a day and went to chotu's home for dinner at his request



at the same time
mumbai chhatrapati shivaji international airport


a beautiful young lady walked out from airport and was waiting to load her luggage in taxi when her geze fell on a couple not very distance from her taxi
husband was busy in loading their luggage and wife annoying him


finally husband finished his task and move towards his lovely wife grinning but wife had sense his moves and quickly seated inside taxi


husband: yahan toh bach gayi,ghar chlo phor batata hoon muje tung karne ka natija.. he also took his seat and zoomed out


girl eyes were moistened seening the ove betwwn them
she quicky prayed to Almighty for them


girl: agar uss din apne muje nahi chora hota toh shayed humari bhi ek hoobsurat duniya hoti


she jerked back to world when taxi driver asked: chalien madam?


girl: jee bhayiya


she took her seat and their taxi moved out from the permisses of airport



musurane i wajah tum ho
gungunane ki wajaah tum ho

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piya re

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piye re


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PRECAPE: A CASE AND NEW ENTRY


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Character Sketch






Sameer Damsingh Rathore (Age 27)

ACP Sameer Rathore., A prince by birth but to serve his country he left his luxirious life..
Currently working as Chief at ETF..
Handsome, Intelligent, Sharp minded, Angry young man..
A man of principles., very loyal towards his works and relations.. A gre
at leader.. Skeptical yet a silent support.. He's also reffered as "Rowdey Rathore"..
Loves to uter "Damn it"..
Bestfriend of Arjun.. A true son of soil.. In search of someone
(have a haunting past)





Arjun Suryakanth Rawte (Age 27)

ACP Arjun Rawte.. Not a part of ETF.. He too belongs to a very rich family.. His left his house to fulfill his dream of serving mankind.. No family issues, his dad is proud of him..
Tall, Dark, Handsome, Sharp minded, keen observer, and Brilliant cop
However due to his short-temper, zero-tolerance, i gave a damn to rules, carefree and angry young man nature makes his superiours to mistaken him as a disobedient cop..
His faviourite dialouges are "Samjhe Ya Samjhaoun" and "Kuch Toh Chutt Raha hai"..
A
true son of motherland..
In Love with someone..





Riya Mukherjee (Age 23)

Riya is a Charming, Confident, Passionat, Optimistic, Vivacious, Gorgeous, Adorable, Graceful and Sensitive young lady.. A statistical expert who is swift in calculation.. With her sensitive and friendly demaenour, she wins the hearts and trust of all.. Her obsessions with hygiene makes her a cleanliness freak (she had a horrendous past behind it).. Twinkles in her doe shaped beautiful eyes and dimples on cheeks makes her more adorable
(orphan)





Shreekanth Sen(Age 24)

Cute, Sweet, Adorable, Fun loving, Curly hair with big specks, Gadget freak technical head of ETF.. A great friend.. Bestie of chotu




Liza D'cruz (Age 24)

Liza is a Cute, Sweet, Bubbly, Jovical, Chipry, Gorgeous Young lady.. Fornsic head of ETF..
Bestie of chotu and jaani dushman of speck sen.. (orphan)





Chandrakanth Patil aka Chotu (Age 26)

Sweet, Humble, Funny, Mature, Huge body with soft heart.. Commando and leader of ETF's backup force.. A great guy and a great friend..
Loves his friends and pet Ruby a lot.. A big time foodie.. Very emotional man..





Sakshi Anand (Age 23)

Sakshi is a crime journolist.. She is Beatiful, Friendly, Bold, Chipry, Bubbly, Elegent ,Classy, Charmastic, Trust worthy and a Gorgeous young lady with twinkles in her beautiful eyes.. A big foodie.. She loves her work and tries to give her best.. Beside being passionate about her work, she's a little mischievious too, loves to play pranks on her colluges and friends, espeacially her boss.. Have a past and is in search of someone..
(orphan)





Roshni (Age 24)

Will know about her in further story
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Hey guyz, jaise ke ap sab jatne ho ke Muharram chal rahe hain so isi liye mein forum pe kam ya phir bilcul bhi visit nahi karungi or update bhi 5 ya 6 oct ke baad hi milega
sorry guys try to understand
love you all
bey t.c
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Recap:

shree was angry with sameer
chotu clear up shree's misunderstandings towards sameer
sameer lost in his past and cried over his grief
liza became his strength


please read further😊




PART 3 (a)






shree finished packing and made a call to check ticket and travel arrangement, sameer had told him to go pune tommorrow morning as his help was needed regarding a case


shree cut the call made his made to get a good night sleep, he was about to when his cell rang, he without checking caller i.d cut it but it again rang the very next second,he frustratedly move a hand through his hair and inhale a deep breath to calm his anger and nerves down


not now liza, please... mein ghusse mein mein kuch aisa karna ya kehna nahi chahta jisse mein baad mein kehne ya karne ke liye regrate karoon... whisper shree to an invisible liza looking at the his cell in hand which was continuously ringing


flashes of liza came in front of his eyes, there queries, the useless and base less arguments, their fights...


a smile smile lingerd at his lips when he remember her beautiful smile and twinkles in eyes when he after their every fight gift her chocolates, teddies and flowers


it was his punishment to gift and fulfill her childish demands and he happily used to fulfill her wishes, why? that was one question which his technical mind could never answer only his heart knows why but he never dared to listen to it


shree was smiling remembering their moments but his smile faded when he remember the tears which forms in her eyes and he was the cause of them, he felt like someone crushed his heart remembering her tears stricken face for a split second he thought to attend her call which was still ringing and clear everything out


he was going to press green button but stop his move when her words
rang in his ears, all the bottle up anger came back, he cyt the call through cell on bed and moved out of room, he badly needed to chill down his nerves throbbing temple


he goes towards his terrace, blood freezing cold air touched his face but he didn't seemed to notice it at all, he lean over the the cool metallic frame and place his both hands on it watching the dark pitchy sky which today lake the brightness of stars and moon


he felt like sky was today replicating his heart tonight, he was feeling like something close to him, something very dear to him was snatch away from him, he was feeling a mild pain in his chest, he was feeling like just like the sky his world of heart too was ill-lighten and rayless


but why? why why why? that was the question for which he didn't have any answers...he sighed and walk down


but in his troubled state he failed to notice the figure who was staring at him continuously, she watched him fighting with his inner turmoil, she watched him walk past by her but he wasn't in a state to notice her presence, tears formed in her beautiful eyes thinking that she was the cause of all this mess


she remembered what her aunt had said to her a few years ago


"manhoos kahin ki, jahan jaati hai apni manhoosiyat se subki zindagiyoon mein aag laga deti hai, kalmohi... humph"


sahi kehti thi app aunty, mein waaqi mein manhoos hoon, jahan jati hoon sabki khushiyoon ko meri wajah se girhan lag jata hai, aj bhi meri wajah se shree aur liza ka jhagra hoa, sab meri awjah se...
she fell onto floor broke into sobs
Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago
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updating in 2 hours or so 😊
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thank you all who liked and commented on my story and i am really very sorry i couldn't update earliar, persnol reasons

plz wait some more time, update is coming
Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago
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Wow
Awesome concept
Love it
Cont soon
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