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VirMan505

@VirMan505

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

sorry everyone the prologue accidently got posted twice please comment and like this one

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VirMan505

@VirMan505

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

character sketch p 1

prologue p 2

Chapter 1 p 4

Chapter 2 p 5

Chapter 3 p 6

Chapter 4 p 6

Chapter 5 p 7

Chapter 6 p 9

Chapter 7 p 9

Chapter 8a p 10

Chapter 8b p 11

Chapter 8c p 12

Chapter 8d p 13

Chapter 9 p 14

Chapter 10 p 15

Chapter 11 p 16

Chapter 12 p 17

Chapter 13 p 17

Chapter 14 p 18

Chapter 15 p 19

Chapter 16 p 20

chapter 17 p 21

Chapter 18a p 22

Chapter 18b p 23

Chapter 18c p 24

Chapter 18d p 26

Chapter 18e p 27

Chapter 19 p 28

Chapter 20 p 29

Chapter 21 p 31

Chapter 22 p 33

Chapter 23 p 34

Chapter 24 p 35

Edited by VirMan505 - 10 years ago

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

it was beautiful prologue
riya & her mom convo was cute
talking abt stars asked so much question 😆 😆
riya's mom was surprise that she asked so much question & that also right point 🤣 🤣
she choose 1 star & gave name also angle 😃 😃
she told abt it to her dad also
poor riya felt lonely without any bro-sis 😭 😭
continue soon

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice prologue what name she
Give star update soon

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Updt soon dear
eagerly waiting to read

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VirMan505

@VirMan505

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

the first chapter will be posted on diwali

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Beautiful prologue and nice CS

waiting for update

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whitelily

@whitelily

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

interesting start 👍🏼

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

beautiful start
riyu is so cute
lovely bonding between her n her parents
lol riya's mom thinks she is asking too much quests that too to the point
so the star is also listening to her
awesome... cont soon