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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi i am mohini's elder sister and this is my ff so enjoy
Ariya , Samesha, Shriza, Chotu and his 11:30 wali and Sakshi with mr right FF
AN ANGEL IN DISGUISE

CHARACTER SKETCH:

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte-an arrogant man, full of attitude, has a big ego and does not think twice before doing something or saying whether in personal and professional life (was a very nice person,always smiling and happy person was best friend of Sameer but after meeting Roshni he changed for worse)<I will tell the past later>

He treats Sameer just as a colleage and chief now but secretly wishes to rekindle his relationship with him but ego problem, Age 26

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathor-Chief of ETF, very strict just like Arjun, has also attitude problem but very nice to his colleagues (very rarely) unlike Arjun and does not trust people easily like before (after Roshni) <they broke their friendship 6years ago (after Arjun's entry a month ago,he became more strict)Age 26

Riya Mukherjee-age 25, a very nice girl, always smiling lives her life fully +she is a little sensitive, best friends with Shree (since childhood),Chotu,Ayesha and Liza(recently) and lives with Shree and Chotu because she does not have any family in Mumbai <her mom and dad are not alive,she was only 10 when they died in a car accident,no one in the ETF knows except for Shree> a research specialist, knows martial-arts,sometimes goes undercover,trying to learn how to shoot,she has only 2 problems<she can not hear anything bad about her parents and she does not like when people underestimate her


Ayesha Kapoor-Age 25, an undercover agent and ammunition expert,comes from a wealthy family(only child), but she wanted to do something for her nation after her graduation,so she joined the Police force,her dadu and nanu supported her decision but not her dad <he wanted her to help him in the business,but she wanted to be like her dadu(ex commissior of lucknow)and nanu(ex DCP of Delhi) >her mom only wants her happiness.After a showdown with her father she went to Delhi with her nanu and nani to become a police officer and later she was appointed in ETF<after the Nadia episode>Now best friend with Shree,Chotu,Liza and Riya.


Shreekant Sen-Age 24,childhood friend of Riya
best friend with Chotu,Ayesha and Liza (always fighting with each other without any good reason since college) knows everything about Riya and treats her like his elder sister,his family live in Calcutta <how he met Riya and became friends will be told later >he is a technical expert,always busy with gadgets and stuff,he is a very sweet guy cares for his friends, he met Chotu after joining ETF, Riya joined a few months later and became friends with them and later Ayesha and Liza except for the ACP's


Chandrakant Patil- a commando and an encounter specialist,they say looks are deceiving this sentence was made for him that's what Riya and Shree say,because eventough he is very tall and has very big muscles he is very sensitive, sweet and caring, loves Riya,Ayesha and Liza as his sisters
Age 26,loves his 11:30 wali <his dad worked as clerk in a minister office and mom supplied tiffenboxes for schools,while he worked parttime in a pizza store to pay for his studies.After graduation he joined the police force and made his parents proud> his parents live in Delhi,he shares an apartment with Shree and Riya,only weakness FOOD mostly when it is made by Riya or his mom, he is very strict when it comes to criminals. everyone calls him Chotu.

Liza D'Cruz-age 24,forensic expert,best friend with Riya,Ayesha,Chotu and Shree (they have been fighting without any specific reason since college and are still doing it) has friends but not very close ones,her parents are both doctors,live in Dehradun and are very supportive with her choice of profession,she has only one close friend

<When she first met Shree they began to fight with each other because he accidently spilled a chemical potion on her favorite dress.he did not wanted to say sorry because she was the one that was not looking where she was going and so began a Tom-Jerry relationship>When she came in ETF she made real friends because she knew she can trust them with her life even Shree


Roshni Mehta-will tell later(feel free to imagine any actress as Roshni)

Sikander-will tell later

Mr Sameer Mukherjee-father of Riya

Mrs Meenakshi Mukherjee-mother of Riya

11:30wali:later in the story

Commisioner Coelho

And now for the Angel:?

SAKSHI- Age?

More characters will be added as the story continues

Notes:
1.Everyone in ETF are scared for Arjun and Sameer because of their attitude sometimes even Ayesha gets scared

2.Riya her parents are very important in this ff

3.I will tell about SamJun past and their parents as the story will progress

4.Everyone in this ff are the same people as in the serial

5.Riya is a very innocent girl(since childhood) and does not cry without a reason and Shree knows that,only him

6.Riya and Sakshi will share a very deep bond

7.Noone in the ETF has fallen in love yet except for Chotu

8.I only revealed some of their past,they will be revealed as the story progress

9*.As for Sakshi you will know later*

10.How this ff wil turn out you will have to wait'

SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character Sketch seems interesting!
just tell me is Roshni going to be a negative character here?
n do continu the story soon!
waiting to read it!
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AWWSSMEEE CS !!!!!!
reaaallly interesting!!!!
con.sooon...
plz PM me!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice cs interting waiting what hsppen
Between 2 freind because roshini
And what part sakshi and riya play
In this story update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please make it arakshi please
Awesome cs cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry ,eventhough i am also an arakshi fan but first i am ariya fan so really sorry but not to worry sakshi will surely get someone who knows maybe hotter than arjun :)
there is a reason why riya and sakshi will share a deep bond you will just have to wait and read :)

roshni a friendship breaker or more you will find out in the past of samjun


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Originally posted by: VirMan505

sorry ,eventhough i am also an arakshi fan but first i am ariya fan so really sorry but not to worry sakshi will surely get someone who knows maybe hotter than arjun :)

Hmm sad for this 😭If u write something where Sakshi along with Arjun please
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Superb cs dear
all the characters are differently shown
eagerly waiting to read more
please continue soon
nd pm me when you update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yepee another ariya story 🥳 🥳
love u for updating on ariya 🤗 🤗
interesting concept
hope u will continue soon
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Prologue

A girl is standing with her mom on the terrace waiting for her dad to come home. She asked her mom: Ma, how come there are so many stars in the sky?

Her mom was startled and asked: Riyu, yeh tu kyun pooch rahi hain(why are you asking this?)

R:Ma,school mein teacher ne ek storybook read kiya tha wo stars ke bare mein tha,Twinkle Twinkle little star.It was so nice
(in school teacher read a storybook to us about stars) so tell na ma.

M(smiling at her innocent daughter): wo storybook nahi tha wo nursery rhyme tha(it was not a storybook it was a nursery rhyme)

R:o Yes lekin aap ne abhi bhi nahi bataya ki itne saare taarein kyun hain(But you did not tell me why there are so many stars)

M:Riyu the stars are guardian angels woh hamesha protect karte aur hamare care karte hain.(they protect and care for us)

R:Why are they sparkling and how come we do not pray for them because hum bhi bhagwan ki pooja karte hain who bhi toh hamari care aur protect karte hain na?(we also pray to god,he also does the same right)

M(thinking baap re Riyu itne sawaal poochti hain aur who bhi to the point)(so many questions and that to the point): beta,we pray to god for good health and wealth and happiness, We share everything to god as he is our friend, lekin(but)he has so many friends that he can not keep count so that's way he made stars to help him in this and they sparkle because they smile when their friends are happy, only if they are good people.

R:sachi(Really)[excited]

M:muchi(yes really)smilingly

R:so which one is my friend?
M:which one do you want?

R:I want a star who is a girl(very sad)

M: why?(still knowing why but can not resist from asking)

R: I want a sister who can be my best friend,so I can share everything with her(very excited)
M:achcha,aur main aur tere baba(really and me and your dad)

R: do not worry ma.i still love you and baba,You and baba are my first friend(smilingly)

M: (getting very emotional)o I love you to

R: (seeing her mom getting emotional,tries to change the topic)Ma can I choose now?

M: Ok which one?
R: hm that one(showing the tiniest star)it's so cute hai na (right) [enthusiastic]

M: bilkul tumhari tara(just like you)

R: aur name ho ga Angel{her name will Angel}

M: name soch ke rakha tha kya (you already thought a name)
R: o ho Ma wo petname hai,baad mein soch ke batawngi(it is a petname,I will think later for a good name)
M: (trying to hold her laugh) acha teekh hai dekho tumhare baba bhi aagey{ok,look your baba has come}

R:Yay baba came I will tell him about Angel [running down to go to her baba]
M: Riyu dheere there are stairs{Slowly}pehle baba ko fresh to hone do aur khana bhi khane do {let him go to fresh himself and eat dinner}

R: sorry I forgot{smiling sweetly}

After dinner and telling her baba everything he just smiled and said:did you already thought about the name?

R: hmmm yes I got it{very excited}
B+M:kya(what)
R: name aur kya{and what else}(pouting)

B+M:tell na

R: later,I feel sleepy,Good night(goes to her room)

B: Good night(turning to his wife),bilkul tumhari tara hai(she is just like you)

M: acha ab meri galti hai (it is my fault now right){angrily},fine you sleep on the sofa tonight and for coming 2 weeks and goes to her room.

B: Arre I was just joking(going after her to patofy her)

After 2 hours Riyu woke up and went to the terrace and stood there and said to the star:

Angel,I wanted to give this name to my sister
but now I am going to give you this name
Not knowing more than 2 persons are listening

Her parents are really shocked that she took it seriously and are silently crying because they didn't know how much she was lonely.She continued and said:tumhara naam hoga(your name will be)...

After that she went to sleep,if she had looked back she would have seen her parents crying and smiling at the same time.As for her Angel it looked as if it was smiling(sparkling)more.


Edited by VirMan505 - 10 years ago

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