Case SS - Devil Returns Part 12 pg 34 30/07/15

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

awesome start...
Shivani is here to take ETF's help to catch sikandar who is the head in carrying al ths business abroad...
Shivani knows arjun..
Rathod ka pachka sabke samne...kiske bure din a gye..hehe..
Btw shivani ki adhi bat to sach h..propose to aisha ne kia tha..ab darake dhamkake ya nehi..ye to ap hi jano..
Batch me danger log..lol...

m eager to read ds..updt soon
Title - Dimag me nhi a rha..wl tell u l8r

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome !

loved it

Shivani to solve a case with ETF

that's really interesting!

Shivani ne Rathod ki band baja di puri team ke samne..hehe..

Saare dangerous category wale..haha!!

Sikander..

this seems really really interesting!

Title.. Goldi di n Pihu's suggestion is good! koi bhi choose kijiye!

Thankx for pm

do continu soon

eagerly waiting to read it further!

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

awesome start...

so the case extends to capturing sikander..who is working from outisde...
but govt ki bhi help chahiye na?? ya fir siki khud chal ke ayega??

jo bhi ho..its gonna be interesting..will wait..

do continue soon..

PS title i am not yet sure ofthe track of the story..but just a guess..AAKRI BAZI

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awsm start meri jaan... 😊
it seems.more intrestng.
Hmmm...title..."MISSION SIKANDER"
Or..."KAHANI ABHI BAKI HAI'
Or "NW IT's D END OF CRIME WORLD"...I mean as sikander crime world don hai story mein to isliye...hope u understNd wt I meant... 😛

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

it's a very intriguing start dear...
two interconnected cases solved by two sherniyaan...aab do ek saath... saath main ETF wala bonus...upar se Sikander... cheery on the top...waaah!! pura cake kha jaane ko mann karta hain.

case is really interesting, and forArjun...it's personal too... matlab aage aur vi mazaa aayega...
I'm not good with title or names...kuch vi rakhlo...agar iska naam 'Jaal..the spiders trap' vi rakhdoge toh vi main padungi... haan feedback thora late aayega...itna guarantee main de sakti hoon.

do continue... tab tak main bazaar se popcorn aur coke le aati hoon.

thanks for pm.