Ariya new story Do Qadam door thay (part 2 updated 22/11) pm late - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you sati di for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Cool Concept! Thanks For Pm! Continuee Soonz!


thanks, its inspired from one of my fav dramas
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeharshu

Great cs dear

Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting for the first update dear
And thanks for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear...

Mind blowing cs...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm


thanks for liking di 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: minamma

Well girl is riya & boy but ofcourse is arjun

Plzz do pm me wen u updt next
Nice cs
Cont soon


umm ho bhi sakta hai aur nahi bhi
shayad wo couple ariya nahi koi aur ho 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetSheru

nice character sketch yaar

waise sakshi ki jagah roshni ki pic
awesome yaar
waiting for update


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pics ka toh pocho hi mat, pic post kahin kar rahi hon aur post hoti kahin aur hai,
sakshi ki pic thek ki toh roshni ki ghayab, roshni ki thek ki toh sam ki ghayab aur ab phir roshni ki ghayab ho gayi 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey any 1 want update?
Update ready hai, so comment and get it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Areesha566

hey any 1 want update?
Update ready hai, so comment and get it
SYS

ye bhi koi puch ne ki baat hai kya 😡 😡 😡
we have been waiting for update so long 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter One


ETF Headquaters
Time 10:30



There hasn't been a case reported yea and luckily no paperwork was pendin

Sameer was out for some work so everyone was relaxing and enjoying

liza was on leave and shree was on his mission to

"Munch down Chotu's brian" 😆 😆

shree: Chotu this new software and gadget is just amazing,
agar hum isse use karienge toh...

chotu..? chotu? tu sun raha hai na mein kia keh raha hoon?

Chotu: hmmm..

Shree: Chotu kahan khoya hoa hai?
Chotuuu...

shree tried to bring chotu out of his dreamland..

chotu still in dreamy mode, hugged or we can say cruched shree..

shree try to free him self from chotu's grip but failed, tired shree finally yelled fearly: Rathore sir...

A scared chotu comes back to reality

Chotu fearly: Haan., wa what?

Good morning sir
Good afternoon sir
Good night sir
Jai hind sir...

chotu saluted and look here and there only to find no one,
he hears loud laughs which belongs to shree..

shree controling his laugh say's: Hahaha look at your self chotu, tu kitna dar gaya..

Chotu yelled angrily: Shreee, tu toh gaya

he opend his hair.,

Shree: uri baba, nahi chotu sun na please, nahi yaar maaf karde please and started to run

chotu ran behind him..

they were running, chasing, teasing and laughing with eachother when suddenly shree banged with someone, his specks fell on floor..

chotu saw the person and gulps in fear..

Shree: uff koun hai yaar? Kitni zor se laga pata hai? Oyiii

he didn't saw the person as he was busy in searching his specks..

chotu tries to speak but recive a glare from the person and he shuts his mouth,

shree was still busy finding his specks when that person bend down, picks up his specks and gave it to shree..


Shree: thanks yaar, but tumhe dekh ke chalna chaye tha na, kitna zor se laga pata hai?

aaah.. Aiesa laga jaise kisi brick wall se takra gaya...(lo ulta choor kotwal ko dante 😆 😆 )

shree speaks adjusting his specks.,

Person: awww tumhe zor se lage? Goud mein utha ke pyaar karoun? Tumhari seva karun?
hmmm..

horrified shree listening to voice looked up and seeing the person infront, he was surely about to faint..

thier stands thier chiefThe Great Rowdy Rathore with his hands on hips and fury in eyes

Sameer: kia hoa shree, chup q ho gaye? bolo.. Bolo na..

aur tum chotu, kia hoa tumhe? Ruk q gaye, please continue your race

Chotu in feeble voice: no sir

Sameer: no no i insist please continue your game, kitna maza aa raha tha 2 qaabil ETF officers ko bachon ki tarhan khelte dekhne mein

saind sameer with clenched jaws

really sir?? Said an amused shree happily..

chotu was giving him Are you mad?

Q bhooke sher ko aur ghussa dila raha hai?
wala look..

Sameer: hmmm really..

Shree: oh Thank GOD..
Ap bhi aaona sir, bohot maza araha tha.. Saind shree happily..

Chotu's m.v: ab toh shree gaya kaam se

Sameer: damn it.. Yeh kia laga rakha hai tum dono ne? ETF ko playground bana diya hai tum dono ne..

sameer brust in anger.,

Sameer: jab dekho mazak masti karte rehte hoo
shree toh hai hi aiesa, ya toh tumhare sath masti karta hai ya phir bichari liza se larta rehta hai..

par chotu tum..tum toh samajhdaar ho na? Khud ko iska bara bhai kehte ho aur iss samjhane ki jagah khud bhi iski shararton mein shamil ho jaate ho? Asked a very angry sameer

Shreetu: sorry sir..

Sameer shook his head in disblelief and left the room...

~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~

to be continued

p.s. Please like and comment, silent readerz, koi ni yaar.. I your like button isn't working then you can just comment, i am not asking for a long comment
only a good, nice, like it ya 1 word bhi chalega
😃

p.p.s. Don't copy this story to any site, its only for Arjun Forum
thank you

regard Areesha 😊

p.p.p.s. Scroll down for note 😊
Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guyz, jaise ke ap sab jatne ho ke Muharram chal rahe hain so isi liye mein forum pe kam ya phir bilcul bhi visit nahi karungi or update bhi 5 ya 6 oct ke baad hi milega
sorry guys try to understand
love you all
bey t.c
regards Areesha

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